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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.


Some days are tough, others are tougher. For Scootaloo, this is a tougher day. Sticks and stones can break bones, but words always kill me. Especially, when they make you feel worthless and pathetic. Once her favorite idol hears about this, Rainbow Dash is determined to help her out.

You'll be okay, I promise.

Inspired by a song called "Keep Faith." WARNING! The song contains screaming. So if it's not your cup of tea, don't try it. But if you wanna give it a try anyway, don't say I didn't warn ya.

I randomly found the image on the internet and added my own little additions to it. I do not take credit for it. At all. But here's the link that was kindly given to me for this artist: Where's that bloody link. It's gotta be somewhere. I just wonder where it is. Oh wait! There it is!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 67 )

... I want to see Cheerilee actually pick up some slack. Wonder why I think that?

Good one shot, nice and to the point, keep it up :eeyup:

Nice little one-shot.
Excellent message behind it as well.
Nicely done.

Can somepony give me the address to DT and SP? I want to show them my .50 cal anti-matieral rifle... from a far away distance.:moustache:

4135003 can I join you I want to put my 37mm cannon in their face.

The feels!

4135143 I have a dimensional disruption orbital satellite cannon. Can me and it join the fun?

4135469 sure also I would love to be able to bring my BC-155-58 French turreted WW2 mobile artillery with its 155 gun?

4135543 Hey make room for my singularity gun! Blackholes are more flammable than you think.

4135558 okay when do you think we should go?

4135616 Tomorrow as I have shit to do tonight.

I call shooting that damn tiara in half when I shoot DT in the head with my anti-matieral rifle.

4135859 Fine. I just brought the singularity gun to clean up the mess.

I thought I was gonna go "No dislikes? Yay!" But now my spirit has been killed. I think I'm just gonna blow up Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's houses with my US Army tank now.


Still not satisfied.

the feels :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: all so i want to kill DT and SS i shall bring a ray gun.....

This is really good, and it digs deep into Scootaloo's emotions of not being able to fly very well.

However, I think this story is in desperate need of another chapter. You don't have to, but this story just feels so incomplete. Like, you could have a chapter where Rainbow Dash stands up to Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon for Scootaloo. :fluttershysad:

There are definitely some good messages, though:

When someone pushes you down, it's up to you to get back up. Others can call you what they want, but that doesn't mean that you are what they say -Cameron.

Yep, this was a nice read. :twilightsmile:

4139279 Another chapter, huh? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......Nope. But you did inspire me to make another story. Anyways, thank you for the feedback. :twilightsmile:

This story really tugged at my emotions...Great story though!!

Sticks and stones can break bones, but words can be deadlier than stones.

Too true...too true...

Sticks and stones can break bone

but words leave scars that never heal

I really relate to this. Reminds me of my past. Great story and keep up the good work. Now if youll excuse me i think something got in my eye. *starts crying*

4140764 Thank you and sorry about your past. I completely understand, trust me. I probably share the same amount if bullying, more or less. Here. *hands out a tissue*

4140835 thank you*takes tissue* ill read this again when i need to get emotional.:yay:

I cried so hard because of this.
You 100% earned a like, fave, and follow from me.

Thank you. /)

4140808 You got something on your face. *socks you in the face* It was pain, Taythen!

Irony: the fillies whose special talents are wearing a tiara (without being a princess) and being spoiled, are calling "worthless" to the one with enough wingpower to pull a cart with her friends inside ...and catching a train in march. :facehoof:

This was... Good? Well-written, definitely. And sad. But yes, I'd say it was good.

4142894 Thank you. What would you rate my grammar? I've been working very hard at it and I wanna see how well it was. :pinkiehappy:


It ready: three-eighteen PM

Should probably be "It read: three-eighteen PM"

"Why," was all Scootaloo could mumble out.


I gotta get outta here. She suggested.

I gotta get out of here... she thought.

"N-Nothings wrong." She lied.

"N-nothing's wrong," she lied.

Other than those, not much that I saw. It was good.

4140297 Another story, huh? Sounds good enough for me! :pinkiehappy:

I hope Dashie shows DT and SS what they deserve! :rainbowdetermined2:

Right next to the bold words, had a drawing of Scootaloo with a broken wing,

"had" should be "there was" or something

Diamond Tiara and silver spoon were giggling to themselves.

capitalize silver spoon

Scootaloo gave her a glare, tears still welled up in her eyes.

welled should be welling? or something????

blank flank!" All the children
"Scootaloo!" A voice called her.
"Rainbow Dash!" A voice called out.

all shouldn't be capitalized, and A

She started to flap her wings to give her extra speed which proved good use.

should be a comma inbetween speed and which

anywhere." Sweetie Belle replied with worry to her tone of voice.

comma instead of period, also after Sweetie Belle it doesn't make much sense...

"Yeah." Apple Bloom added. "She was supposed to walk with us to the club house after school." Like Sweetie Belle's, Apple Bloom's tone of voice had worry to it.


I can't read this. Theres too many errors so ask someone to check it :ajsleepy:

Just gonna comment here... everytime I see that short desc, it bugs me a little.

"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me."

You coulda twisted this in a bit of a smoother fashion.

"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will always kill me."


"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but those words nearly killed me."

I think that one would fit in this story.

What else...

"Sticks and stones may break my bones, but only words can break me."

"Sticks and stones may break bones, but words hurt so much more."

"The pen is mightier than the sword; the voice, deadlier than the cast stone."

Ooo, I like that symbolic one. Anyway, Read Later'd.

4144035 Thank you for your suggestion. I think I'll go for "sticks and stones can break my bones, but words always kill me." Once again, thank you.


No problem at all, mate, and mighty honored you took one of my suggestions! I wish you happy writing!

The story was cool. A little rushed, but it's fine. I like that the story was inspired by a song. I'm not sure if the song I have in mind is the same as the one that inspired this story. I'm thinking of "Keep Faith" by Metal Core Pony, but I don't see any artist name that would verify that. I think that you should be aware of that.

4145961 That's the same song that inspired me. Metal Core Pony's song "Keep Faith" was the song that inspired me to write this story.

Ah Sticks and Stones can break my bones but words can never hurt me. I learned to hate that saying because I've seen a close friend crushed under a pile of cruel names, just glad I was there to help her through it.

4146134 You're a great friend for doing that for your friend in need. You kinda remind me of my buddy Taythen. He's that guy down there named "FluffyDude100."

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