Note: Not a Nightmare before Christmas crossover, the character is simply based off of Jack Skellington. ALSO, THIS IN AN ANTHRO FIC SO STOP ASKING ME WHY THEY HAVE HANDS AND HOOVES. iF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT AN ANTHRO IS, LOOK IT UP ON GOOGLE IMAGES.
A tomb stone, the first thing I see.
The carvings are corroded away, unlike me.
I can't remember who I am.
I don't even know what I am.
All I know is that apart from me,
There are little coloured ponies in a group of three.
One of which, if I had one catches my eye.
Two of them leave and she's left to cry.
What can a guy do, but to go up and say:
Hello, young one, would you like to play?
::Featured - 25/7/2013::
Chapters (6)
Dear chapter one. I see what you did there.
EDIT: I made this comment before reading the authors note.
Hurr durr.
Question. Is the misspelling of Tomorrow in the chapter 1 title intentional?
since he is an alicorn would mean he ounce was related to Celestia and Luna... right?
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Marrow is the substance inside of a bone.
It is intentional would be my guess.
I LIKE THIS STORY ALREADY !!!!
2930622 Yes, and I know people hate Alicorn OCs but now that his wings are essentially pointless, he's just an overgrown Unicorn now.
I don't know whether to Daaaw, or to shed a tear for the filly.
god this is so awsome
2931271 Glad you like it. I hope you continue to do so.
2931198 Good call on that, by the way.
2931425 Cheers.
What is his name going to be? And how badass can he be without some readers freaking out? I want him to mess up the one that hurt Scootaloo.
Seriously, who could hurt this angel?
slendy?
This story. I like it. Continue it. Please.
ok i'll bite
okay, I like skeleton pony here.
Brilliant my good sir!
glad to see this (insert number here) old alicorn is not a pedophile......always a good start!
2931786 While I doubt that would actually be who it is, it would be kinda funny if somepony assumed that.
Wow, this looks pretty good so far. One note, though, is that you keep saying "hands" and "arms" instead of "hooves" and "legs". It's a bit confusing.
2932959 It's anthro story despite the cover pic.
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Oh! Sorry, should have seen the tag. My bad.
2933041 It's okay.
Wee new chapter for me
2933416 Why are you repeating it over and over?
2933420 S/he is trying to tell you that there is a repeat in the text in this chapter.
So...... What are they
Are they full blown ponies, or basically humans with ears and tails and what... I'm confused
A real nice story line you got going there. Would be awesome if you could somehow send Scootaloo to his world, but i am sure whatever you are going to write next will be incredible. Keep up the good work :)
Sweeeeeeeeeet!
OMGWTFBBQ!!!!
This...is the best anthro fic...ever...of all time.
That description.... it creeps me out. If a pony that looks like a skeleton walked up to me and asked me if I wanted to play. I'm sure i'd die right then and there.
This story is amazing.
2933457 Ah, bugger.
I'm honestly loving the concept of this story, though from what we've heard is that the skeleton belongs to a male alicorn. Perhaps there is a bit more to the phrase Pumpkin King than most people believe?
Though as you've clearly stated this sturdy fellow is no Jack Skellington and is just based upon his likeness. But, if I hazard a guess the reason for the Crossover tag has more to do with what he's going to be capable of instead of what he looks like.
Mainly being a spirit who is loved by all for his care of children.
Oohhhh... Bone marrow.. community.giffgaff.com/t5/image/serverpage/image-id/44220i5C2199C57CD2D3D1/image-size/original?v=mpbl-1&px=-1
2933772 And then you'd be the best of friends... forever
>rape
I am awfull
I was kinda disappointed when I found out this wasn't a Nightmare Before Christmas crossover but I still enjoyed it. Like and fav from me!
2932608 i got mixed with Jack as slender
2933938 yes. Yes you are
Go sit in the corner and think about what you did
I really like this story its very different from the others. Hope to see more soon.
ya know boyo, the last thing i wanted when rolling in to work at the schools and taking my first break was to get caught over extending said break reading an amazingly well written heartfelt story about a WALKING FUCKING CORPSE!
now,damnit now i have to fav this. this irks me. i hate scoots and you,you ass, are making me actually care about the little orange future softball player.
upvoted,faved. god damned great story.
hate you.
Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, and Scootaloo's uncle are harming her?
Time to "live up" to your bony body
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Good story is good...
But why, Anthro? But why.
Where did you pull out those fingers?
Otherwise good stuff!
Amazing story, its quite heart wrenching as well as heart warming.
I will be eagerly anticipating your update.
I like the concept, and the writing is decent. The story seems very rushed to me, though. Regardless, I'll continue reading.
Nice pace + nice idea + lovely story + beautiful characters = this story, good work please continue!
Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about the bullies here. I'm willing to entertain the idea that Tiara would actually move on to physical harm, although whipping seems a bit much. Silver Spoon, however, I can't bring myself to believe that she would go as far as that.