Hi! Call me Comet! ^^ Like many others here i love the show! i have a few fics in the pipeline, the main one being Life in Equestria, which I hope you'll all enjoy! :3
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A man has a car accident and wakes up in the world of the cartoon "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic" as a Unicorn Mare named Twilight Sparkle. Unsure of how this happened, whether it's real or not, he plans to find out why he's here, although he can probably forget being called a "he" for at least a while.
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Huh. This could be interesting.
Simply amazing. I need more!
6425260 Thank you!!!
I'll have a new chapter up very soon!
6424982 I hope it will be! I'm going to do my best to make sure it's as good as it can be! All and any feedback is appreciated! ^^
Why does this have a gore tag, but not a dark tag?
6425260 Who is the pony in your avatar?
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My OC leanescent
6425346 As i imagine the story, it isn't now, nor do I plan it to be that dark to be honest. I plan to go into what happened to "Twilight" after the incident on the road back on Earth in more depth in future chapters, and I imagine it getting quite detailed, which is why I have gore tagged. If anything changes I'll be sure to have another look at the tags!
Looks good so far. I like the premise and the pacing seems ok. A little fast but not too fast. One thing I hope for is that the MC isn't angry at the dude who saved his life for reasons previously mentioned. Plus, please don't have the cliche of trying to get home. It's way overdone and takes away from the story. He knows that he died in his world and he also gets magic. There isn't any benefits of trying to get home.
He asked for it anyways.
Will this fic go deep towards Tragedy (ie, ending(or close enough to count) in tragedy), or should you have used the Sad tag instead?
6426784 It's still early days for this fic, and unfortunately i couldn't use the "comedy" and "sad" tags in the same story, i came to the conclusion that tragedy would work for now and if I found it not essential to the story i could always change it later on
6425599 Thanks for the kind words!!! ^^ you pretty much hit the nail on the head with a few things you said, and everything you covered will be pretty much answered within the next few chapters!
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Ah the tragedy of comitragedy on fimfiction.
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i see no reason why stories can't have a bit of both!
I don't get why there are so many dislikes for this story. I'm loving it overall and it's a nice break from typical HIE stories. Definitely liking the plot and none of the characters seem OOC.
Keep doing what you're doing and I'm sure more people will see this awesome story.
6435758 Thanks so much!!! ^^ i really don't mind since the likes outweigh the dislikes anyway, as far as i see it, it's only incentive for me to improve. I really appreciate the kind words!
Really quick--you say "might as well use the correct vocabulary." It would be more correct to say instead "use the correct vernacular." Vocabulary denotes extra, new words. Vernacular is dialect differences, such as the change of everybody to everypony
Now there's a winning blurb. ^^
6437022 i suppose that would make more sense! There's a reasonable chance it's a word people would be unfamiliar with (don't get me wrong, I know of the word personally, but it's not one you hear day after day) so i may opt to pick a different word with the same meaning to use instead
6437323 Hehe! i just give credit where due! ^^ i loved both of those fics, and if it weren't for either of them i probably wouldn't have started writing myself!
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Vernacular isn't that uncommon of a word. There are less common words out there, like obfuscate and aberration and bombastic. All of which are great words which I have seen in books. Sometimes in writing it is better to use words that are much more direct and less wordy in order to get a point across. Using accurate words makes for better writing than words which are easy to understand but aren't as accurate. It'll help other people learn some better vocabulary as well.
Other Han that, it's an awesome fic. I'll look forward to your next update.
6437965 Very valid points! okay, you've convinced me ^^ i'll make the edit. Thanks for the support also! I'm really pleased with how it's turning out!
Hmm, it keeps getting better and better. Something that I have rarely ever seen is a character who really is the pony they think they were placed into. People with severe schizophrenia who have a false sense of identity will continue to deny who they are and would probably think the same thing our MC is thinking here about not being Twilight.
Plop me in the character's shoes, and instead if what follows in the chapter you get:
Me: *squints eyes, thinking about what I know of Pinkie* OH HELL NAW!!! *climbs the tree (somehow) and enters through the upstairs, and surprises the surprise party*
How I am with vidoegames.
Why didn't Twilight's parent's show up?
Also you better explain what happened to the real Twilight.
Hmm, neat. So he/she has seen the show, but only a little bit. I always think it'll be so horribly cringe worthy if the characters just refuse to accept that someone's been body swapped, but then when it actually happens it's not so abrasive as I thought it would be. Sure it doesn't make sense, but it also kind of does? I can still identify with a character who remains inexplicably determined to believe that Twilight is Twilight. Even if later they're totally boggled thinking "Why in Celestia's name didn't I just listen to you?" I can sort of... see myself doing something like that, if I wasn't as analytical as I am.
6449174 Thanks as always! It's funny you say that, I've always loved the "I was 'X' the whole time" too!! I may do something like that in the future!
6449471 Hehe, I know the feeling all too well! Give me a little time playing something like Pokemon or the Sims and I'll be busy for hours ^^
6449766 Don't worry, i haven't forgotten about Twilight's parents! There is a reason they didn't come.
As for Twilight, here's some food for thought, what if the real Twilight hasn't been mentioned yet for a reason?
I'm not giving any hints away, and what I just wrote could be totally irrelevant, but it's something for you to think about! ^^
6450111 Thanks! ^^ I tended to notice when it came to human turned ponies, they all were either Bronies, Anti Bronies or didn't know anything about the show at all, to the point where they didn't even know of it's existence, so if I could segregate "Twilight" from that trend even a bit, i felt as though I needed to!
More plz plz I need more
6504931 Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed!!! I've been super busy lately but I managed to grab some time to work on a new chapter tonight! So it's funny you comment today ^^
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Omg that guy is me.... except the nother going to college part that is
6505646 I need moooooooooore!!!
WHEN WILL THE NEXT CHAPTER COme out?-?-?-?!?!?!???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!
6779638 Honestly I only have about 50% of the next chapter finished right now, need to find my motivation to start writing this again before I make a new chapter or it'll turn out terrible
Okay! (= I love the story soooooooo much!
Oh wow, I was just thinking of a Life on Mars crossover too.
It is necessary to make a clearance and more descriptions.
You should cut out the "God" part and just have "her" wake as Twilight
And my Twi story might be a zombie but I just updated Lunar Replacement yay for me!
I would like another chapter before I try the story, to know it isn't dead.
I hope this isn't a human turned pony, with exaclty that pony being in his head.
Who is cute pony?
Well, were is the real Twilight Sparkle?
This is totally gonna work girls!
Cool yet another complete waste of time that is destined to sit forever in my graveyard shelf.
party forever...