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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.


When Rainbow Dash decides to pick up Scootaloo and hang out with her for birthday, she runs into something else. This incident leads Rainbow Dash to saving the filly.

Requested By: JourneyCatMLP

Inspired by the song: Metal Core Pony- Keep Faith

WARNING! Song contains screaming. If it's not your cup of tea, don't sip it. But if you're gonna try anyway, would you like a lump of sugar or two?

This is a sequel to: Keep Faith

I found a random image of Rainbow Dash and added my own little additions to it. I do not give or take credit for the image, nor, do I take any credit for the last image that I used for "Keep Faith."

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Comments ( 76 )

Wow just... wow, best story Ive read tonight.

4165159 The punishment for DT, huh? Is this a request?

Also. :rainbowlaugh:

Well done, this story is written magnificently. Good job Cameron! :-)

Oi, it wasn't a trick!!!
Sorry for the false acusation... please forgive me...

No name calling? No name calling?!

Comment posted by Changeling-Drone deleted Apr 1st, 2014

Quick comment, a warrant is a document calling for an arrest. You mean a warranty

4165876 Oops. Good eyes, mate. Thanks. :twilightsmile:

Lovely story to cheer up with. ^^

Just one thing

Wheels levitated the scooter in his aura of magic ('cause he's a unicorn).

I feel like this breaks up the story a little. I understand the intension but maybe just making a reverence to his horn glowing up would be enough to get the point across more naturally.

4166381 Thanks for the opinion. And your feedback. I'll get on it as soon as I get to my house, I'll get on it. :twilightsmile:

I fucking loved this story!! more than the first one. Its a amazing!!! (Not that the first one wasn't good)

Just amazing! I wish I had friends like Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom when I was in elementary school... I wish I could be like that to friends when they were bullied in middle school. Such a great story.

This is excellent. I've seen way too many "Dash rescues Scootaloo from a terrible situation" stories, and most of them go so far down the dark road that it's just too painful to go through even with the hope of the cathartic bits at the end. (And that's leaving aside the stories that just stay dark and end dark, that make me regret picking them up in the first place.) This is a story with a similar premise, but with so much more fun; these are childhood-level problems that get that much easier to deal with when an adult steps in to make it all better.

By far one of the best "Dash saves Scootaloo" stories I've seen, and with everyone completely in character. Dash is protective, quick to rush in when things get out of hand, unflinching no matter what happens, and completely immune to ponies trying to throw their weight around. Diamond Tiara is nasty but realistic, and reacts realistically when called on it (trying to weasel out but quickly giving up). Silver Spoon is the quintessential bully sidekick. Cheerilee here acts like the well-meaning-but-inattentive authority figure, whose first reaction is disbelief and resentment at Dash; that fits her utter lack of reining in (heh) bullies. And Filthy Rich's introspective reaction was one of the best of all, suddenly realizing what he has let his daughter turn into by not paying attention and by getting her off the hook in the past.

4170729 Thanks and sorry about what happened to you in elementary school. I completely understand. Once again, thanks. :twilightsmile:

4170859 Thanks you. Wow, that really put a smile on my face. :pinkiehappy:

4171599 It just makes the story all the better since I can relate. I know a lot of others in the brony community can.

4173101 It seems like it, lately. It's very sad that so many can relate to this.

"Instead," Diamond added. "You're a worthless bitch."

*Grabs shot gun and points at Diamond Tiara's face* say that again i dare you, ok I loved this story it was great

So, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon can't leave Scootaloo alone on her birthday of all days?! :twilightangry2:

And also, thanks for taking my request! I was pretty thrilled seeing my name mentioned! Sorry, I just kinda want more attention on this site. :twilightsheepish:

I enjoyed this. It showed rainbow protecting scootaloo when she needed it.

My only problem is this felt more like the first chapter of a story and now I'm sad it's over. I honestly thought I'd get to read scoots and rainbow bonding more, maybe dash even taking scootaloo in.

Still, this is a good Fic and I enjoyed it. Worth the favourite, the like, the follow and this:twilightsmile:

Nice to see Dashie being noble again.

Aaawww that was so awesome!!!!

4210251 really it should be I who should be thanking you :pinkiehappy:


so awesome :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: the part when RD say "watch your mouth" it's seems my big sis when i say the B-word or something like that..... "watch your mouth lil sis" :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: it make me laugh:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
btw good story :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:


It's an okay follow-up.

A bit predictable and simplistic, and you really could have just attached it as another chapter for the sake of not needing to click through two different stories for each chapter, but now I'm nitpicking. It was worth my time.

Now to continue rolling through my read later list.

What you should've done is handed her to:pinkiecrazy: so that we can all laugh while she painfully and slowly dies::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I love it.:heart:

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