Fluttershy writes a letter to her best friend, Rainbow Dash. But before she gives the letter to her, she reads it one last time to make sure it is perfect for her.
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My name is Cameron. I am a musician, a writer, a singer, and a member of the band Bless Our Demise. My stories are mainly sad because I believe in expressing my emotions through stories...and songs.
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A bit predictable, but not a bad little tale.
It's three dots for an ellipsis. Always.
You shouldn't use quotation marks for emphasis. Stick it in italics. Actually, hang on: if she's quoting Rainbow Dash, you can keep the marks, but the full stop shouldn't be inside them.
Capital B.
That Read. Graves don't actually speak.
Capital H.
I wasn't aware that Fluttershy didn't know how to use commas.
5100242 we think alike
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Thank you.
5099506 Thank you for your feedback.
5100329 I think I would prefer to use as much of my knowledge on grammar as I could. But I guess since I was speaking from the view of Fluttershy, I should probably get rid of that comma.
5100329 Wait...shit...I just realized you put down didn't and not did.
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You're welcome.
*steady stream of tears* That was a very good way of putting her death, instead of shoving it down our throats.
5107819 Um... thank you?
Poor Dash....
Good story.
5140946 Thank you.
I have held onto this story for sometime now... My heart aches when I think of the friends I have lost oversea's, visiting the graves always breaks my heart and this story is closer to the truth than one can imagine. Losing someone is hard but remembering then the way they were... It was an honor to serve with those men... keep writing great stuff
*sigh* In the first few paragraphs I knew Dashie would be dead. I just knew it... But that didn't make me any less upset over it!