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You do realise you accidentally named the latest chapter "chatper 11"?
As in you unintentionally switched the 't' and the 'p' in the word 'chapter'?
you can feel the love in this chapter.
and this is a vary interesting twist at the end.
Shining is going to stomp Tim flat.
Welll this is gonna get akward fast.
Wow so that type of love is legal in Equestria. So does that mean Applejack and Big Mac are married as well?
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That's clearly Cadence; he just thought that she was Twilight
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That's Cadance, not Twilight.
I'm holding out to believing the ending was a prank, that, or Tim is like a love beacon considering how many ladies love him
Wait.... What?
Moonlit's Journey
Story idea from Moon Shadow
Nov 30th, 2014
My best friend has been gender swapped
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Actually I don't know. I can see the two of them, shining and Cadance, making a big joke out of it.
well this will be fun to see the next chapter.
Either he sleep-walked, or Cadance is tying something.
And when is Twilight going to make a move?
Could not remember that when my grade for Physics class depended on it; Still cannot remember it to this very day.
Depends on what measurement system you use.
Quiet?
That feels like she is just repeating what he just said.
himself
Also, I have a bad feeling about what is going to happen in the next chapter.
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Yeah, Shining may be many things, childish, protective, and dutiful, but he isn't really the jealous douche type.
Shining Armor is best troll.
Twilight, you need more than Ohm's Law to derive the human unit of electrical potential. A Volt is a Joule per Coulomb. A Joule is a kilogram • meter^2 / second^2. The meter and the kilogram are essentially arbitrary, but we can maybe assume they use an identical system on the other side of the mirror and Twi can get hold of a meter stick and a standard kilogram. We'll assume day length is the same (barring the intervention of the local demigod's little sister), so seconds are easy. Then the Coulomb is a somewhat arbitrary number of electron charges (though related to the Planck constant, so you could maybe derive it from the kilogram and the mass of a proton, I'm not sure.). Am I thinking too much about My Little Pony fanfiction again? I think that I'm thinking too much about My Little Pony fanfiction again.
And than, Tim ask back. "What the buck are your wife doing on my bed!?"
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would they do that??
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The Moon Shadow here is from my friend Phenrys' story, Irony's Tale. She's also in my Dust on the Wind.
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You got beat on that one, Moon Shadow is a legit G2 pony.
Tim cannot win. Either it's about Shining's wife, or his little sister.
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fixed it.
And made sure to add in the credit to my editor as well.
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Don't worry, you aren't the only one to overthink FIM... I could have really gotten into the weeds when it comes to explaining electrical theory (being a journeyman electrician myself, it's right in the wheelhouse), but it wouldn't be the first time I've had to pare down something exceedingly complex to laymans terms. And I have to give credit to my pre-readers and editors, because without their input, I would have bogged the story down.
>. The voltage switches between positive and negative sixty times per second back home.
Should be
> The voltage switches in a sinusoidal waveform between positive and negative sixty times per second back home.
Otherwise Twilight will hit the poor adapter with a square wave which is rather hard on electronics.
this has taken a intresting turn
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8401611Simple Prank.
I root for Twilight's eventual joining of Tim's herd.
Which is what's going to happen, or I'll spaz.
Tim seems to have no shortage of suitors
Well, Galileah was as forward as she could have been without getting outright blunt about it, at least verbally. I wonder if she knows he's already in a relationship.
That dream, though... survivor's guilt is a bitch. The dreams won't abate as quickly, but at least he knows that there's always someone to talk to him about it.
Poor Twi though, she feels responsible for something she had in no way, shape or form to predict. Understandable, considering what the consequences were, but this is a situation where it's not really anyone's fault - just everything coincided into what happened.
How the hell did Tim appear in Cadance's bed, however?
So, Shining's going into a rage mode. I wonder how he'll react if he finds out magic does not work exactly as he thinks should on Tim.
This is going to be so much fun!
Seriously though, Tim went to sleep in a guest bedroom in Twi's place and woke up next to Cadance. Spontaneous teleports?
Really looking forward to that explanation!
I am embarrassed to say that it took me a while to realize who they were lol wtf happened in the span of going to the site and heading to the castle?
Does Tim know about how energy is generated in a triphasic way? If so he could help Twilight big time.
Speaking of the book horse, it's about time she starts being honest with her interests and either starts proper courtship or bugs out. Considering her research into getting him home, she better mare up and work into getting some naked monkey action or she's going to go crazy.
Oh, and love the story, gonna follow it now
what a twist!
Nice one. Still i wonder if North Point will have more scenes since she is joining the herd. I feel she just apeared and wish she had more development like Cayance and Citrus like how she met tim.
I like the story but that ending, ugh... He goes to sleep in bed alone, has a nightmare, fine. Then wakes up snuggled up with Cadance and Shining Armor blunders in right when they wake up? There's been no build up, no foreshadowing, nothing.
What are both of them doing in Twilight's castle? Does Cadance have a habit of surprise snuggling people? Or does she have a habit of snuggling with sleepwalkers?
I am glad to hear North Point has accepted the invitation to join the herd. She's a cutie and I get the sense that she's felt "out-of-place" for sometime. And to the stallion who said no? Pfff! His loss! This was a fantastic update. Deep stuff man. I feel bad for Twilight and I kinda hope she'll admit her feelings before it's too late. I wouldn't mind seeing her join the herd though Citrus remains lead mare though.
I cant help but think this is what is going on in tim's mind right now!
Umm, WHAT?! Did Twilight somehow visit his world at some point I don't know about, or is she talking about the mirror world of EQG? If it's the EQG world, then do you have it set in Canada or something? You never mentioned it being THAT similar to Earth that it had the same countries and currency.
I'm sorry, this bit confused the hell outta me...
I know there's a joke in there. You just gotta open the can of duh! Get it? Canada. can-of-duh.......
I'll sit in the corner.
Tim is beginning to get a little annoying in his obtuseness. What kind of portal would grab him and the engine without also grabbing a large piece of wing, part of the cargo deck, and a dozen tons of fuel? He has a portal to a earth, and yet he doesn't ask for things from there? He's a mechanic. So go buy some old engines, bring them back, and uplift Equestria's tech level. He's supposed to be an ambassador, yet he's hardly acting the part.
He has experience and knowledge that is unique in his world, but bit the most productive thing he has done so far is clean a sotty gas valve. The herd thing is fun, but you can only read "Stallions suck in bed, but humans are awesome" so many times.
It may be unfair to complain about a slice if life story like this, but on the other hand, why make so many lose threads only to leave them dangling?
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The portal was only open for a few fractions of a second, and was created by Rainbow Dash doing a Sonic Rainboom. His influence will expand slowly, I have been discussing with my editor and pre-readers the consequence of the tech that's made it into Equestria with him. More will happen.
For the second 'yourself', I would use 'as well.' It's a bit jarring when I read it like that.
stupid Shining...
It took me way too long to realize who that was. I reread it and the description of Shining Armor multiple times before realizing it was them.
As an EE, I can appreciate the specifics here.
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This is a bit of a necro post, but I think he was referring to Equestria Girls universe when he said "a earth."
Although his logic isn't exactly without fault. What would have stopped Twilight from doing that same thing before if a technological leap was something they were interested in? It's one thing to be curious about a technology. Its another thing to want it for materialistic gains.
How does Tim prevent mishaps with the mirror again? I'm not sure the transformation is something he cares to repeat. There's a lot of questions here that'd have unsatisfying answers if Tim were to start dumping technology in Equestria.
Crying, again.
Ugh.
Hey, someone understands RMS voltage! That's nice.
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Oh no, FEELINGS. You do know people have them?
Princess Cadence!! But what the buck is shining and her doing at twis castle.....and why did feel the need to get into tims bed?
I think the little Griffin may be joining the herd *cliks tongue* tim you sly dog you lol
I am staring to enjoy this story and i'm getting used to Tim but i have one problem with the story, and it got to do with that oc Galileah. I personally don't like ocs in stories that was focus on canon characters. There is no arts or stories about them. How are people supposed to know how they look if there are no images of them? I usually don't mind ocs as much. They can pop in here and there but I really hate that they are taking up half of the story or is part of the story. This story is to good not to continue reading, but I will not enjoy that griffin oc Galleah.
If she was a pony I would't have said anything because i'm here for human on pony anyways10270833
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If you need her picture there she is. She's from griffinstone.