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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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We all know that Twilight Sparkle went back to her own world after she defeated Sunset Shimmer. They know it too. So why is it that on their senior trip they see a girl that looks exactly like her?!

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That was never explained in canon. Hopefully a decent explanation would be told.

Oh yeah, where is the other Sunset Shimmer? Maybe pony Sunset murdered her.

Yeeaaahhhh, I've been waiting for this concept to pop up! Okay, I'll bite.

*Looks closely at the book Octavia is reading* Hhheeeyyyyy, I have that issue!

I hope she not dead or got sent to the pony universe.

-fingers crossed- I've always just joked that she killed her.

nice work can't wait to the chapter comes out

i always wondered what happened to the other sunset, i bet sunset killed her...thats what my friends said

What if sunset went all changeling on her, and hid her somewhere until she died, OR she killed her. :pinkiesmile:

Are we absolutely sure that the Sunset Shimmer we saw in EG was originally born in Equestria, and didn't (for example) mysteriously just turn up in Canterlot one day?

Applejack knocked her upside her head. "You know you can't speak so cryptic around her!" She scolded.

I think the word you're looking for is morbid. Cryptic means mysteriously, purposely leaving out detail. Like the way Celestia talks.:trollestia:

Great story though, I've been waiting for someone to do the "Equestria Girls mane 5 meet Equestria Girls Twilight" idea. Usually it's just referenced, and not the focus.

3352356 ookay thanks! thats the word i was looking for! im gonna fix that now:twilightsheepish:

I suggest you take the AU off here.
Equestria Girls has been confirmed canon.

3352466 yeah its cannon, but it still counts as an alternate world since twilight had to go through something to get to it. :rainbowhuh:

Might wanna dial down the swear words a bit. And the 'oh Celestia' thing doesn't really take since she's just a principal in their world.

3352487 i think there's only one swear word :twilightoops: and i knooow but theres gonna be someone whos gonna complain about the use of 'Oh my god' :ajbemused:

Why would human Pinkie say "Sweet Celestia" ?

Also, is this this world's Sunset? How can she also be a jerk?

3352479 How do you mean?
Both Equestria Girls and MLP take place in the same universe.

So please, take it off.

I have to agree with the comment below me, you said at the beginning that sunset learned the joys of friendship soooo why she a jebby little jeb piece

3352571 because, well i cant reveal what i have planned but there's a very good reason for that

3352547 nope this is Pony Sunset. there's a reason why she's still mean but i cant reveal it yet :pinkiehappy:

“Ah, ah.” Rarity reprimanded her, wagging a finger. “Yes or no answers only.”

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“Dear Celestia

Don't you mean "Dear God"?

Amount of sense this story makes: 0.0

Curious to see where this goes. Especially with Sunset Shimmer.

3352564 Weeelll, considering that this could be an alternate reality of the EqG reality, then the tag can stay ( that is, until we learn more about the EqG reality). :scootangel: :pinkiecrazy:

Is twin telepathy the legit reason that Human Twilight knows things she shouldn't know? Or is it something else and you are going to explain what it is?

Huh...I would have thought they'd arrange to "accidentally" befriend their-world-Twilight and stick around her to stave off questions until she can get settled in. Oh well, let's see where this goes.

Am definitely curious about Sunset and Twilight's connection

I had to give this an upvote solely on the quality of the picture and set-up. I try not to vote before I've read a story, but I really had too. I'll take a gander at it later. :pinkiesmile:

Interesting idea. I like it.

Time to add to the illusive read later list.

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I think you should have saved your vote. This story needs some rewriting. *cringe*

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Well, if the author shows a willingness to rewrite and improve, my vote will remain. I know I always have room for improvement. If the story has problems but the author seeks out an editor and rewrites problems, I'll support them.

i love it and when will more chapters for this story come out

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I hope so. I did start reading because the premise seemed interesting. Also, the picture drew me in too. :pinkiehappy:

So E!Shimmer is still here with P!Shimmer...
There's no reason to believe that having both world's people in the same side for prolonged periods is harmful. It's not time travel after all, and each soul is their own so there shouldn't be a paradox. The Elements work due to qualification, not soul-matching, which was why they're allowed in the foreign world to begin with. Theoretically Shimmer could have activated the Elements naturally after all.
Keep going! ;)

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Maybe like the reason near the end of the movie Rainbow Dash asked what a hand was even though they say things like this got out of hand all the time in the show.

make a new chapter soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease :applecry: :fluttercry: :fluttershbad: :fluttershysad:

Interesting story so far! I'm sensing that Sunset Shimmer had some hand in making sure that human Twilight never went to Canterlot High.

3351626 That's a very good question, but I think we can be pretty sure, yes. In Sunset Shimmer's origin comic, she is very interested in finding out all about the mirror and what was on the other side. If she were originally human, she would know about that stuff already, unless she came through the mirror as a very young child, showing up in Canterlot as an orphan foal. Which could be pretty cool.

I was intrigued by the concept, but all the typos and dull description turned me off pretty fast.

U know I always wondered about this concept and looking back at when two first met pinkie in the human world, it all makes sense now

The fact that no said cross-rip occurred suggests that there is no alt-world Sunset. Which raises an intriguing possibility: That Sunset is the EqG world's Sunset; truly a child of both worlds. Don't ask me how but sometimes magic solves its own problems.

Hm, noticed a few cases of word omission and word confusion there, but overall it made sense. Although why sunset was so adamant about telling her story is kinda odd.
Keep going! ;)

Oh my gosh. That part with Pinkie Pie... and your childhood. So hilarious brilliant. :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you lived to tell the tale.

3474842 first guess would be closing time BUT with the way things usually go, I'd grad a helmet, body armor and get in bunker because the blast wave is about to hit:twilightoops::facehoof:

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