Family Secrets

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Some secrets are best kept hidden. Celestia learns that the hard way when a ghost from her past comes to pay her a visit.

A special thanks goes out to Mushious for helping with edits.

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Emerald_Sparkle

Emerald_Sparkle #1 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · ·

I am now on the brink of tears you are a... this is a... Wow.

Acespadez1134

Acespadez1134 #2 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · ·

3137763 Thank you for reading it. glad you like it

Emerald_Sparkle

Emerald_Sparkle #3 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · ·

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Your welcome! I really do love this story. It is amazing, YOU are an amazing author.

ShimmerShine

ShimmerShine #4 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · ·

Wow this is a great story.Brought me to tears

Acespadez1134

Acespadez1134 #5 · Sep 2nd, 2013 · · ·

3140305 glad you like it Thanks for reading.

Acespadez1134

Acespadez1134 #6 · Sep 2nd, 2013 · · ·

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wolfstorm56

wolfstorm56 #7 · Sep 3rd, 2013 · · ·

Very sad story but I really enjoyed it. You did a lot here with just one chapter and it all works really well together. There were a few typos that I can point out to you in a PM if you want to fix them but they didn't detract from the story you crafted. That tragedy tag is especially warranted in this case. Upvoted and faved. :)

Acespadez1134

Acespadez1134 #8 · Sep 4th, 2013 · · ·

3152189 thank you for the read. It was kind of a fun write but it got hard as it went on. if you wanna send me a message on this to the corrections I need to make I will correct them. Thanks for noticing them for me.