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Take a hint, Tim.
If Tim doesn't let twilight join the herd, then I hope she atleast gets someone who atleast loves her for who she is and not what she is, she deserves it.
Also we may have to mind wipe tims memories of Karen, can't have him clouding his own judgement with unnecessary thoughts of the past. Don't care if that is immoral, I'm just being selfish.
im calling it now that griffen is joing the herd but the big question is will Karen make a apperence
Well that makes things interesting. Why do I feel that Twilight maybe wants to join the heard needs to be discussed sooner rather then later as the girls need to hear it from him rather then anypony else.
At least Twilight finally said it out loud, but maybe she needs to follow the rules and talk to the herdmares first
ugh. pet peve of mine- ponies abuse the human, and human fails to get upset at all. that is NOT a rational response. those two royal idiots committed crimes for their 'prank' (theft of underwear and threat of violence). yet whenever an author does this in a fanfic, they have no inkling of morality, ethics, or right and wrong, only their feeble and stupid joke.
....poor Twilight. I really hope he gives her a chance.
At this point, I'm thinking poor Tim. We've a potential herd of five mares now. How about a stallion to keep him of dying from exhaustion or dehydration?
Cadance and Shining are trolling pore Tim, i did not see this coming.
a vary good chapter.
Just love the purple book horse tim, dam.
That fifth ticket couldn't be for Twilight, as a princess, she'd get her own ticket by default. Sneaky Griffin being sneaky.
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Lighten up, it's just a fic... From that rant, you remind me of one of those detestable nobles in the show with an irretrievable stick shoved up their plot...
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Agreed... All memory of Karen is now unnecessary and must be eliminated...
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This does broach a few questions though, if she does join, is she in their herd or would they be absorbed into being hers? It just wouldn't do for a royal to be without a herd, even more so not to be the head of one. Would the mares be okay with this, after so long of having Citrus as leader? Not to mention the implication to Tim, he knows that he's already stretched thin with three mares, if a fourth and fifth join, a second stallion will likely be needed, can he handle the emotional hurdle of sharing with another male?
I just knew they were pulling a prank on Tim. Love it. Thanks for the quick update! I look forward to more.
That is the number one thing about herding for me. Having herdmates to love and support you as much as you do them.
Aw, Caddy. Yeah, and I can imagine the sex life would be AMAZING. That's also very important too.
Oh how I would love to know how that feels. I imagine that would be an embrace I would never get tired of. Twilight's reaction and questions about human sexuality was perfect. I could clearly see her scientific mind at work there.
Yes, Tim, you do. Please. I'm sure the girls wouldn't mind. Not because she's a princess but because they see she's just a mare, falling for a colt and is in need of a good herd.
I've gotten the sense from an earlier chapter that Citrus and Cayenne consider Twilight a friend. I think the Gala would be a perfect time for the herd, and the girls in particular, to get to know Twilight better. Preferably in a VIP area away from everyone else. That's assuming a 'date' can't be arranged beforehand. Sure, that'll get tongues wagging but the herd strikes me as ones to not pay attention to prattle.
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Twilight isn't a reigning princess and even if she was I don't think it would matter to her. She doesn't 'see' herself as royalty. I believe Citrus would still be the lead mare when it comes to the herd. Besides, it's been established that they make decisions as a herd. Adding Twilight as the fifth member would help avoid 'tie' situations. As to Tim handling a forth mare in the herd? I'm sure he could handle it. It's all good though. They all help satisfy each other and who's to say one of the girls doesn't 'tap out' first? They wore out Citrus a couple of chapters ago.
What a start
Quite a good prank, I see that a lot of the people who guessed that were right.
Tim not saying anything to Twi after she proclaimed her feelings... ouch. That was cold. At least say that you'll think about it.
That poor mare will be heartbroken now.
That last sentence. I have a feeling that the girls know something Tim doesn't. Or Celestia knows something... or she's just trolling.
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Yes, it is for the greater good. (And superior pony booty)
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Ha! If he decides to take on Twilight, he might seriously consider a stallion to help. Actually, since we're going off into the realm of speculation, why not make that stallion a changeling? More than enough love in that herd to keep a bugpone fat and happy while providing relief for the human male (death by snu-snu is real folks!)
i would like to see a subverison of the standard tropes invovling the gala.
i wanna see him unable to attend for some reason, but not necessarily his herd.
give the girls a chance to talk.
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I understand what you are saying, but this is a prank, his underwear was in the bed, it was just removed from his body. And being just a prank, no actual harm happened, just embarrassment and a bit of stress. Which was mitigated pretty quickly. All in all, Tim can laugh about it later.
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Right cx it's Celestia- old mentor of Princess Twilight and also Princess Cadance... Likely heard all about it from Cadance and is pain ting the picture for Tim. At least that's my idea...
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Actually I got the impression he didn't realize what she was getting at, the significance of it getting buried in the rest, that and being oblivious in his own pain. You know, based on what he said when he noticed she was crying.
Seems to indicate that he is attributing her entire reaction to guilt instead of heartbreak, after all Twilight did say ;"But I know you have your herd, and you are happy with them."
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Why a stallion at all then? If you're gonna go the bugpone route why not just circumvent any possible 'other male' problems he might have by getting a switch hitting changeling mare?
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That does bring up a curious point, are there genders with changelings? We know they can mimic the, er, equipment, at least externally anyway. Do they merely identify with a particular gender(s) or are they set to one, only faking the other when necessary? I suppose it depends on the lore; neuter or barren-female with only the Queen and specialized males if you lean towards insect-style, or a proper mix of both genders with the Queen being the alpha (changeling alicorn?) of the nest if you go a more pony themed route.
All that aside, suppose the mares get it in their heads they want foals? I don't see it happening with any human. Kinda doubt you'd have much better luck with a changeling. You would have to get a proper stallion and therein lies the question of a human being raised with monogamy being the law while ponies are more of a hippy commune (heh). There's a loophole with most human males however. There's a fantasy to be the "Sultan" with your harem of lovelies. Up to now, it's just been him and a bunch of mares. Adding another, like Twilight, won't change that. If anything, it would inflate his ego more. Adding a stallion however, uh oh. Will his ego/Sultan/alpha-status be threatened?
Double negative.
followed
The opening part for dialogue (forgot its name, but it is the ‘‘) is missing.
Feels like they are trying to force it on him.
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That... actually makes sense. I can't believe I missed that. Ah well, thanks for pointing that out to me
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On children, equestria girls world. When he comes back from the mirror it gives him an Unicorn form - perfectly natural and fertile. Twilight had to get a DNA sample from his brush to turn him back. Dunno how many chapters back that was, though.
Speaking for myself, I'd like to pound the purple plot.
Sunbutt be shippin' Timlight like FedEx.
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I think quite a few reading would like to pound the purple plot. Myself included.
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book horse best horse
Tim can't be this dim. I'm going on a limb, to say Twilight will end up with him. If not, dear author, your end will be grim.
"Tim, I have wronged you in ways I can never right” her voice cracks, “but I will do anything within my power to make amends."
Honorable.
"I’m a bit of a breast man; I really like them, a lot."
Twilight, you took away breasts from Tim.
How much "amends" could be made here.
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Er... Tim is not a Machine some socially awkward nerd can put kindness coins into and get sex out of. He has feelings of his own, you should respect them. Twilight is not entitled to sexual rewards for basic prosocial behavior. Tim has no obligations towards her and her sorrow and apologetic behavior in this chapter is real sexy.
Also Cadence, the bigger sibling figure and the literal bigger sibling come and pressure Tim even more. It's a good thing they are strangers and Tim is confident before Royalty, because if they were in any way part of his social circle or people he respected or feared that would be serious a Pressure Play.
And then Twilight totally ignores his privacy and watches him in an intimate moment, even when he begs her to stop.
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Twilight is a complete and utter Creep who cannot take a hint. The only reason you don't see that is because of their Genders.
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your rhymes are on time and they don't skip a beat
The cable to the phone supplies DC
How many bits would that spare ticket get me?
Cadance pressuring him to get with Twilight is just wrong. Fuck yourself and mind your own damn business!
it's funny he has an older iPhone but everything on it was web based...
I think you may have forgotten to use a quotation mark here.
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BAM I shot your parents in their guts. Oh, what? You don't like that? You just need to lighten up, you act like a noble with a stick up his ass. What do you mean, you don't like it when there's unnecessary suffering? It's obviously just a harmless prank and you need to lighten up.
And he cries some more in this chapter.
-_-
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Ok, yah... The crying is getting ridiculous. There is being emotionally open, then there is being a self pitying pansy.