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wow.
i am thinking a tub full of ice water may help after this chapter.
thats one hell of a surprise and its not even his birthday
Damn, that was hot. I do love me some submissive Twilight
I like It.
It's Twiggles we're talking about, that feeling problem is temporary at most
Well, that's certainly an interesting find to get home to
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There's not enough icy water in the world to quench Twilight's fire right now
Yes. This is pure sexy GOLD!!! ALL MY YES!!! PLEASE MORE!!!!
After reading this chapter all I will say is, I’ll be in my bunk.
I was half expecting twi to go human again, but that works too, I guess...
Although if I were in Tim's position, I would probably slowly shut the door and try to figure out what the ever living hell was going on.
OMG I am so excited to see this be updated!!! I laughed so hard at the end, I can just imagine his response and reaction lol. I look forward to the next update! Please don't take as long!!! I beg you this is my favorite story I have been following. Keep up the good work!
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The next chapter actually has been written, and will be up on Patreon soon. It is with my editor, and should be released on my usual schedule.
I have to admit, that would be surprising; and on several levels.
Very nice! I will admit, it does seem like they jump into bed with their former enemy a tad quickly. But, these are your characters, and I do not know their mindset nearly as well as you do. Regardless, the sex was will written- the dialogue at times a bit forced, but that can't always be helped, and it didn't make it unreadable by any stretch. Overall, a fine chapter!
How he's going to take this will be a wonder to read, speaking from someone who works outside in 100 plus heat with sporadic management. Last thing on your mind is sex, food and rest first. Talk about awkward...
Not a fan of all the bondage stuff but I am a fan of this fic so I can roll with it for now. (really hope it works out for all of them)
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I've got 3 stories I'm updating, Herding Instincts, The Desert Prince, and Irony's Tale. I typically put out a chapter a week. It allows me to try to keep ahead of my posting schedule and gives my editor time to do his job. So, typically, Herding Instincts is going to be updated every three weeks.
I love the traditional/ancient petition idea and I loved the line
Pushes my sappy button.
Nice going with the resonance waypoint. Fits better in-story given the 'adventure' taken a couple of chapters ago. Could even forgo the need for a guard in Herd Blush's building since only unicorns who know the unique resonance of the waypoint could/would use it. Question though; What about Spike? I'd imagine Twi will be staying over quite often. He just going to stay in Ponyville or tag along and stay in the guest bedroom? Sorry, I'm probably reading more into. You are pushing my Lore button here after all.
I think you meant Cayenne. I swear I think y'all are trying to give these girls an identity crisis. Also, I'm sure Twilight might know a chef pony or two.
Me too, or black hose/stockings; unf.
Edit: Wait; I think something swam over my head.
I love it when that happens. It's like an expression of the bond they share. There you go, pushing my sappy button again.
I see what you did there.
D'awww.
I love, love, love that Twi is a part of the herd now and I'm overjoyed that they all went with the 'just a mare' approach. That alone makes this a good chapter for me. However, the BDSM didn't do it for me. It's not my thing but my love for this story let's me overlook it. I'm sure Tim is flabbergasted though and I do wonder how he's going to react. Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next one. I wish I had some bits to throw your way. How soon will you post here after posting on Patreon?
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The updated chapter is out on Patreon, with a link to the unreleased edited version. Kalash did an excellent job, and amped up quite a few story elements in the edit. I just put it on the site. It should be released in full on Friday.
On to The Desert Prince. If you are into lore stories, check that one out, it's set quite a bit before the modern times, though the story will comprise some time as alicorns are notoriously long lived. I'll quit now before I go too spoilerly. I'm glad you are enjoying Herding Instincts, and I'll be working on it again before too long.
Heh, "oh, we're doing it now??!?" there were many surprises this day...
I finally read this, ages late.
Awesome and hot... Except for this.
I don't understand that at all.
It's the only part that breaks the flow.
Fantastic work!
Wow....what a way to be welcomed home! Just wow!
*That last part*
Da-yum!