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I wonder how they would react to Wired Al? I bet Pinkie would love him.
Now with the cadence arc behind them where next might this story take us?
Who's Galileah?
She's back in the saddle again, she's back!
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His Griffin friend. She also fought Citrus to try and get tim but lost.
A nice chapter to welcome the revival of the story
Nooooo another cliffhanger
so Galileah the griffin has shown up in the story agene.. i am betting her role is going to be growing.
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Wired Al? Never heard of him. Guess he's got a knack for getting his audience charged up. Perhaps some shocking choreography. Or maybe just a reputation for providing an electrifying experience.
...or maybe it's something mundane like he's contractually obligated to record every performance to be aired on cable TV...?
nice chapter and awesome ending to the cristal empire arc
Oh Sweet Celestia it's Gali!!!! *squee*
Amazing Crystal Empire arc. I loved how you wrapped up the situation btwn Herd Blush and Cadance.
Ok on to the Griffin in the hall... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE say that Herd Blush is going to get a catbird!!!
I'm so glad that you updated Herding, Spark. I love reading about the shenanigans Tim and Herd Blush get into.
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I will admit, I've been actively trying to find a place to insert Leah, this works best without seeming like she's just shoved into the plot without reason.
As to her role in the story, you'll have to see what comes about.
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I loved her previous appearances. She's a scrappy little catbird. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Thanks again S-B for another awesome chapter. Good luck with the next one, and as always have fun writing.
Nice little nod to the other story. The restoration of Cadence's title is most welcome. I'm not surprised it was a Citrus's request.
I'm not sure "retribution" is the right word. I think restitution fits better. Their trip home was comfy. I loved the intertwined tails bit. The whole intimacy described during the song was wonderful. I’m curious as to the song choice though. A little foreboding given the tech that’s about to be rolled out. It’s great to see Galileah make her reappearance. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
Thanks for the touching and caring update. I really needed the pick me up.
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Pinkie literally canonically got married to Weird Al in the season 8 epilogue where it's shown she's with Grilled Cheese
Something about this chapter seemed off to me, I don't know what (though it was in serious need of an editor, that's for sure). Either way, good stuff.
I'm legitimately surprised that the mods allowed you to keep the lyrics in the chapter, that's expressly against the rules.
Well, regardless, it was a really good scene and I really liked the choice of songs.
https://www(dot)youtube(dot)com/watch ?v=u9Dg-g7t2l4
Good: Music of Harmony
Very weird: The choice of “Sounds of Silence”. No thematic point, no reason for Tim to sing that song other than he likes it. A song choice that said something about recent events in the herd would have been more interesting, or perhaps revealing Tim’s future hopes and fears.
Also: Is the catbird literally just waiting around the Blush apartment waiting for them to get home?
…. creepy.