Are you ready, kids? Also a thingy so my pizza funds don't run out anytime soon.
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Spike takes care of Twilight the best he can. She's sick, but he knows she'll get better and everything will get back to normal. But first, he needs to feed her.
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You glorious bastard.
H-holy shit. That was something else.
I did not expect you to come up with something like this, Bob. Nice job.
I'm scared Bob. Hold me.
A very dark, almost frightening take on what seems to be a post-apocalypse setting. This seems to be an exercise in both the Dark genre and plot-driving by way of a single character's dialogue, and I think you pull it off pretty well. I figured out the ending early on (but that's mostly the Tragedy tag's fault, not your writing), but it still creeped me the hell out. The one point of criticism I can make was that this might have worked better if it was, say, twice as long. Give it a bit more time to develop, maybe, and then the ending would have had a better impact.
Still, an enjoyable read.
YESSSSS.
Creepy times are here!
Loved it, man.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Spike in this fic:
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Well this just jerked me dry.
You magnificent yellow sponge.
That was pretty okay right there.
Well, in a twisted way, you held true to the promise of the chapter title.
A most enjoyable tale of denial and desperation, though one in need of some editing. Still, thank you for it.
I think I shit myself.
Well... That was something...
*descended
Why does he need the match? Did he forget how to breathe fire?
I wonder how Pinkie made zombie cupcakes that turn you into an actual zombie. Also wondering what happened when Discord ate one. Chapter 2?
Damn, his own finger. They got expensive diets.
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--InversionZone
Woah, Spike's gone off the deep end
Hoh shit. That's a thing that just happened. A dark, good, scary thing. Nice work, RainBob.
3993706 No... he's infected too, you see.
So Spike's gonna cut off his fingers so he doesn't get sick and then feed them to Twilight and Dash?
Damn. Just, damn.
This is one of those stories that could use a little more meat on its bones. The most obvious question to ask is what about the other alicorns?. I'd imagine they'd be a little more careful than Twilight, and the Crystal Empire's natural cold would prove a valuable defense. Nevertheless, I liked it, but it could have used a little more.
Oh, Spike. You should know by now that you want to crush the damaged appendage away, not cut it off. Use some pliers for Celestia's sake!
Really, you're going to bleed out if you keep that up.
He would make a fine Governor
0_o....
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Why is this soo good?....
How long has it been since this first uploaded? 2 hours? Now it's already in the popular stories box...
But it is bob so of course it's good
THIS. This right here is what I have been searching for for a while. I just wish it were longer
3994410
That's what she said.
I hate you. I can't sleep now.
3994516
Cryo, you fucking win.
3994533
This should have been longer.
Spike... I'm real sorry... but I've gotta do something for you...
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Don't worry... It'll be over quick.
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Awesome. Pure awesome.
Well... that was different. A good different though.
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Aaaaand here comes the nightmares for tonight.
Ah, yes, a wonderful read just after midnight. I think I'll lie down with a few nightmares now, thanks.
There's so much beauty in the dirt it'll make you cry
In the dark ... somepony farted.
3994962 you monster
3994790 maybe... say 8 minutes after midnight?
3994005 EVERYPONY IS INFECTED! except for me, of course. Because I washed my hands like a big boy.
Goddamnit Bob, how do you do this? How do you pull at the heartstrings like this? Are you a *bleep*ing magician?
3994976
It was a forgotten classic of our age.
Well okay then.
3994410 Here you go, I think you'll like this story
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/37198/everything-is-fine
"Chapter 1: Everything Gets Better Eventually"
SHE TURNED ME INTO A NEWT!
Well, that was disturbing.
lets see what i was thinking while reading
at the start- waiting for the messed up zoms
introducing twi- ah there they are
describing twi- ...neato
mentioning RD- ...spike better not try and feed her to twi
describing RD - disturbing.
describing RD's wings- ah, there's the feels.
me to the end - I'd still love zom zom dashie. I'm faithful to the end!
...
Bob can we have a happy RD fic now?
Pwease?