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Autum Breeze


a home-grown australian who embraced being a member of the fandom 2 days before joining. Willingly delved into the fandom whole-heartedly and has never looked back

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WARNING! This fic has a strong centre on pregnancy. If you do not like reading about pregnancy, do not go further.

I was a normal 22-year-old brony, with a job, who wrote and read mlp fanfictions whenever he could.

Like most bronies, I've always wondered what it would be like to go to Equestria, either as myself or as a pony.

However, never in my wildest dreams did i think i would go to sleep in my bed and wake up in Equestria as a cream-yellow Pegasus.

not only that, but, apparently, I've got a surprise my new body is yet to show me

Rated teen and Sex tag for sexual references

Images from here, here and here

Featured 25/4/2014

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 234 )

I have the feeling that Fluttershys body is having side effects from the vampire bat episode, in other word hes going to have to get really use to apples if im right...

I am quite interested, looking forward to new chapters :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Manes deleted Apr 20th, 2014

I know what fimfic you read. It was by PEv of which I am in. Becoming Rainbow Dash: A Brony Writer's Tale by Skyblaze Freescript is what you read.

Comment posted by GreenPony32 deleted Apr 20th, 2014

4262773 i just thought she might be lactose intolerant

You need to format. A LOT. This is a story not a play. As long as your not switching speakers, major ideas, or locations, keep it in the same paragraph.

I like this so far, needs a bit of polishing but I'll keep an eye on this. I'm curious as to where all the dislikes are coming from, it went from 20-5 to 30-31. :rainbowhuh:

4262991 what do you mean? After reading you comment I checked the feature box, but the only Fic of mine I saw was wings, a horn and hooves:rainbowhuh:

4263826 Check right now its featured when I just checked.

4264857 i see it popular stories, but not the featured box

thanks for formatting the second chapter its a lot easier to read now.

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:facehoof: Turn off "View Mature" in your settings and check the Featured Box again.

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I have mature turned on, and it's still not in the featured box...

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You had to turn Mature OFF. It may not be in the box anymore.

Comment posted by Argo Invid deleted Apr 21st, 2014

I simply walked passed him

I simply walked past him, or I simply passed him.

And I expect you apology.
Fluttershy was the one closest Scootaloo.”

tares me apart.”

You're tearing me apart, Lisa.

Wait, how in Celestia's name did Fluttershy get pregnant in the first place and the foal in question is Scootaloo?

Daffodils and tomatoes are poisonous to ponies! :pinkiegasp:

I have massive cravings for apples

I can only think of Flutterbat.

So I am thinking.... Going to have twins. One of them will be Scootaloo and the other will be Fluttershy or .... "Fluttershy" (our friendly neighborhood brony).

ok i just have to say this... its spelt gross G.R.O.S.S not grouse. sorry if i sound rude but it was starting to irritate me after so many times.

4267365 not in this show. I've seen the ponies eating them:twilightsheepish:

yes at least someone who read the Maximum Ride series other than me:pinkiesmile:

4269233 are you kidding? I used to love that series! :pinkiegasp:

4269160 Hasbro WHAI HOW DU DIS TU MEIIII:raritydespair:

i am going to read this after school but hope this is good

"If I’m in Fluttershy;s body... I shake"

should be changed to, "Fluttershy's".
Also, the part,

"pony’s body, one of the mane 6, no less,"

you should really spell out the word six if the sentence is going to be more than 5 - 8 words. Other than those and a few other errors I'm not sure of, good so far!

So you're saying that Twilight used dangerous magic on Fluttershy while she was pregnant? That sounds really stupid and irresponsible of both Fluttershy and Twilight. If something went wrong it's not just Fluttershy's life in danger, it's also Scootaloo's life. That does not sound like something Fluttershy would risk nor would Twilight, even in with her utter lack for what most people call common sense, would do. This plot sounds like something out of a soap opera than an actually logical story. I would be less inclined to fight this if Twilight wasn't the one who put Scootaloo in there along with casting the mind spell. Something tells me this is going to make me wary and question a lot of the plot that follows and be less inclined to just suspend my disbelief but I'll continue reading and hold judgement for at least a chapter or 2.

4271992 fluttershy begged her to do it. You honestly think twi could resist her marefriend, especially when said marefriend is fluttershy, when she begs desperately?

4271992 also, twilight used the spell before the scootaloo thing happened. It took a while for the spell on fluttershy to backfire. That will be explained later.

An HiE story? Please, no. Just, no. HiE is dead. It's just a way for bronies to sleep with the Mane Six.

4272484 overused as it is, it is still a promising story type. though i slightly agree with you on the last part:pinkiesick:

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Among tulpa-mancing, mind you.
Are you just here to raise Cain or what?
Speaking of raising, I should raze your barn while I am at it (metaphorically speaking).

4272484 if you don't like my fics, why the hell do you read them? and, for the record, sleeping with twi was the last thing on my mind when i thought of writing this fic:ajbemused:

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