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Glad to see some healthy, loving rebonding between the herd.
not a unexpected chapter given the type of story this is but I still wish theire was more to it then just then they all fucked you know
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Don't worry, this is just the start to their healing arc. This isn't everything's perfect, this is everything will be okay.
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will silver still call tim those funny nicknames
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He might, in jest.
Sloppy second is fukin gross!
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excellent
SoL chapter. Huh. Could use a breather.
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That's a matter of personal opinion, some may dislike the feeling, others may think of it as being tainted. But for beings that have diffrent social norms as well as psychological conditioning for such acts, it is likely meaningful and symbolic.
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U r just sick.
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Nothing wrong with sloppy seconds, kid. When a girl's all warmed up, you can just slide right in and it just feels fucking great, especially if the other guy(s) has/had made her cum so she's just dripping. The cum provides extra lube, too, so you can really have at it. There's also this instinct telling you to give her your seed to compete with the others, so you feel so excited and really go at her full throttle. It's like being in heat. Then you cum really hard and flood her insides. There's something really hot about a girl who just craves being fucked so much she doesn't care how many guys take her.
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U got AIDS, don't you?
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I know you haven't gotten to 8th grade health class, but condoms.
I honestly expected some story in the second half, but it wasn't half bad. Herd nights must be tiring as fuck, though.
I know it will take a long time for that, but I can't wait to see how Twilight will be treated when she gets to that point. Princess book smart being spitroasted and liking it will be a night to remember
I'm sorry but I'm done here, the "main" human character over this story has devolved into something that deserves psychiatric help. Tim no longer acts how an adult human being would act. This story began interesting with tim dealing with the back-and-forth of two separate cultures but then it stoped and Tim became a door mat again and again and again and again. This story was interesting and a joy to read now it's become just a chore.
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Lol, I get how you feel. Personally I dont like the feel of my own stuff right after, but to each their own. For me its the idea of reclaiming territory, when his stuff is replaced by her juices that when I can really enjoy the feel. If human sexual selection was based more on poligamy rather than monogamy I think such acts would be more widely accepted.
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I'm quickly appraoching that point as well dude. I'll give it another couple updates to see if Tim can locate his spine again and remember that he may live in Pony World, but he still has the right to practice and uphold his own cultural values so long as they are not illegal. If I see any hints of that in the next couple chapters, I'll let you know.
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Tiring herd nights are one reason why Tim was open to the idea of a stallion joining them. And yes, when the girls are in the mood, not much sleep to be had, and they are in the mood quite often. That's a good thing, I would think.
As to Twilight. There are plans for her upcoming. I don't think a spit roast for her in the beginning, but sexy times are being thought about.
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Dating a woman with too much drive is not that good, believe me. The herd truly must help with that.
Nice to know she's not out of the story
Well, that was an extremely eventful night. Then again, why wouldn't it be? Things are already far better, the family (or herd, but who cares at this point) is completely together again... so why not have a debauched celebration?
After all, making the others happy is important in any relationship.
Getting this much pleasure from it is a wonderful bonus.
Also, Silver got finally laid. Winning all around!
I like the rules Tim has imposed in regards to Silver and Citrus. Shows that he's willing to go the extra mile, but at the same time lets everyone know who's the head honcho... while still keeping it friendly.
Way to go, Tim!
I kinda stopped reading after the whole cheating thing mostly cause it kinda peeved me off ( the way twilight acted and the mates as well as silverbeing an ass) I was wondering if anyone could tell me if the chapters get better because I loved the beginning but it kinda bummed me out that this happened so can anyone tell me if it gets better and what’s hapens in the following chapters?
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I'll admit to some bias. But after the cheating, there were some consequences for Tim. But, happily, the herd is working through them, the last chapter was a big clopfest of them loving each other. The next arc that is upcoming is them healing and discovering the magic of true forgiveness. So, stick around, there's a lot more story to tell.
I re-read this chapter several times for..ah..research purposes. Yeah, that's it.
I was going to call ‘typo’ but then again, this is Cayenne talking here. She probably does mean it this way.
And so begins an excellent clopfest. It might not have been needed this time around but I’m glad Cayenne let Tim know he had to take care of Citrus first. I am pleased that Citrus let Tim know what was to happen next AND Silver deferring to Tim before he started. No more assuming Tim knows these things and more acknowledging that he may have a different point of view. And good on Tim setting some conditions. Although, my first thought was “Poor Citrus. What if Tim has to travel? She’s not going to be getting any D” but then she can just go with him, problem solved!
So the translation matrix failed for a bit? I wonder why. Is it wearing off? Sure we can guess what was said but I wouldn't mind a translation; in an author's note maybe? I've mentioned in an earlier chapter, and I might be reading more into it, but I like the symbolism of Citrus' magic pulling everyone closer when she climaxes. Nice touch.
I can't think of a better way to fall asleep than in a pile of pony. Nice bit of character progression in an excellent lewd chapter. Thanks guys! I look forward to reading the next one.
i am vary impressed of just how good this chapter came out.
yes i saw and helped with parts of it but this is the first i saw the hole chapter, and i can say it is awesome.
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While the exact mechanics of what's going on aren't determined yet, there will be more look at Pone and the translation spell is not going to completely cover everything. Silver, being a Cloudsdaler, has a weird dialect, and he's got injuries in his mouth which are going to stop him from speaking properly, meaning the magic just may not catch what he's saying. As of right now, I have about 200 words down in a growing lexicon and the barest form of a skeleton grammar. A basic form of the language will be made available sometime by the completion of the fic. I thought I asked Sparky to give a translation, but here it is:
Please finish me.*
*= Finish is still in English.
I give you my gift, so good!"
As I've said before on previous chapters this HIE ( human in Equestria) story has fallen into a disturbing trend I've seen in HIE stories. The disturbing trend is that the main male character is completely and utterly emasculated both physically and mentally.
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That's not a trend, its always been like that.
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But why is that a thing I wonder?
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Soy.
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Oh.... I guess that makes sense. Well if that's the case I wish the author in the description puts whether they've taken gender studies or not lol
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O.o
I've never taken gender studies. And Kalash has explained quite well about Tim's strength in a lot of this. Let me be clear, he's in an alien society, trying to buck against it when he's the only human would be a futile exercise. Remember, just going to live in another country on this planet would be a complete mystery to many, as many expats tend to find out. And Tim is having to adjust to a matriarchal society where the male gender is treated differently. I understand you don't care for this. I get it, but bashing me like that is kinda silly.
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Chill man it was a joke on Lord Commissar Alexer "soy" comment. The last thing I want to do is to introduce identity politics talking points in to MLP fanfics
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It totally slipped my mind that Silver Wing would likely have trouble speaking. The healed muscle and bone is probably still tender.
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That's one way to think of it. Imagine him as doing his best to ignore something that would be a bit like having dentai surgery without anaethetic. Plus he's trying to get his brain to work with the new neurons and that's going to be a bit clumsy.
i was really hoping he would not turn into a cuck some of those sex scenes were very..well cuckish you had all of these plot points gave ways for him to get them pregnant but it turned into a rather generic story where another male was pretty much thrown in to appease some fetishes.
Pile of pony indeed.
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Oh noes, human in equestria lives with ponies and has to act somewhat like a pony!
If you replace 'equestria' with 'foreign country' and 'pony' with that country, it doesn't sound so wrong does it? Honestly it's sad to see all these readers who are stuck in 'my culture or gtfo!' mindset.
Basically i want you to know that i am the lead stallion and this is MY lead mare and you can only hope for sloppy seconds lol
Once they all get home it was so hor and steamy it wouldve made a Hedonist blush
*takes a cold shower*
Thnx Spark for such an amazing story. Also thnx kalash93 for all the work youve done to help Spark. I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next.
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When you take the human out of human in equestria, why fucking bother putting it in?
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The problem some of us have is they don't seem to expect him to acclimate, but to BE a stallion. It's like owning a dog and expecting it to eat nothing but broccoli.
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You’ve never really had to spend time inside a group of another culture, as part of that group, have you?
Tim is a human who is forever cut off from his world and people. He wants what we all want - love, intimacy, respect, meaning, and happiness. Those are also the same things ponies want. The two cultures are *very* different in how the achieve those goals.
Tim has to adapt because he must. He’s not unhappy- on the contrary he’s now so happy he doesn’t want to go back to earth. He was not born to this culture, and in a real sense he will always be an outsider. What Tim is experiencing is normal for people uprooted and having to live in a completely new culture with different rules and expectations.
If you believe the pony system is “wrong” - well, you’re not a pony. Your culture tells you it’s wrong. Your values are subjective. Tim is finding that he can adapt and thrive with pony cultural values and norms.
If you want a story about humans who always have the “this isn’t the human way!” mindset when living with ponies, try other stories. It remains refreshing to me to see a human struggle but still find happiness in a very different culture- because that happens normally in human cultures!
The other group of readers who are obsessed about if a character is being “cucked” or not, are stuck so deeply inside their own cultural POV they’re literally blind to how it *gasp* might not be the only one. Ponies form herds, herds share partners, and they have strictly defined rules and laws about it. If you think Tim is getting the raw end of the deal, your brain is faulty. Tim literally had the right to refuse Silver from being with Citrus, *and* he gets to fuck *three* mares.
What the fuck is wrong with you that you wouldn’t take that?! Is your insecurity so much that it would prevent you from literal orgies all the time? Christ, I feel bad for you if that’s the case.