Coffe a day, keeps the world around me grey.
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When Scootaloo comes to visit Rainbow Dash for a sleepover, she catches her hero having a nightmare about losing her. Will this sleepover bring them closer, make their bond stronger?
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Yay! The story is up!
4249766
Finally.
Well done!
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Thank you
This isn't one of your better ones? You're either a liar or deluded!
Lovely Rainbow/Scootaloo character stuff. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Thank you
*were
4249871
Thanks for pointing that out
Awww...
Touching story Manes.
4249907
Thanks
The feels are coming out like a dam waterfall
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Thank YOU.
4249912 Is that good?
4249811 you may think it may not be one of your best, I say it was & still is totally awesome. You gave your readers a good idea about just how much Rainbow Dash cares for Scootaloo, & that in it self makes this story both awesome & well worth while. ;)
Much like
it was good but it did not make me cry.... oh well
4249920
Yep
4249920 I real like your story. Scootaloo fan. Hey want to check out my Scootaloo story named Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?
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It wasn't suppose to, but I'm glad you enjoyed it
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This isn't the place to promote your story, mate.
A nice story and interesting idea, but it has some serious formatting/editing issues. Not sure what else to say. Good job.
I believe in Scootadash now
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Awesome.
4250045
Thanks.
>looks at the premise
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Thanks babe.
Manes, your work is brilliant as always, I truly felt the fear in Rainbow when she was having the nightmare. Keep up the truly fantastic work!
This was a very touching story.
I... This... Oh god, the feelings
This was just... D'awww
Just... just...
FEEEEEELLLLLS!!!!!!
*Ahem*
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Excellent work.
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No less is what it deserves.
Congrats!
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4250426 Thanks for the screenshot buddy
Wait... How did Scoots do that?
This was a nice story.
The nightmare scene was kinda weird for me, but it was still sweet.
[Insert cocaine-related joke.]
But really, how can that happen?
Geez what is it with me and tears? It's only 8:50, which is early when i dont have school and I've cried 9 times! I should limit sadfics. But great story!
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I need to change that.
4250542
Fixed.
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Thanks!
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I don't know . . . If anypony would snort crack, it would be Rainbow. Well, maybe.
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No Pinkie Pie will be the one. It HAS to be her.
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Fluttershy: it's always the quiet ones.
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Holy shit! Or Princess Celestia: always the calm and professional ones.
A very good short fic about rd and scut. Have a like
D'awwww...
4251828 lol, he said scut
4252004 u really need to point it out to everyone to see?
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Celestia's like, "You really think I can do my job sober?"
Awesome story, by the way. Love the idea of Rainbow Dash needing Scootaloo as much as Scootaloo needs her.
4252062 Yes... Yes I do
4252088 no coment
My one complaint... the overuse of 'squirt.'
Made me feel dirty.
4250308 Dat avatar doe