War is at the border of Equestria, Princess Celestia has requested an old tradition. The elements of Harmony are to choose one among them to enter the war, but will that pony be the same once she comes back? Or will that pony even come back alive?
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Needs more work, I can lend a hoof if you wish.
1135111
I've been helping proofread but didn't want to change too much in terms of wording.
Oh, and Princess is spelled with two s's. Fix that in your description. >.>
I dunno... Usually most of the stories have something that catches me... but this story... doesn't have it... Uhm...
I need to think about this...
Pretty good fic, but with it saying "Tragedy" and "Dark" in the tags; it's almost obvious what could happen next.
There's a few paths this could follow.
-Rainbow Dies/gets severely injured
-Rainbow makes a friend who dies/gets severely injured
-Someone(mane 6?) dies/gets severely injured while Rainbow is gone
-Rainbow gets kidnapped
-Someone else gets kidnapped
If I'm wrong, I will be utterly surprised.
Very good story nonetheless, keep writing.
You may want to find a better editor, though.
1135197
Done x3
1135197
Done x3>>1135371 It is only the first chapter^^ if you read about 1-2 chapter more and it might set the spark you are interested in^^
1135197
Done x3
1135371 It is only the first chapter^^ if you read about 1-2 chapter more and it might set the spark you are interested in^^
1135910
As my edditor say "I've been helping proofread but didn't want to change too much in terms of wording.
"
You might be suprised if you keep reading^^
1136450 Meh... let's see where this ends...
yay so glad you added it back! i has been waiting for it to be back
still yet, im intruiged like last time, and cant wait to see where this goes
For one with dyslexia, this is impressive.
Here is a mustache and a Me Gusta.
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1138067
Well, thank you^^
1139608
Thank you very much
I don't know if you've been to my page but as it says
"I'm a guy with dyslexia, i don't have a problem with getting my ide down on the paper, only to get it correctly down on the paper"
So i managed to get a co-writer along to help me get it right
I love it I want maor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2019096
The funny thing is the story is finished, I just don't have a pre-reader to fix my grammatical errors
I sad
2078659
Yeah
four of my pre-readers quited..... Not by telling me but by not doing a shit for weeks and don't respond to my messages
I will be your pre-reader
2098084 Pre-reader and editor?
Yes
Awesome! When the next chapter comes out
?
2117797 The whole story is finished
I'm just going over it once again before i send it to my pre-reader/Editor so it comes out more nicely
I'm currently working on chapter 2 as we speak
2120346
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Yay, awesome
So unbelievable awesome
!! Can't wait for the next chapter 
!
2240415 Thank you!
I'm working on chapter four whenever i have the time 
Omg I love it so much
2243601 Glad you like it
I love it so much
2281102 Thank you so much
Ah yes, the "War is as good as won" declaration.
As history teaches us, it's worth a flying feather.
Waiting for next chapter.
2283547 I'm thinking about making an alter ending
Daaaw, awesome Chapter; Like always
! Can't wait for more 
!
2287140 stay tuned than
it won't be too long^^
Great chapter dude
2440416 Thanks mate^^
This chapter was amazing!
2444917 Thank you
Keep up the great work!
2444976 Already working on the next chapter as we speak
Great Chapter, like always
! But why that damn twist 
? I mean, nothing can take rainbow down 
!
2446025 Because if it wasn't any twists it wouldn't be any fun!
if you could read out the path in just one chapter what fun would it be 
I am actually re-reading this whole thing again just because it's been so long, am I doing okay at editing it, or does it look terrible?
2459672 It's, to quote mlp " it's about 10% cooler" and knowing who that came from it means it is AWESOME! Thanks you again
I have given up hope on this story
2665386 In what way?
I have waited so long for a new chapter
2668999 yeah, I'm still eaiting to get it back from my editor
nothing i can do about that
It's sad to see RD go,but it was amazing!
2702665 Thank you
thinking about making a Epilogue
2702808>>2702808 that would be amazing!