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When Spike drags Twilight out to Sugarcube Corner for something he claims is "hilarious", she discovers that she is the main character of a romance novel... along with Princess Celestia.
Twilight is not happy about this.
Artwork can be found here
Special thanks to Weeping Angel and Servant Of Avacyn for editing it.
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This was better the second time I read it!
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Thank you
still a better love story than twil- ... oh wait....
lol.
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Oh you!
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i just had to do it lol.
perfect opportunity.
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Thank you!
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--InversionZone
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Thank you
in my mind this happened when Twilight realize that she was the protagonist with celestia and luna
Unicorn Princess Twilight YAY!
ha ha, Discord forgot to say "do"
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I love that scene!
best comedy ever
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thanks for pointing that out.
Whoops!
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Thank you
If you take a telescope and look at Mars, but slightly to the left, you can see something in orbit. Yeah, that's my sides.
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Then my work here is done.
What if someone actually wrote the story as a-purposely-cheesy-parody of the actual Twilight on Fimfiction? (Romance, Crossover, Really bad comedy, and Random-as-heck) (Featuring Twilight, Celestia, Luna, and Discord as a sort of self-insert)?
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That would be funny to see
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Weeeellll... Are you?
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Maybe not. Maybe I'm doing a sequel for this.
What would be funny if Trixie plays Twilight in Twilight the movie...
On the subjects on movies, can someone explain why there are so popular? I don't see, even as a cheesy romance movie.
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Yeah the movies were meh.
Canterlot should be capitalized and apparently the princesses like to display painted ladies' underwear if I'm reading this right.
Were rather than was.
What is that word even remotely supposed to be?
Rather funny otherwise.
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Thanks for pointing those out
Wright a terrible parody? Well I can write a terrible song for it but probs not a story. But anyways because all y'all want to see it *challenge accepted*
I thought that the first twilight/mlp crossover I'd read would be bad.
How wrong I was...
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Glad you like it
Oh, Celestia
And featured! Congratulation!
Nice work! Extremely humorous
was I right?
Gonna take a guess and say D.D. Means Discord Draconecous and not some wierd last name
This was...my sides are half past Jupiter...
Not a bad story, but there are quite a few technical errors.
"Laid" is past tense; "lay" is present tense.
Some minor typos here: you're missing spaces in the bolded sections.
Should be "fuss is about".
"a part", not "apart".
Oh my! Sounds painful.
The word "it" is unneccessary in this sentence.
Who is trotting towards the palace here? Twilight? Rainbow Dash? I think is what you are trying to say: "Twilight shoved past Rainbow Dash, and trotted towards the palace."
Oh my... I didn't realise it was *that* kind of story!
I think you mean “COME ON, RAINBOW!”
"many of guards"? Either you are missing a word, or the word "of" needs to be removed.
Also, the "painties" still need to be turned into "paintings".
Twilight is indeed the way to speak. I think you mean "Twilight is that the way to speak in front of a famous writer?”
Huzzah! The Princess has been doubled!
Mares and gentlestallions, please welcome our guest reviewer Princess Luna.
Just a couple of typos here.
Huzzah again! The double Princess has been doubled!
Thank you, Your Highness.
Either a typo, or Discord is turning her into a chicken.
More typos and I took the liberty of correcting the sentence structure.
Highness should be capitalised, and you're missing a word here; "may" or "will" also work.
Not a contraction, so "its" doesn't need the apostrophe.
You need to start paying your editors a bit better...
3994776 Cause apparently the books were really good so lots of people watched the movie, but the ones that stayed through out all the movies are the tweens who "love" the actors taking off their shirts and shit
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Twilights Response: RAGE LIKE A MOFO
Celestia's Response: Oh its discord... who gives a fuck?
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Thanks for pointing those out. I kinda of swore my editors fixed those.
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Thank you
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Those responses is spot on my friend
I love Celestia's reaction, she's like:
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Glad you liked it
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and this is why discord is:
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king
so i leave thou with this:
and i may think discord is a nuisance now that he's reformed.... but he still has his moments. :)
3995937 unless they weren't paintings, and there's a misplaced 'i' in there?
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No they were paintings I just misspelled it
3996629 That's just what an author trying to hide Celestia's hobby would say... which would also explain the distinct lack of fucks she has to give.
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Oh you!
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I love this story.
Yay another chapter!
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Glad you feel that way about the story
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