The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.
Cadence is the most popular girl in school. Shining isn't really popular at all. But when Cadence shows an interest in watching his sister, their worlds collide and suddenly they realize they aren't so different after all -with Twilight stuck in the middle of it.
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I can dig it.
"I.AM.GOD."
I lost it here, good job sir.
Did Twilight read Sonic.exe
This is really good make more or I shall kill you for
I.AM.GOD
lol
I was expecting to see Twilight as an expy of Maia Brewton's character from the movie with the same title. Instead of Sara, I'm seeing Shelley Lewis, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.
I like it, nuff said. I will keep reading if you plan to keep writing
i'm sure with the title it will be similar to the movie =)
i'll mark this down as "read later" so i can see your interpretation of how MLP would be this movie. =)
in one of my stories some ass made a comment and was like, "Yeah, not exactly subtle, huh? Might want to stick the crossover tag on this, author." ugh couldn't this person say Migz instead of sounding so degrading?!?
Sure, why not?(Likes and faves) Off to a good start! Keep it coming!
THIS. IS. AWESOME.
GIVE ME MORE OR I SHALL BOOM YOUR CAR.
Good story, by the way
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3421123. Yup.
I.AM.GOD.............
............ten minute later I can breathe again.
Amazing and cant wait for more, there were a few hiccups like when shining ask for a 'ride' but put 'right' instead but its only small things, apart from that its amazing, HAHA I got that to a-line
This gets a like, a fav, and a follow. Not because you achieved any great feats of literature, but I like your storytelling style and I haven't seen many stories like this. I want more.
All of my
to this great story sir. Hope you can keep it coming.
Eeyup
(Talks while clapping) good job if only I could give u a cookie for you great job
A few minor errors here and there. Otherwise it was an enjoyable read. I look forward to more.
I'm thinking that I'll be following this for now, as it truly is intriguing, even though I hate humanized versions in stories nine of ten times. Curious to see what you have planned.
es una historia muy interesante solo el tiempo su avanse
"I.AM.GOD"
Twilight for President 20-Whatever. JUST MAKE IT HAPPEN!
I can already tell this is going to be a great story.
"I.AM.GOD."
In retrospect, showing "Malice" to a seven year old wasn't one of Shining's brightest ideas.
SO following this to see where and how this goes
3435258 well it it doesn't have to be haha and thanks for the follow!
I like it.
This is pretty interesting. It's not everyday that I get to see pics of the Twilight, Shining and Cadence in such a cute cover art in human form together.
Still cute.
I love Twilight in this story
Twilight is so awesome in this, and so is Cadence but she isn't a god such as Twilight. Or not yet if you want to call alicorns gods
brilliant chapter, just two things, onee san means sister, it is onii san that means brother, two is a sentance saying "
shutI wake them up", this should be, "should I wake them up".Apart from that I really enjoyed this chapter, I find your dipiction of Twi and cady amazing.
For doing this in '2 hours', there's only one error that stands out:
Should.
3465377 ah! Thanks for pointing that out!
XD Priceless chapter. You're good at this.^^
Omg one of the best stories ever
Ein weiteres Kapitel bitte! (Another chapter please!)
So far I'm really enjoying this story
Pretty good and great potential. I shall read on!
I love this story I really do!
Really enjoyed it, when the next chapter.
Do you have an update schedule or is it just whenever you feel like writing? Just curious, 'cause I like to know when to expect updates. You haven't mentioned one so I need to ask. Either way is fine.
3513012 I kinda do a 'when I feel like writing' thing but if I plan on a certain day I would put it in the authors note at the end. :)
Twi, for smart child, you are a dumbass
I'm liking how this is going. Carry on.
Twilight kinda reminds me of Lilo. You know, from Lilo and Stitch. And you know what? I LOVED LILO! Wonderful story, keep it up.
Dang... that was an awesome, well written chapter....
So now shining has to have the courage to ask her to come back. This should be fun. Please continue soon.
Great story, but the constant switching in tense is jarring. it's going to need some editing.
Very nice update, honestly.^_^ Maybe this will teach Twilight, eh?^_^
To answer the rhetorical question: as long as it's entertaining, which it is, I'm game.