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o large whit plot with a large wink. yum
now i am wondering what the next chapter will be.
grate righting sparky brony.
Does Celestia need the 'Banana man"?
If not, then Celestia is a banana.
I regret nothing.
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Well hopefully they get some foals soon as the deserve them.
I loved the story soafer when do you think chapter 36 will be finish thank you
Still waiting on that picnic chapter because at this point there are more chapters about or dedicated to sex then chapters about time as a family because I don't feel like I know them
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The herd is in the depths of heat at the moment. But no worries, they'll be back to non-sexytime chapters before too long. And remember, some of the bonding, what makes them a family unit, is in the sexytimes as well.
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I understand but it seems like if a story goes down the sec rabbit hole it seems like they need to have sex in every chapter
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Sex is an important part of this story, and I will pay due diligence to that fact. But this is also a story, not just a porno, so, there will be plenty more story coming up.
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I hope so because it's a good story
I'm really surprised changelings haven't been brought up, or at least highly suspected since they're a known factor. With ponies going wild it'd be so easy to harvest some short-term intense lust/love. Barring the most grievous of blunders, it'd be unlikely even a clumsy changeling would get caught with all the "wham bam thank you mam" going on as out of town tourists are commonplace across Equestria.
I found it kind of funny that the lead up from the last chapter and even up to the guards escorting Tim had us thinking one thing was going to happen, only for Celestia to immediately shoot it down, leaving us to think, "Huh, guess I was wrong."
A little bit of interesting; if disturbing, lore building. I'm not sure how I should feel about Celly being disturbed about sex with genetically far removed descendants than sex with dead enemy combatants. Yes, I know. It's something that happens. Even in this day and age. Speaking of genetic descendants; didn't the story already go along with the canon that Cadence was a pegasus orphan? I suppose it could be assumed a genetic profile was done when she ascended.
I loved Celly's kind offers. I hope they do do something post season. I'm sure the herd would be happy to entertain her and Luna if she's up for it. I know, wish fulfillment. Leave me alone. It was good to see that the mares of Canterlot didn't turn into some kind of 'club 'em over the head' caveponies. Well, at least the ones Tim came across weren't. Their "desperation" as Tim described would tug at my heart strings as well. What if one of the two mares who said they'd approach Citrus turn out to be one of Twi's Canterlot friends? Could be interesting. You're also pushing my comfy button with Tim's "my wife" comment. It was mentioned very early in the story that an official marriage should be considered.
What's a "niqab"?
Doesn't sound right. Shouldn't it be "...she swiftly hilts him inside her."?
Thanks for another great chapter! I look forward to reading the next one.
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1. I can't say anything about marriage, because only Sparky really knows the far future of the story. I can't tell you more.
What I was thinking of the time was that Tim was more or less suffering under extreme lust from being influenced by Celestia's estrus, and was far more extreme in the drafting process. At that point, he's not properly sane.
2. A niqab is a form of clothing worn by women mostly in some parts of Persia and Arabia. It conceals everything but the eyes and hands. It's not the burqa; that's an Afghan/Pashtun piece that's a completely different color and has a metal mesh mask over the whole face. Tim was trying to be sarcastic by asking if Celestia had found him one.
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3. I actually wrote that segment while blazing horny and knew it had to have some errors. Darn Derpibooru and it's amazing clop offerings...
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I figured Tim was getting affected by estrus phermones but I took it more as a cumlative effect of all the mares that crossed his path with Celly's transformation pushing him to his limits. I'd imagine he got hit with a heavy layer of phermones when he entered the herd's home which is why he couldn't even wait until he got past the foyer.
I get it now. My apologies. I assumed it was another ponish word and didn't bother to Google like I normally would've.
Ha! In deed. No worries though.
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In the draft he got hit far harder and his reaction was extremely strong. The human pheromones, coupled with just how impossibly gorgeous Celestia's human form is, pretty much made him storm home in a daze and furiously ram Citrus like it was his last day on earth. Sparky toned it down significantly to keep with the overall tone and mood of the story, and to also not take away from the intensity of the heat sex, which was definitely for the best. He's good at considering the overall narrative like that. Let's just say I'm stoked as hell to finally be at this part and can't wait to see what he gives me to work with. I'm such a lucky editor.
No worries about the arcane speak, lol, I kinda have a problem of just using my full vocabulary without fully considering it.
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It was tempered well then. The herd has lots of sex already and this felt a good notch or two up in intensity. Just right for what is the beginning of Spring Estrus. I too have been looking forward to this time in-story. Not just for the clop but for how dynamics and lore will be played out. Take Spike for example. While ponies might see him as a child he is aware of how strenuous things could get which is why he's insisting on staying to make sure his herd; his family doesn't rut themselves into a coma. I love it! It goes along with what I've said before. A herd loves, cares for and supports each other come what may. It's not just about sex.
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Glad to hear the right balance was struck.
It feels really gratifying as an editor to see it's all coming together so well for you.
*Looks at the groups Herding Instincts is Featured in*
Okay, the sex-questira one makes sense but shouldn't be in the "Land of Lustful Wonder." folder? Since this is basically a story about what Herd life is. Unless it's a joke and from Tim's perspective things really did go From Harmony to Debauchery.
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How does one check what groups a story is in
When do you think the Next's chapter is caming out thank you
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It's in production. Sparky has been very busy lately, but don't worry, you'll get your chapter when it's done. The isn't going anywhere.
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I really love this story I hope theirs more too come
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I've got one chapter written, and am getting through a second new one. After I've got some chapters in the stable, I'll start releasing again.
A haiku for the heat season:
The delicious plot,
Such warm depths await within,
Peak satisfaction.
Anyway, another great chapter. Might have to skip small portions of the next chapter or two though. I can get overwhelmed by reading too much clop.
Are you going to finish the story thank you
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No worries, the story is continuing. I am busy with life at the moment. But more of this, and other stories, will be incoming.
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Yay hope too be reading it soon
You should think of doing a audio book of this
Stop lying. He just want to bang.