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So now I'm starting to wonder what's gonna happen with Sweetie Belle, she's working in the older part of Canterlot, she hasn't been keeping up Scootaloo or Apple Bloom, still I'm looking forward to where this is going, I sense things are about to get much more complicated and that's even before Star gets back to Canterlot.
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Oh, your pony senses are correct. Glad you've been the enjoying the story thus far. I'm surprised you didn't have anything to say about 11-13.
This is fantastic, I simply love everything about the concerns of the whole Goldwing incident. I'm just tingling with excitement of how Star's situation shall develop. Also nice little pony design you have there as your avatar. Looks pretty sweet but I still prefer the one on facebook, As you can see my character Castle Tsar as mine.(self absorbed rambling on my part)
Anywho, You are doing a splendid job with you plot so far. I look forward to your future chapters with great suspense in mind.
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Well I normally only comment if I feel I have something relevant to say and the only thing I have to say about chapter 13 is this:
My reaction throughout the ch: 'Aww there you go Star, glad to see you're not doing anything stupid'
*Notices Starstep about to do something stupid*
'Wait no man don't fall for it, it's a trap, no man nooooooooooooo!'
'Ah hell, freaking Starstep now Luna won't court you for another half a dozen chapters or more'
*Facepalms*
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Haha. "ITS A TRAP!"
I know, it's a little painful to watch him flounder about. But if he didn't make these mistakes, it'd just be another 'Mary-Sue' character who wins the heart of the Princess without trying. Besides, this incident has forced Luna to reflect on how she's treating him.
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Yea, but still he was doing so well but I guess you're right. TBH I was glad Celestia kind of gave it to Luna after the whole thing, I did feel she was getting away with a lot, but you answered my concerns about that. Now I just need to see where this new Apple Bloom route goes, in addition to Scootaloo's unresolved situation, and Sweetie Belle's situation (as long as she's not turned into a prostitute I'll be fine). Also are we gonna see more Light Hoof, Sherry, and Peach Blossom I think it was?
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Oh yes, no worries about more Lighthoof/Sherry/Peach/etc. When the story moves back to Canterlot, they'll retake the stage. AB/Scoot/Sweetie will be dealt with as the story goes along. Relationships are pretty complex in a society so open with each other. Because of his school friendships with the CMC, it adds another level of underlying feelings. If it's romantic or not is another matter.
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Cool I'm definitely looking forward to it, I find the poly amorous fics to be very interesting so this has been a great read, (still cannot wait for Sweetie Belle, she's my favorite CMC, I just hope the poor girl hasn't gotten herself into too much trouble)
It's good to see some of Luna's motivation for her pranks/lessons revealed, it makes her character feel more well rounded.
Poor Celestia 1000 years without a consort strikes me as a long time even for someone who is immortal. Although it could explain her motherly attitude to everyone, she's probably been sublimating her romantic desires into motherly affection, and a strong mentor relationship such as the one she has with Twilight can go someway towards filling the void in her heart.
Starstep better pull something amazing out of his ass if he wants to get Woona back OAN ts1.mm.bing.net/th?id=I.4708255623349172&pid=15.1&W=160&H=153
Hey any chance of you doing a Goldwing fic after this one is done. I really like the concept of that story.
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time for me to comment:
this story is feaking ADORABLE. good to see another clopfic following the model of " romance reports" ( though IS this a clopfic? i mean there are graphic sex scenes in it but the story as a whole hardly centers on the porn) you are doing it right when I am audibly Dawwwing. Also im Looking forward to the Cherilee sex scene oh and too for some reason.
alao has always been my favorite ship. good to see it here.
I don't know why I like this story so much... i guess because it feels so emotionally real. which is quite an achievement for a story featuring magical talking cartoon horses banging each other.
good job. keep it up.
I honestly don't want him to go back to Luna. She was acting like a mare in heat.
3448958 In heat. Would read.
3822169 have you read "Diaries of a Madman"?
Luna + Heat = Very, VERY bad.
*shudder*
4235249 Yeah, I had to deliberately separate parts of Diaries from my headcanon. Too traumatizing otherwise.
4364334 please don't remind me. seriously I think I pulled a Dumbledore and put those memories somewhere else.
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I stopped reading it because Nav was being too much of a cocksucker to fucking everyone.
I'm not sure who to be more upset with... Starstep or Luna... at the same rate I'm not sure who to be more sad for...
Something in the way they act make me hate both Princesses. Maybe it's how they try to teach lessons and act wise, but then turn around and do exactly what they're telling him not to. They're *really* insufferably condescending, too.