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Manes


Coffe a day, keeps the world around me grey.

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When Scootaloo comes to visit Rainbow Dash for a sleepover, she catches her hero having a nightmare about losing her. Will this sleepover bring them closer, make their bond stronger?

Special thanks to Music Within Us, CogWing, and Fantasia Archsage for the help.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 103 )

Well done! :twilightsmile:

4249770
Thank you:twilightsmile:

This isn't one of your better ones? You're either a liar or deluded! :trixieshiftleft:

Lovely Rainbow/Scootaloo character stuff. Thoroughly enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

“You was acting all weird, Rainbow.”

*were

4249871
Thanks for pointing that out:twilightsmile:

Awww...
Touching story Manes. :twilightsmile:

The feels are coming out like a dam waterfall

4249912 Is that good?

4249811 you may think it may not be one of your best, I say it was & still is totally awesome. You gave your readers a good idea about just how much Rainbow Dash cares for Scootaloo, & that in it self makes this story both awesome & well worth while. ;)

it was good but it did not make me cry.... oh well

4249920 I real like your story. Scootaloo fan. Hey want to check out my Scootaloo story named Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

4249961
It wasn't suppose to, but I'm glad you enjoyed it:twilightsmile:

4249971
This isn't the place to promote your story, mate.

A nice story and interesting idea, but it has some serious formatting/editing issues. Not sure what else to say. Good job.

I believe in Scootadash now :heart:

4250085
Awesome.:twilightsmile:


4250045
Thanks.

4250178
Thanks babe.:heart:

Manes, your work is brilliant as always, I truly felt the fear in Rainbow when she was having the nightmare. Keep up the truly fantastic work! :pinkiehappy:

This was a very touching story. :pinkiehappy:

I... This... Oh god, the feelings :fluttercry:
This was just... D'awww :heart::heart:

Just... just...

FEEEEEELLLLLS!!!!!! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershbad::raritycry::raritydespair:

4250426 Thanks for the screenshot buddy:twilightsmile:

“Maybe I was a little too excited to put it on.” She said, making a pinch gesture.

Wait... How did Scoots do that? :rainbowhuh:

This was a nice story. :twilightsmile: The nightmare scene was kinda weird for me, but it was still sweet.

her voice sounded crack.

[Insert cocaine-related joke.]

But really, how can that happen?

Geez what is it with me and tears? It's only 8:50, which is early when i dont have school and I've cried 9 times! I should limit sadfics. But great story!

4250543 :rainbowlaugh:I need to change that.

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I don't know . . . If anypony would snort crack, it would be Rainbow. Well, maybe.

4250810
No Pinkie Pie will be the one. It HAS to be her.

4250817
Fluttershy: it's always the quiet ones.

4250831 :rainbowlaugh:Holy shit! Or Princess Celestia: always the calm and professional ones.

A very good short fic about rd and scut. Have a like

4252004 u really need to point it out to everyone to see?

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Celestia's like, "You really think I can do my job sober?" :rainbowlaugh:

Awesome story, by the way. Love the idea of Rainbow Dash needing Scootaloo as much as Scootaloo needs her. :scootangel:

My one complaint... the overuse of 'squirt.'
Made me feel dirty.

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