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Oh lawd.
I see dirty, dirty things in the near future.
Oh boy...
First things first, glad to see Star went through with his plan to show Luna how much ponies enjoyed her night. I found it to be a pretty creative date and when she started to cry i won't lie I started to have EPIC FEELS .
Overall I'm glad to see that their relationship seemed to make some relevant progress this chapter and I was wondering what the cliffhanger/challenge awaiting Star at the end would be. Lo and behold a wild Scootaloo appears .
I'm guessing I'm looking forward to what Luna has in store for Star tomorrow at the garden than he is.
Great chapter! Your showing great relationship development between Star and Luna. Also man is he getting bold!
WHAT?! I WAS EXPECTING THEM TO GET IT ON!!!
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It was the Rum
StarStep is still a young pony. He has a little fire in his belly that make him impulsive. At least Luna is fairly understanding...to a point. She does remind him occasionally to slow down through her pranks/punishments.
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Eeyup Hold onto your hats. Mature chapter incoming.
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Haha. Eenope. Sorry. Luna is much more proper than that. Scoots on the other hoof...
Uh oh..............wait.............Do i sense a threesome soon?
happy luna ,woona is happy happy happy luna is happy
Started reading this a couple days ago, and I have to admit it's one of the better romantic series on this site.
The characters all seem to have well developed personalities, and their plot is enjoyable... I mean the story plot is enjoyable... STOP WITH THE ACCUSING LOOKS!!!
But yeah, keep up the good work.
All I have to say.
Well why would you put cliffhangers you'll have to make it up to us next chapter
"Do you buking love the night?" Oh my God that was awesome to the extreme, best part and I see something trollish on the horizont.
SIR YOU ARE A MASTER OF SUSPENSE!!! When can we expect the next chapter?
I am at the point where I would sell my family into slavery to see the next chapter.
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You could always donate to the 'feed the writer' foundation. I have a paypal account, but I have no idea how to set it up for donations.
its nice to see a light hearted chapter after a few really upsetting ones. (two of them stressed me to the point where i lost a LOT of sleep. but that's due to how much depth you have given the characters.)
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While I'm glad to see my story has touched you I have to warn you that some heavy chapters are coming. I do try to keep the ups and downs staggered out, so I don't drown you ponies in too much sweet or bitter.
I am curious which chapters effected you the most.
981356 the ones right after the gryphon incident, the one right after the ponyville arc, and the the one that ended with steelhoof's offer.(the later less so than the first two)
This was enchanting. I had beautiful music playing in my head the entire chapter, especially the *sniff* slow dance!
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Beautiful music? I...I suppose...The band was called Winged Thunderheads. Something along the lines of:
Seven Kingdoms
Best. Chapter. Ever. Warm fuzzy feeling and goofy smile achieved. My hunger for moar only increases with every chapter.
The only thing i have to say is I can't wait for the next chapter. I always look forward to seeing the email that says "To Love the Moon has Updated!" I always drop everything i'm doing and flip a few tables...as per my earlier comment... This and one another story are ones that have actually touched me...not in that way. I love it. Keep it up!
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Awww, you're just saying that cause Scoots is back
975675 You're right, there is a huge amount in there, sadly many miss a lot of it. I would have written a couple of my own based on Luna if I could write well. I'm much better at analysis
I have almost no idea what to expect in the next chapter... That's one very open-ended cliffhanger. Oh Luna, you and your predictably unpredictable ways
Out of all the romance fics I've read thus far.. I would vote this one the most adorable out of all of them.
While the romance is lacking in the classical forms of a approach, such as 'wine and dine'... I also see that
the method you are approaching the romance with is more along the lines of what you would see with commoners.
I mean after all, not everyone can afford or prefer to not used the more refined tactics.
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This is true. Star is a 'commoner' and it's part of his charm. Luna may still be shaking off old ways of doing things, but she's always been a bit of a prankster, so his unorthodox approach amuses her greatly. She has no need for pretty trinkets or high-priced dinners. Besides, I'm sure you'll agree that his 'surprise' was more grand than any physical gift he could give her.
I can only imagine through her life-time, there have been many suitors vying for her attentions only for greed or power-lust.
I imagine, if I wrote a story about Celestia dating, it would be much more traditional.
I shall not lie: This is one of my favorite chapters so far. Keep up the awesome work!!!!
Star stepped closer, resting his chest to hers, his neck curling around so his chin rested at the back of her neck.. She mimicked as best she could, as a slightly larger pony. Necks entwined as it was,t hey
THIS BUGS ME
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Edited. It wasn't that big of a mistake. I mean, it's not like I've been calling Luna the wrong name this whole time....wait...
1000778 wow, i think i just lolled harder than i have in a LOOOONG time
I kind of imagined StarStep dancing like Commander Shepard in Mass Effect 2 at the bar, music and all
WORDS. WE SHALL HATH THINE WORDS BE SHARED WITH THE AUDIENCE. Or not. Thats fine, too.
“Oh, mimes, amusement parks and accordions.” Is the funniest line so far. I am loving this story.
Excellent chapter that makes Luna involved in the modern life.
GJ!
Er.. Scootaloo.. Bless you.
Best story of all time.
I hate you for one reason. YOU ALWAYS LEAVE IT AT CLIFFHANGERS and then my life gets in the way and i have to wait to finish another AMAZING chapter your story is terrific and i love every single tiny bit of it. i praise you as a master of the writing craft!
Scoots + Luna + private conversation = X
X = RBb to the billionth power.
R = Real
B = Bucking
b = Bad
"Her date grinned up at her," Ah, lesbians, now we're getting somewhere.
...........................Nice use of his nickname had to read that sentence four times because I first thought it was a mistake but then I a got it.
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“And preferences, Dear Luna?”
I think you mean 'Any'
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I'm not sure I understand what you mean.
“SssssssssttttttttAAAAAARRRRRR!” BLAM
im sorry but i cant be the only one who immidiately thought of nemesis at this part haha
luna and star walkig home from a club and out of nowhere are attacked bye a giant zombie bioweapon wielding a minigun and rocket launcher cant say thats too far off from what resident evil 3 is like
2111728 now im thinking of Nemesis with wings WINGS
Just re-reading the story from scratch, the whole club scene is still my favorite. It's just so... perfect.
There are few writers who describe the chaos of a club so well and you, good sir, are one of those lucky few. Bravo. Just...bravo.
very well done, I love this ^^ quite a wonderful story. <3 I would check off the typos and misspells and when you used 'the' twice...but, eh...I'm tired...I'll go into grammar Nazi spell checker mode later xD
1585745 Then that means that Scoots+Luna/bad = Real Bucking-Private conversation. Yay Algebra!