My life was going fine.
I had a loving family, had a somewhat okay job and was just enjoying life.
That all changed when I randomly found myself turned into the villian, Miranda from the show W.I.T.C.H. and now have to worry about whether the Guardians are coming after me or not.
Sure, I've Folded into Equestria, but how much time will that buy me?
I need to find a way home, fast.
Sex tag because of talk of sexual stuff since the main protag used to be an adult.
Wait. Featured 19/9/2022? There's a rather pleasant surprise. Thank you.
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Things just got a lot more complicated
Nice like what I see so far but I have a question she’s a shapeshifter right what are her limits in that field and does she have the ability to use magic in general or other magic abilities?
Interesting story. I see followed to read more. Just one thing, Kaleb is spelled Caleb.
Author might have other plans but if i were her. I'd ask AJ to introduce me to Princess Twilight and explain EVERYTHING to them. Telling them shes not from their world or the 'other' world . She doesn't remember her real name but the name of the 'body' she currently has. And tell the truth that the body she inhabits is a villain that as evil as Queen Chrysalis, who betrayed her old masters and that the heroes that fought her might pop in to 'arrest' her and might tell them about her crimes.
And list Miranda's crimes to them. Total honesty
Seems interesting 🧐. I hate to be “that guy,” but Is this going to be another case of your writing a few interesting chapters, losing your muse, and on to the next big idea? I love your stories, truly I do. It is just so disappointing when my favorites among your catalog never update. Still though, keep up the good work. Your tales have brought joy to me when I was feeling down.
Conceptually interesting, but I fear I can already predict exactly how it'll go.
You can't beat the classics
I agree
Unfortunately the problem also lies with you, can you even get a clear picture of your "home" and what it looks like, or can you only get vague ideas and images?
Wait really, you just need to trick someone into saying it... that's rather terrifying
Excellent work can’t wait for next chapter
Excellent work keep it up
I'd think about an investment into a good heavy metal anchor in her place. She desperately needs one.
And my condolences.
🎶Hello concosiun my old friend,
you come to torment me again🎶
Great new chapter, keep up you good work.
Are we just going to ignore discord saying
“Not to mention my own daughter…”
I feel like that’s something that should immediately grab Miranda’s attention.
Also sorry to hear about your grandmother.
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Actually, that one's my bad. As I stated in the author's note, I was really drained by the time I finished writing and, due to not actually wanting to have to rewatch the scene where they're all outside the Changeling Kingdom, and since most of it was goingtobethe same anyway, I'd opted to be just copy that bit from my It’s A Screwed Up Life fic and, being as drained as I was by the time I finished writing the rest of the chapter, completely missed that line during the pre-post pre-read
Yeah, it's pretty great
No, but there should have been guards, protections, security measures developed specifically to counter changelings since they all know changelings are still an issue or at least something dangit
It's actually kinda interesting when you think about it, I mean we never really learn anything about that stone like:
What is it?
Where did it come from?
Why does it soak up most forms of magic except changeling magic?
Does it absorb a creatures internal magic?
What does it do with the magic it soaks up?
Is it the reason the Badlands are the way they are?
Why does destroying the throne cause the effect of the stone disappear?
I'm curious about most of these things but as I was writing this I got even more curious about what the stone does with the magic it absorbs?
Not just her plans, she placed their Hive in the middle of a wasteland far away from any potential foodsource, which probably forces them to expend a fair amount of energy just to travel to and from the Hive, thus decreasing the amount of food any harvester (or whatever they're called) returns with
It is, especially since she was immediately thrown back into Equestria after said "old man" got what he wanted
Weren't you stone for a millennia?
Yeah I'd imagine it would
I'd imagine so
Understandable, take the time you need
Good to know, though now I'm just wondering if you can make an Astral Drop of an Astral Drop an dif could make an army like that?
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Chance are likely that the stone throne is the reason why the Badlands are in a sorry state in the Season 6 finale and why flora reappeared in a short amount of time considering what we see in To Change A Changeling.
soo close...
Doubt that was an accident. Discord talks about some huge magic an old guy wouldn't be willing to do being necessary to make an Altermere, and right after some old guy bumps into Will of all people? He did some shit.
For Gregor, Grogar is the obvious answer but a bit unsatisfying - imo, beyond background details there shouldn't be a significant divergence pre-Miranda, so why and how would he have come to Earth that quickly? Of course, it could be he noticed the time dilation weakening and came to earth for the Heart of Meridian, like so many other villains. He'd also have a good lock on Equestria, potentially allowing him to know where Miranda came out of the Fold if he kept track of travel to/from Equestria. This is the answer I rate as most likely.
On the WITCH side, the runics are villains in the WITCH comic, but they're all young, so maybe a backer? I'm just going off the wiki here which isn't the most complete.
Okay i'm so pumped for this! Big fan of WITCH and to be honest and Miranda was one of my favoirte characters from it, so eager to see how it plays out. Don't think Miranda and Cedric's species were ever really delved into though most fics i've read have called them shapeshifters.
Also minor thing but Caleb's name is spelled with a C not K, just want to point that out. Oh and if interested can send a link of where to find episodes from WITCH and MLP along with many other shows that you can watch online for free.
Brilliant chapter and can't help but wonder what angle Discord might be working. One theory I have is the's Gregor, as that does sound like Grogar and perhaps he wants the astral drop for the real miranda to make a comback.
Another excellent chapter with Miranda using her powers for the first time, and us learning some very interesting lore in Discord previous experience with the guardians and Equestria formerly having it's time accelerated compared to the other worlds. Kinda of curious how Nerissa did that don't recall any power from that, but guessing Heart of Kandrakar played a hand.
Seriously this story is really off to truly brilliant start, and so eager to read more.
I’ve got to say that I too lean towards Grogar, the original lord of the shadow realm Tambelon one not the discord in disguise one, simply because the names “Gregor” and “Grogar” are similar enough that “Grogar” could be misheard as “Gregor” if Grogar was banished to the earth either without his magic or with reduced magical power. Also the Grogar vs Gregor thing seems like something that would be pulled in the mlp verse as ponies in general seem rather gullible.
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Ditto.
I'll be honest...I no idea what the heck you are writing now.
I can't follow the plot, you changing things and the number one theme is the main character gets knock out all the time so there a skip and ....UGGGHHH...I got a headache trying to figure out what is going on now.
But feels like your being lazy in writing the story big scene coming up knock out the main character so can skip it.
Big event coming knock out the main character to skip everything.
Give her a random super power..knock her out to avoid explaining or making sense.
I have no problem with the MC getting knocked around. Also, the Royal Guard being undercover during the Festival makes a lot of sense, thank you for that.
No kidding, and some should really tell that girl to not walk through mysterious portals that appear in her room
Well I mean, no one around here seems to have heard of him, so he's probably not "all that"
Hmm
Starlight knows good old Fizzlepop... that should be interesting in the future
It also makes sense
That's gotta feel weird
That's because you based your opinion of him after a few minutes of screen time from a cartoon show meant for very young kids
That might be true... for "Miranda", but you're not Miranda, or at least not all of you is that Miranda. One part of you is from someone else and who knows what that part is now capable of after everything that's happened
Let's be fair, she kinda was
It can not good for her health to go unconscious this often
She said she got stoned
Basically
Another great chapter and still loving this as the plot thickens. New abilities, the MLP movie getting some fun twists with the ponies actually putting up solid defense with help from miranda, and of course a mysterious party scheming and sending Lillian through a fold to Equestria.
Questions up in the air what's going on with Miranda's abilties what can't she shape shift and whats the deal with the new powers, and just why did whoever it was send Lillian there at all?
Not suprising
I'd imagine it would
While yes, Celestia probably does need a vacation, she's most likely not wrong about the "dormant magic potential" part.
I think I wrote a comment about how Miranda is, not entirely "Miranda" and we don't really know much about who this Miranda really is or what she could end up being capable of
Exactly
Yeah putting all your faith and trust in a mystical artifact of unknown origin, made for an unknown purpose has never ended badly at all.
And yes it is unknown, at this point in cannon no one knows where the Tree of Harmony came from or what it's purpose really is, and so anything that comes from it are likewise unknown.
And during that day you've read the same book a dozen times... must be a short but interesting book
Listen to those instincts, they're probably not wrong
That sounds absolutely ridiculous
Hmm, it might have tried but couldn't touch it and the flash from earlier was it trying
It's good to hear from you again, mellonin.
Another excellent chapter and wonderful work. :)
Probably a good idea
I'm Miranda in this scene
This chapter felt much more like a progressive info-dump than anything else, we got a bunch of "tell" and not much "show" to go along with it.
Still, nice to see an update.
Pinkie doesn't talk for most of the chapter, i actually forgot she was called by the map as well, and she is barely any help.
I think the whole chapter would feel the same without her.
...I'm sorry what
Cause you touched something you probably shouldn't have
And the ugliest one around
...did you seriously just come here to gloat/monolog?
Good question, Gregor called the Miranda lookalike his "granddaughter" so for some reason I'm not as suspicious of him as I would have thought... could rather easily be wrong though
Good chapter, just one ting, Halinor was the FIRE Guardian.
Naturally, and have fun
Okay. I think I might have missed it from the last chapter, but didn't the HuMane 7 get transported to Ponyville as well?
Heh, yeah
It's right next to you
I wonder if that's because they're in Equestria, or if it has anything to do with them using a Fold to get there from the EQG world
Give it a moment
That, she can do that... and more when she figures out how
Yeah, classic second-rate villain mistake
Well current theory is that the Heart of this world made her a Regent or Guardian at some point, probably during the invasion
Read it all in one sitting. It has been entertaining if confusing, since I've never seen or read W.I.T.C.H. Will probably have to check that out at some point.
Is she a spider totem from Marvel now? It would make sense since she has the basic spider-man power set. Even a minor spider sense that comes from the whole web of life. With the whole infinite realities thing that's going on the Web that connects the multiverse together would fit and explain some why Miranda is the way she is now.
I'd say the only thing I actually don't like about this story so far is that awkward contraction in the title. Everything happen a bit too fast, but story doesn't seem to suffer from that. Please keep going. XD
And seriously if Runic somehow isn't Grogar and actually not a bad guy I'll applaud to you.
...oh
I sure hope so
Couldn’t Miranda just “give” her power to the guardians, like what Lillian did with her baron’s?
Happy New Year and wonderful way to kick it off! I'm loving the twist thing are taking and the plot is getting quite intriguing on deeper levels, quite excited for how they will get Miranda the good one situated on Earth. Not to mention whether or not can still expect things from the MLP side to come into play as the W.I.T.C.H side starts to really come into play which love by the way.
Hmm also been wondering if should expect anymore crossovers to appear in this fic?
Thats a slipery slop you have there, Oracale. Walk carfuly or you might slip.
So did mine... granted what I know of the Flash Stone is second hand information from another story here on fimfiction
No rest, becous the univers is wiked.
Given what eryone has said so far... unlikely
Dash, style matters
The man makes a good point