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The Grimm Reaper


The Grimm Reaper is the writer of the 'Darkness Duology', 'Immortal', 'They Come at Night... Mostly!' and 'Only Bone Deep'. Among others.

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This story is a sequel to Bardock Lives


Note: This is a side-story to Bardock Lives. Goku replaces Bardock as the Alien visitor.

Goku has realised that neither he nor Frieza will escape Namek's destruction. With the tyrants ship destroyed, the universe's strongest warrior has no choice but to accept his death with grace. That is until he spots a space pod, one with the Ginyu sigil on the hatch.

Twilight has been looking forward to a night of stargazing with her friends and family. She'd literally been counting the seconds until the day arrived. What she wasn't expecting was a large grey orb with a red eye to fall from the sky.


Takes place between seasons 2 & 3 of MLP

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 41 )

I'm liking it so far and can't wait for more. I only have one problem and it's Luna invaded goku's dreams and memories hope that doesn't happen.

5908607 Well I figured that Goku's training under Mr. Popo and Kami would have allowed him to block such mental probing. After all, the training he underwent was both mental and physical.

Before I read, is this proper or TFS?

This is going to be awesome. This story was uploaded on my brother's birthday.

:pinkiehappy:

When goku arrives.

Me: Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

Luna: get a stretcher we need to get this being to a doctor immediately!

Me: No no no no no no no!



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I agree with you. All I heard was egghead stuff

Ah.
Been too long ago to remember most of what happened and was said in the proper.
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Except Season 1, but that's because I got the dvd collection of it.

I've always enjoyed the Goku in Equestria fics. He's just so damn innocent that he fits in so well.

Just one little thing.

A herbivore maybe

Luna's observations that the teeth were flat AND pointed should have led to a different assumption. ''An omnivore maybe'

Unless you meant what you meant and I made a whoopsie, I'm sorry.

5914376 no, you're right, I meant to say omnivore. D'oh!!

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And as I recall, training at over 100x Earth's gravity gave him the power to read minds, himself. No wait, it was the muffin button that gave him that power.

5918372 lol. Actually, I think his training under King Kai gave him that power, he just had no reason to use it until he arrived at Namek.

Small question: What made you stop writing Bardock Lives? For all I can tell, it looks like it was cancelled.

Btw, this was all I could do for an already awesome picture. Sorry. :fluttershysad:

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(The name text is quite similar to the one I have on my profile pic, yet with a few changes. And of course, I added a light orangey-brown saturation. Just to spice it up.) :pinkiehappy:

5934736 This is awesome, thanks. And Bardock Lives isn't cancelled, I'm just not sure where to go with it. Short of bringing one of Frieza's relatives into the fray, which would be too much like 'Episode of Bardock', I just don't know what to do.

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Would making a cover "art" of Bardock Lives help at all? :pinkiesmile:

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Yea, lol. I'm not the best with these things, so I've been told. :rainbowlaugh:

Please update soon this looks really promising

A legitimate crossover?
A promising premise?
A great author?

COUNT ME IN! HAVE ALL OF MY LIKES AND MY LOVE!

LORD DIO IS PLEASED!

A sequel to an incomplete fanfiction that hasent had an update in a couple years?

6051209 not really a sequel, more of an Alternate Universe thing, like my star wars fics.

.... And thus Equestria made it's first official contact with an alien being, who also happens to be the most powerful warrior in the universe. Well that isn't asleep or sealed at the moment.

Say does anyone keep hearing the cries of the CMC? Cutie Mark Alien Catchers YAY!

"How come Twilight gets the cool mane style while I get mom hair?" Rainbow muttered to herself.

*scrolls back up to the image of Rainbow*

More like milf hair.

"Just wanted to look presentable for him. Have we confirmed that he's even a 'he'?" Twilight asked.

Luna was the one to answer. "The Doctors have indicated as much, given that his reproductive system seems similar in principle to a stallion's," Luna couldn't hide the blush that grew as she brought up the topic.

Oh yes. Strange alien being lands on Equestria and the first thing on their minds is his penis.

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Most powerful warrior in the universe, and he has a brain the size of a peanut!

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Goku isn't an idiot or at least in sense like someone like Homer Simpson or Peter Griffin. Goku is just really simple-minded and dense to well a lot of things. An idiot wouldn't be able to use techniques like the Kaioken or survive in battles against enemies like Piccolo, Vegeta and Freeza!

But he is an idiot in the sense that he doesn't pay much attention or even care for some social norms, he did grow up alone in the mountains since his adoptive grandfather died. He did learn as he traveled the world and Chi Chi most likely hammered them some manners into him. But overall I think will without a doubt answer honestly when asked about himself. Like for example:

Tell us about yourself Goku.

Oh well I was raised on this planet called Earth, I sent there as a baby to conquer it since I belong to this alien warrior race called the saiyans. They were hired by other races to wipe out dominant species of other planets for a price and were really good at it. I would have done the same but an old man found me and took me in, raising me as his own despite my violent attitude. Then one day I fell down a cliff, busted my head on a rock and I nearly died but because of that I forgot my mission and lost my aggression. Still though I loved to fight and train to get stronger in order to fight even stronger opponents......

Yeah I'm going to stop there but my point is that Goku will be honest with the ponies and will without a doubt make a very unique and awkward first impression.

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More like milf hair.

Strange alien being lands on Equestria and the first thing on their minds is his penis.

Well remember, they were examining his physiology so they could heal him to the best of their abilities. From a doctor's standing, the reproductive system would be something of note if it were similar in a way to their own.

Did someone say.....MILF?

i look forward to the next chapter :DDDD

I have to wonder if even Pinkie Pie can keep up with Goku's appetite??? I can't wait to see how the ponies react to Goku's backstory. But I'm sure his manners at the table will have Rarity collapsing on her fainting couch. And we need to see him have a flying race with Rainbow Dash.

I have a felling that this is going to happen in the near future
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still love the story.

All right I love it already! :D

PINKIE VS GOKU EATING CONTEST!!!

This must happen!

Well looks like this story is dead oh well.

hey, will you no longer continue the story?

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