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This has become a really, really weird fic
You are enjoying tormenting poor Tim aren't you? I feel sorry for those Diamond Dogs because they are about to have a big hammer dropped on them. Nice to see a new chapter and I think both heards are getting along nicely.
Drinking right from the tap, kinky.
Thanks for the update!
Understandable, but ultimately not healthy at all
But then again nursing Twiggles' bound to lead into naughty times
Protective momma Tim shows why you never, EVER try to reach nursing animals. That way lies maulings and property damage.
Well that escalated and got lewd quickly LOL, glad to see a update ^_^. Thank you for your hard work Sparky
Finally a new Chapter :)
this is going to lead to all kinds of fun times.
I hope Tim turns back soon, this is still making me uncomfortable.
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Don't worry, its almost done, they will find the cure and have twilight back on her hooves, and she'll be able to fix this... and no, she won't be allowed to experiment and analyze this.
Twilight, "You can't take this away from me, you can't! I need this one! I couldn't figure out Pinkie Sense, so PLEASE! Let me research this one!"
No, we already said no! *taps a rolled up newspaper* Bad alicorn.
Going for those w/ a lactation kink I see lol
Hope the next update doesn't take as long, but even if it takes longer I wont complain! Haza Tim-et
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Hey its not his fault he's got a problem with his Tim-Bits.
Just fill a cup
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actually it's very healthy if you want to avoid confusion and depression once everything has been returned to normal. it would be like having lived without hearing for years then suddenly finding that you can, then for a week you can hear sound before it all goes away again, you will continue wondering if you will ever do so again, wondering what else you are missing and driving yourself insane with thoughts of the unknown.
also, why do they need to immunize twilight first, when it would be much easier to clear the crystal flowers influence from the room so she can recover then cast an immunization spell herself? Aaaand revert Tims form at the same time.
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Considering that in this example he can go back to "hearing" anytime he wants through Twilight's magic, why not? He had literally nothing to lose.
Clearing an entire castle from a certain smell isn't by far as easy as Twiggles nursing a little from Tim. Ignoring any monetary factors it'd still be an asshole move towards all the castle workers and would likely take days, we're taking about scouring the building from all molecules of that pollen/smell, time during which she'd still be a risk for everyone, not to mention how long after that it'd take for the allergy to subside. Too risky when there's a faster and easier solution in hand.
great chapter and those dog's had it coming ^^
that ending tho "aawwkwaarrrd" !! xD
Brilliant end to this chapter, I applaud your genius in this latest twist of the story.
I can't help but picture aunt and niece nursing from him side by side now.
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I'm talking one room, not the castle
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Fair, but that still doesn't make the allergies go away any sooner. Do remember they did consider getting her out of the empire but she can't teleport herself now and it'd be too much of a risk to walk away. With the containment room getting more damaged by the sneeze waiting's not an option.
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But if the entire room is cleaned without fixing the rest of the castle, she'd be confined to that room, and considering how light and omnipresent pollen can be. (I've lived in Texas, when the trees get horny is miserable) even the door wouldn't be able to be opened.
But no worries, a plan is in place to get Twilight healthy. Next chapter is written, you'll see it before too long.
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Ohhhhh, that would be a sight.
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it really depends on the structure of the crystal flowers pollen whether or not they can be cleansed with a good draft or burnt away with a quick flash of magic fire, either way I was just thinking their were solutions other than the kinky kind to think about, and its somewhat frustrating to think that they ignore all of that after Tim gets a vagina. I get trying new things, but in a controlled environment where permanent scarring is less likely to happen would be preferable to spur of the moment type shenanigans that Cadence seems to almost constantly be in the middle of. speaking of, I would hope that cadence would send some of her guards to search out the warrens of the diamond dogs that tried to take flurry and kick them out of the crystal empire or just torch them for invading her castle uninvited.
anyway just my two cents on the matter. looking forward to how things go forward.
Kinky
Well shit
Ha! The Diamond Dogs got wrecked by Mama Bear Tim.
Poor Twilight. I'm glad North found the reason for Twi's illness and that a remedy has been concocted. Cadence should have the same antigens but I hope Tim steps up. There's nothing sexual in this situation. It's a unique opportunity to bond with and directly care for a herdmate.
Man, Silver is the luckiest pegasus I know. I knew EXACTLY what Cadence was doing as soon as she took to the air. More importantly; and considering her reasoning for being monogamous, it shows how much she trusts Silverwing & Herd Blush. It's a HUGE step for her & Shining Armor. I'm sure their monogamy is at least a little stressful on them given a pony's natural Herding Instincts. Now add on how fiercely Uncle Tim protected Flurry Heart? I'm sure that only solidified the bond between the families. Frankly, I'm hoping they become an extended herd. Not one big herd per se but more like two herds that completely trust and support each other. That share themselves with each other as needed or desired. Yeah, that thought pushes my comfy buttons.
Speaking of defending Flurry Heart. Good job with the foreshadowing. Does Tim know he killed a Diamond Dog? Thanks for another good update. I look forward to reading the next one.
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Cadence blocked Tim's view, she protected him from seeing what he actually did. :) put her wing over him and hugged him, to ensure he stayed calm and didn't know.
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Makes sense reading it again. I wasn't 100% sure it was intentional when I read it the first time around. I blame sleep deprivation. I'd like to think she wasn't just trying to shelter the male but also because it's highly likely Tim has never taken a life and that would be too much to deal with on top of everything else. Maybe Cadence talks to Citrus about it and they tell Tim after the current circumstances have been resolved. Sorry, there I go reading deeper into things again. Y'all know how much I love the story and how my imagination runs away with it.
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You're close. And it wasn't about gender per say... First she didn't KNOW how he would take to the fact that he killed someone. Second she didn't want him to remember "being a mare" or associate it with that action. She didn't want him thinking, "I over reacted 'because' i was a mare and cost someone their lives." Third she trying to keep him calm, she didn't want him 'freeking out' or worrying about it. She didn't want him 'overthinking' the situation at that point, and unless 'he' brings it up... she won't push it.
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I'm tickled to know I'm on the same wave-length as y'all. I can see that being Cadence's line of thought. I was hypothesizing that Tim would freak out before I reeled in my 'wall o'text' tendencies. We know Tim's psyche protects itself. The encounter was probably as traumatic as the plane crash and Tim's mind might be temporarily blocking the details from memory. I wouldn't be surprised if it takes several days or weeks for Tim to ask whatever happened to the third Diamond Dog. He might ask, "There were three and I knocked one out. Is he in the dungeon?" That's probably when they'll all sit him down. Let him know what happened. Maybe even try to reassure him with whatever they've learned from the Guard's investigation. He might still freak out but probably no where near as much as if he knew at the time. It's possible he might start Twilighting over security especially with a foal on the way. Silverwing & Shining Armor could give him some self-defense training to help ease his mind.
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I'd agree but this is Twilight and any pony from Ponyville is gonna have a cart full of chaos with them.
Dang that was cool how Tim went full protect-o-mode there. He has strength he didn’t even know he had. Now the question is is what would the diamond dogs want with Flurry? Curiouser and curiouser...
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They wanted her either to use as a bargaining chip to exchange for valuable currency, or non-tangible benefits, like passing pro-diamond dog legislature or doing them a favor(s) in exchange for the return of her daughter.
I know that ponies have defensive instincts, but I can't help but shake the feeling that what transpired in the nursery were human instincts. From what we've seen of ponies canonically, they're not very willing to resort to lethal force...yet if I understand what was implied, Tim grabbed that dog by the head and threw him across the room, snapping his neck like a chicken.
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Actually, that sort of aggression is very horse/pony typical. And let's not get into how donkeys will curb stomp the absolute fuck out if anything canine. Horses are more into bucking, which is what Tim did.
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IRL horses, yeah, but Equestrian Ponies' bucks apparently aren't lethal. Tim grabbing him by the neck and YEETing him across the room, very much so. Canonically we haven't seen the ponies use lethal force on anything, even when it would've been far easier - something something kids show, yeah... I guess what I'm saying is, had that been Cayenne or Citrus, could we have expected a dead dog?
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Motherly instincts...for most species are the threat is killed. My thoughts is that Tim was feeling very motherly to Flurry. And I've seen enough bucks, that's certainly lethal with a firmly planted double hoof buck. And using magic to grab and yet the intruder was a very pony thing to do.
I'm pretty sure Cayenne would be equally lethal, though.