Why does he cry? Because he doesn't know what he is.
Is he an Angel? Never knowing a god's kiss.
How long has he lived? Ask him if you wish.
Will he answer though? He's as fragile as a dish.
Will you love him? Give him what he craves.
Will you hate him? Throw him into the flames.
Opening themes: Hello - Pol Rossignani (Evanescence Cover) - Part 1
I'm Alive - Shinedown - Part 2
I think ill enjoy this story.
Sounds cool, I want to read more if this.
moar.............moar..................moar.............MOAR!
(on a side note, I dont know why but this makes me think of "Evil Angel" from Breaking Benjamin" for some odd reason)
I thought of this song when I saw the title
Really good story so far please keep this up.
2783783 Will do.
2783793 Hooray !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[intrigue intensifies]
You have my attention, good sir. Another story with an internally interesting protagonist.
don't you dare ever even think about not continuing this story!
this is the most interesting story i have read in awhile and i really want to see more
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You must finish what you have started my dear friend...
2785106 I shall.
Damn is this good! I can't wait for more of this!
damn, this is good. I can't wait for more and for the story behind him.
Daaaaaaw.
2784884 New Chap! Yaaaya!
if only he had glasses.....
I'm amazed, jealous, and even more amazed. I love you.
He fell asleep reading and was thrown outside? A heavy sleeper, much like myself.
Ancient Equestrian history always has tickled my fancy. I've a head canon that's ever eager for expansion.
I can't seem to decide whether to like this or not. I'll fave for the meantime.
Please sir, Can I haz some moar?
its a good story but for some reason i am having trouble visualizing this guy, maybe its just me, cause what really threw me was the description
Love you as an author, also I like the drawing where did yah get it ?
2793390 I was looking for a Vasto Lorde from bleach in wolf form and he came up a little while through.
Cool
good story so far.
also this chapter is good.
awesome
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Eheheheheh, I'm glad I'm not the only one who found that a little amusing. I imagined the funniest thing in my head during that scene especially based on the picture.
Awesome..Just Awesome.
Its good. Now lets try finishing it this time
I was kind of expecting an Okami crossover.
Ah whatever, I'll read it anyway.
more plz
so shiro is the badass older brother that never lost, made a very stupid mistake, drowned in his sorrow for 1500 years and is coming back
now what about luna?
2829799 I'm wondering how to approach that topic myself.
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR VICODIN!! ITS RAIN'IN VICODIN!! AND I'M LOVE'IN IT!!
P.S. good chapter. Now if you'll excuse me, I must return to giving Vicodin to everypony in Equestria!
That was unexpected... Never saw Celestia as the violent type. You think you know a mare...
This entire story has me wondering: what the living fuck?
And there's the cliff hangar damn really wondering what Shiro did to piss everyone off..
Discord?! Awww sheeeeit!
another good chapter.
THis is getting interesting!!!!
And hes HUNGRY LIKE THE WOLF
Whats he after!?
2847301 What would you be after if you'd suffered a life changing event that riddled you with guilt throughout your days and nights?
2847301A house with Blackjack and Hookers
2847346 the end?
2847372 Okay, I'm not sure if that's an answer, or you're asking me if this is the end of the story (to which the answer to both is HELL NO!!!)
2847386 NOT what i meant, i was talking about a way to kill himself once-and-for-all, type thing
2847395 Well he did search at first, but to no avail, obviously.