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This guy's going to be a prick, isn't he?
Why do I get the feeling that this is going to turn into an Economic Cold War?
Also why do I get the feeling that a Griffin is about to be Plucked because he pissed off Twilight by doing something stupid like targeting Tim and the Phone system?
griffin culture is just...wow..just "wow"
citrus doesn't seem to know twily's impulse decision making jet xD
dam griffins use firearms they devellop'd guns
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I'd say it's a guarantee...
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i am thinking you are all right. this is going to get ugly.
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YUP
Thank you for the chapter can't wait until the next one comes out hope it comes out really soon
I will let you know that I have a good fwiend named Biggus Dickus back in Wome... I won't let him be ridiculed by some colourful equines!
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I have to wonder if Griffons were based on Ferengi culture. All the Griffons are missing is a codex of rules to quote, they have the rest copied over fairly well.
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Treat families as employees. Exploit them as needed.
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Twoah hum to tha flo-ah agin!
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Rule 111; Treat people in your debt like family... exploit them.
Rule 6; Never allow family to stand in the way of opportunity.
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Though the little chip shop griffin isn't that bad. Had she grown up somewhere else, she might have been an athlete or such, but now really all she wants is to find a way to buy her brother and sister out of poverty and bring them to equestria.
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The familiar story of so many immigrants. I hope she does it.
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A griph who's part falcon, part cheetah, built for speed, for racing, for competition, she would have made a wonderful wonder-bolt. A wonderful athleat. She has a big heart, and even will give up her own food rather then see a child go hungry.
But because she was born to a poor family, her options where limited, and the only skill she could market was her cooking.
I don't think I've ever heard of a griffin backstory where they were driven from their initial homeland. It's a fascinating idea that two species could go through near identical experiences that had a profound impact on their cultures, yet reach such profoundly different conclusions.
I also detected a bit of Ferengi influence, especially that exchange of proverbs.
Very interesting chapter. Lots of world building (which I do so adore). I enjoyed this chapter a great deal and I look forward to the next one.
I'm struggling to put it into words, but that conversation between Tim and Galileah touched on what I dislike about the
FerengiGriffins. Tough times do not breed scrooges, but altruists. It's in human nature to despise those who are greedy and stingy, and to admire selflessness, because it helps our race to survive. We EAT those who get greedy, for they threaten the survival of the group, not aid it. There is a value beyond wealth, loyalty. I would rather be without two bits to rub together, than without a friend.Well, I found this story recently, I've finished reading it and I have some simple opinions; I loved almost everything, especially the fact that you involved non common ponies; Citrus, Cayenne... they are not seen in many fics, much less in HiE. I really liked the clop scenes, although I would have liked more scenes of tender romance. I like harem stories between a human and several mares, this fic fulfilled that purpose very well.
What I didn't like, or rather was that you involved stallions. If I imagined myself in the place of the protagonist, I couldn't bear to think that somewhere, one of my girlfriends is having a relationship with another male, it would be like infidelity, which for me would be unforgivable. For solution I would talk with my mares to ask them for balance in the respect between their customs and mine.
I skipped those scenes, although the references were unavoidable. I don't like stallions.
Anyway, this is just my opinion, there will be someone who liked that part. It's your story and you can do whatever you want with it.
In general I liked the fic, I will wait for updates.
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Yes and no, even with people, tough times and build greediness, think about the pandemic, people trying to buy up and resell goods like toilet paper. Griffins are predatory and greedy, a really bad combination. the only thing that would make it worse is if they were gluttons too.
who was it that did a narration for this I've been trying to find it but I can't
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Is this story on Hiatus? Or jeast other stuff that comes first.
I do hope this story continues on it is a good story
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This story is ongoing, my writing volume has decreased farore than I'd like. I have ongoing plans for this story. And it will continue.
Thank you for your comment and your interest in my story.
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I'm super happy to hear this. I have been following this story since I first joined FIM. It's one of my favorites and honestly one of the first three I ever favorite on this site. Take your time, and I hope things are going well. You will always have a fan here!