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And I will be back in my bunk.
To bad Tim can't get any of the mares pregnant. After this he deserves to have foals that carry on his genetic legacy.
I had JUST checked this not thirty seconds prior to you posting this
Good chapter as always, Cheers!
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With Twilight and magic? I don't doubt that will not stay a problem.
Please tell me Twil will be sharing that Anthromorph spell with the heard. I'm willing to bet Tim would love the option.
i feel like a nice whole some chapter is needed to balance out this clop filled one but thats just my opinion great work
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A day in the park, or going out to some faire? As much as I'd like to see Twilight enjoying her integration with the herd, I know the public will not leave her alone without guards or angry herdmates making a scene. They'd have to go to Ponyville where she's familiar and not set so high on a pedestal.
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yeah something like that
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My evil side says Yessss, go to Ponyville. Get them all swept up in the weekly shenanigans of that trouble-magnet. Muhahaha! *Evil wringing of hooves*
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but also the cupcakes
Oh my God I was waiting for this to continue! I like this story better than some other "romance epics" like G4M and the like, because while your story absolutely has drama and problems,and an alternate character interpretation of Shining is that he's an angry bully, and there's still Cadence's punishment to be seen to, the world itself seems pretty upbeat, and people generally seem to be good-natured and wanting to get along. In the Wingman saga, that whole bit with Sea Swirl just left me with a bad taste in my mouth, not to mention how OOC Dash seemed. It's an incredible story, don't get me wrong, but it's not an enjoyable one.
In contrast, this story, even in its darkest moments, makes me want to know more about Tim and his herd, what adventures they'll get on next, and how their love will grow. :)
wow just wow a grate chapter.
I still feel odds about this chapter, maybe it's lacking the perspective of a man being stranded in Equestria. But the trauma of the affair should have weighted far more on him than what was depicted. Really driving the divide between pony and human psychology, with a later resolve that would have made their bonds all the more strong having tested to a greater extent. Down vote unfortunately but an up vote for the story as a whole.
I liked Tim's initial reaction to seeing Twilight strung up like that, beyond that point... the rest felt... empty. Like it was more or less meaningless filler. I feel this transition was FAR too smooth. I think Silver should be seriously pissed at her and refuse to share the bed with any of them for a while or at the very least until Twilight offers a sincere apology to him for what he had to deal with. I feel like Silver has been getting royally shit upon by life for too long now and he deserves some justice for his pains.
And then they talk without the sex drugs coursing through their bodies.
Still, the idea is planted, moving on to the next phase...
Tim's reaction was too funny and even funnier when he asks if he can free Twi if says yes. He probably thinks it's part of some ritual! That got a hearty laugh out of me. Tim's a good guy. I shouldn't be surprised at his reaction. I love how Citrus and the girls helped Twilight fulfill a "long-time dream" of hers. Good example of taking care of your herdsister (and in more ways then one). The lewd was good setting aside that I don't get appeal. If that's what twiddles Twi's bits and the girls don't mind then who am I to complain. As long as they're all happy. I'm sure Twi is going to LOVE getting spit roasted when Silver gets back.
I got more than enjoyable sex scenes out of this chapter though. It pleases me to no end that all the members of the herd here "get it" now. Communication is key in polyamorous relationships. Especially considering the "alien" nature of one of this group's members. Herd Blush has learned this lesson. Time was taken to explain things, talk over things and move forward right then and there allowing them to quickly get back to enjoying each other. This open and caring sentiment is shown again the following morning with Twi and Citrus explaining their perspectives. It reinforces just how much THEY ALL mean to each other. *sniff* Yeah, that conversation really pushed my sappy button there.
I am curious to know if there was something Tim was supposed to say before the joining like Citrus explained a Silver's joining and again when she presented herself to Silver after the Gala. I figure Citrus's "...she is as much yours as you are hers. She is part of all of us, and you are as well..." line basically covered it though. I also liked Tim's thoughts near the end saying Twi is "...their herd's princess". Good stuff.
Speaking of lines, I won't tell the office of alliterations but you could've gone with..
Sparky, et al., Thanks for another great chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed. I look forward to reading
about Twilight's fishnet clad apology to Silverthe next chapter.P.S.
Are y'all giving us a hint of things to come?
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out I hope it be soon
Amazing!
No comprendo...
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Just working on pony specific idioms and colloquialisms te exemplify how different they are.
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My invention of a pony idiom. It's a polite way of saying she's looking for some sex. Boiling tea means wait a while; it takes time to boil up a pot of tea. Getting a boil in her belly means getting hot on the inside; having sex. Essentially, "I am going to have sex with them when they get home."
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That is the most Fucking brilliant thing I've ever heard you say and I swear to every god that I'm using that in at least three future stories!
Omg my brain is just... 💥
That's Fucking genius!
Shit!
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Thanks, man.
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Fo real tho
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>Reads comment
>Sees it's on chapter 7
>Toop foggin kex m
>Good troll GG
I gotta admit, I was a little unsure if I wanted Twi to be in the herd after the whole infidelity arc. A part of me recognized they cared for each other, but another part of me felt like she should be punished for her actions. I wouldn't be surprised if Tim hated both himself and Twi after everything - and I hope you have him continue working through things as the chapters continue. But here I am, Twi did what she should've done from the beginning, SPOKEN to those who mattered, been open with her feelings. She's bandaged the wounds properly with 4/5 of those most hurt from her actions...and I think I've decided. I don't mind her being included. (That was far harder to admit than I thought it would be.) Mercy is the suspension of justice, and I think Celestia was right about one thing. Kindness is its own reward.
Good Job, Sparky Brony. Fantastic chapter.
P.s. I'm going to be VERY put out if Twi doesn't spend all day with Silver to apologize to him, because he had it even worse than Tim did. Tim deserved to be punished (if not in such a fashion), but Silver didn't. Pony society is pretty cruel to its stallions, doubly so because they think it's love.
P.s.s. Headcanon question: Is the juniors of the offender suffering the same punishment as he, supposed to incite the junior stallions to usurp their senior who had fucked up? Because it kinda feels like that's the point. Demote the cheating bastard, unless he's the most masculine and thus the most desirable.