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I enjoy making entire worlds from the ground up. I don't create to give people morals, or subtle political opinions, I create to give experiences people would otherwise not have.



Scootaloo has been feeling worthless and ignored recently, she wonders what would happen if she were to just, disappear.

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Keep writing this story!

Continue. Now. I need to see this. :rainbowlaugh:

NOW they'll see that :scootangel: is amazing

Since we are able to see because light reflects off the back of our eyeballs, wouldn't Scootaloo be blind right now?

...Oh yeah. I'm talking about a talking orange horse with wings. :derpyderp1:

Anyway, this is an enjoyable read, and I'm looking forward to the rest of it. The only crit I'd have is that Discord popped up awfully fast, but then again, he is Discord.


I know, I had that same discussion on Halloween, because my friend went as the invisible man. So a conversation ensued about the inner workings of they eye.
and then this conversation

Invisible man: At least I'm not a virgin.
Me: Pics or it didn't happen.
Invisible man:Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...

BS answer: magic
Answer that makes sense: magic.

And as for discord popping up. it could be explained as he's discord, he doesn't make sense. Or it could be because he is a lot like Pinkie Pie, he even said that the element of laughter was his favorite, he probably feels sympathy and wants to solve it in the only way he knows how. Chaos!


Superman was telling Batman about the weird day he had. "So I'm flying along and I see Wonder Woman lying on the beach, completely naked and spread-eagled! I thought I'd swoop down for a Super-quickie."

"Was she surprised?" Batman asked.

"Yeah," Superman answered, "But not as surprised as the Invisible Man on top of her."

*hangs head in shame*


i sense a tf2 referance....could be wrong though

Maybe, depends on what your sensing.


3575922 spys invisi watch


3576208 yay! what i win?

You'll get an honorable mention in the next chapter.


3576686 ...wait...relly?

More of this is required... please. Soon. Maybe?

The Fez of course! (Sorry if anyone pointed it out already, mobile version)

Nope, but that colt is actually in the show, he's called "Truffle Shuffle". In the episode about the school newspaper, Diamond says that nopony reads the newspaper, and it shows a kid in the back of the class in a fez reading the paper.
someone else already got the reference.

Interesting. *scratches chin* Very interesting. Can't wait for more.:twilightsmile:

I too, think this story is interesting. You shall have a thumbs up and a follow from me. :pinkiehappy:

~ Super-Brony12




Can I plz has more?:pinkiehappy:

I was wondering what all the "0s" and "1s" were about in that one part. Thanks for explaining that.:twilightsmile:

And about that, and being too lazy to use said binary decoder, in my case, it's not a case of being lazy; it's a cae of I don't know how to do that.:applejackconfused::applejackunsure::ajbemused:

3585703 notice the green numbers at the end, that was a link to a binary decoder. just plug it in and hit the decode button.

3585740 Thanks for the heads up; I didn't even notice that the numbers at the end of that were green until you mentioned it here.:twilightblush::twilightsheepish:

Anyway, I did as you suggested, and sure enough! what you said it translated to in your Author's Notes was there in front of my eyes. Thanks for the tip. And the link.:ajsmug::twilightsmile:

*grin* That's reformed Discord for you. A good deed... in the most chaos-causing way possible.

Adopt as sister or mother?


I haven't written that part yet, so you'll just have to wait and see. It will probably be done no later than Saturday. I'm in the process of writing the chapter now.

I like it. I am moving this to the Accepted Folder in The Perpetual Discussion Group.
Mr. Flare

ok and please make that side story thing that you said you will and i would like to see a sequel for this story to be made and i like it :pinkiehappy:

Hmm it was good

Me like. :trixieshiftright:

Good job man. It was a good idea and a fascinating story. :pinkiehappy:

I would recommend getting an editor, if you want this to get bigger. It had a fair amount of mistakes, but not enough for me to overlook the story. Good job, I really enjoyed. :raritywink:

Good story. Would like to see a sequel.

Nice. Very Nice. :twilightsmile:

~ Super-Brony12

Amazing job on this, minimal mistakes and a very good plot! It was a bit quick paced in some areas but that's something hard to not do, so you did a really great job overall!

this one was really cool :D
Discord <3

D'awww Discord being that awesome uncle-like figure who does cool stuff for you. Like the real De Lancie when he appears on the show.

Yay Dissy! We need a sequel.

Good story btw.

A really cute story! It felt like a normal episode meant for an older audience. Good feels all around! :scootangel::rainbowkiss::heart::heart:

Sorry but that ponys name isn't truffle shuffle its teachers pet.

Is she sad in the end cause she can't fly

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When I checked, his name was Truffle shuffle, now they added a second name since then "Teachers pet" but Truffle Shuffle was his name first and is still shown in bold to denote that it is the official name.

the 1's and 0's say Soon Scootaloo will see that ponies do care about her

It says that in the authors note. as well as the last set of numbers is a link to a binary translator.

What link and lol it's been awhile soooo uhhh what was my question and what's the link?

The whole post was a link. Green text means it's a link. The link is a blog post. >> link <<

Is she sad in the end cause she can't fly

was the question. However I now notice the distinct lack of a question mark.

4248881 This story is touching.:fluttershysad: Want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

I played "Ace Combat Advance" a long time ago. Probably still have it somewhere, I have just about all of the gaming stuff I ever had.

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