Hey, everypony. My name is Blank Scroll, or Scroll for short. Changed from Blazing Light. You can still call me Blaze.
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Brilliant start can't wait to read more
5334220 Thanks Evey
AHHHHHHHH! *dies*
5335554 You are too excited, my friend. I think you're going to have a heart attack before this story is finished. Lol.
I really like this, but the text all bunched together the way it is makes it difficult to read. Maybe space it out a bit? otherwise its a pretty damn good story so far. I'm guessing this is before Celestia and Luna? It seems like the three tribes
5346712 Yeah, still working on how to change a few formats in the edit phase. And kinda. It has no Alicorns, beyond that basically. Except one less tribe. Unicorns.
Actually, how do you change the spacing?
5346768 well, keep it up. Its a good start for a first story and done better than when I first started out.
5346805 Well, if that's true, then getting better means being awesome. And I can't figure out how to change the spacing on here.
5346810 Click edit, Go into a part of the story where you feel it should be shifted and hit TAB to indent or Enter to move it down a space
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I feel like a moron
5346914 Hey, gotta learn stuff somehow, not a lot of people know this stuff and I didn't space out my first story either. Now I'm about 16 stories deep into my writing and with each chapter I learn more.
5346935 That's how stories are made better. With the criticism of all those who read it. But, I also have pretty descriptive paragraphs that can't be indented or spaced too far apart. There's the formatting button at the top of the chapter that indicates a few things like line spacing for the site.
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For anyone who has the password, I've posted part of the next chapter. Awake
This is how I edit this story, for those who want to know: I write a couple hundred words at a time, then I post it on here to see how the format is going to be. I think I have the weirdest way of updating ever.
great chapter hong long was moonlit asleep , this story has a great atmoshere to it i love it
5472531 Oh you'll find out next chapter. Glad you like it
Can you guess? Any certain number of years
5472542 id say around 20-50 years but thats just a guess
5472627 I will neither confirm nor deny the correctness of the spoiler statement lol.
Besides, I've already started writing the next chapter. Just don't know what to call it. Maybe 'the meeting'? A work in progress as it may be for now
I loved dancing embers, she my fav so far
5583441 Like I said She reminds me of Pinkie in a way. And Ember is pretty cool.
5583457 by the way call it i new it was 10 years
5584199 Well, any longer and certain ideas become unusable. So, to counteract the battle with time, we shortened the sleep schedule lol. Was it enjoyable though?
5584211 yeah i really enjoyed it the friendship is cute and belivable and it setting up a lot of thing for chapter later to come
5584279 That's exactly what I had in mind too. Though Moon probably hasn't read the new chapter yet. I thought I did a good job.
5584433 im sure he'll love it I did
5587190 Lol. I did too. I'll ask him tonight
urghh why didn't fimfiction tell this had updated
Anyway this chapter was amazing my favourite so far amazing charactor and world development the baxkstory was cute and emotional. I love this
6417676 Took forever to actually get right. So that besides work delayed the chapter