Rarity takes pride in her weight, but when the scale tells her something she is not ready to hear. Life after this little trip to the gym will change forever for her and her husband, Spike.
Art was done by Bakki
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This is like a prequel to my story. Good job.
4656934
Which one? I read a lot of yours.
>4 upvotes
>1 view
Suspicions nonwithholding... Rarity married Spike!? Where's the AU tag!
4656941 It's Not Funny Spikey Wikey. It's about Rarity complaining about her weight because Spike got her pregnant.
4656943
I would need that tag. Thank you, it slipped my mind.
4656941
It's Not Funny Spikey Wikey.
That's the story he was talking about.
Nice story by the way.
4656952
Oh, I really like that one.
4656958
Are you the 1 guy who's actually viewed the story?
I think the story views just hasn't updated yet. Odd that it doesn't update immediately, but the upvote/downvote function does. Silly Knighty.
4656959 thanks. I tried. Haha.
4656969
Sadly I'm not that one view. Lets hope it updates soon cause the one view and the six likes is kind of odd.
4656975
Amen brother. Nice story ya wrote there.
4656975
You are welcome.
4656977
There it goes! 35 views and 8 upvotes. That's way better.
Low views and high upvotes always makes me think the author is using alt accounts to inflate their upvotes. I was waiting patiently for ze magicks to happen. I wasn't disappointed.
4656969
IDK. I still need to figure out how these story views work.
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4656985
I wouldn't do anything like that. I am too lazy of a writer as it is. Making alts just takes too much work. I'm glad this story is doing so well. And thank you for the watch.
4656992
I took a quick look through your stories and find you entertaining. No reason for me not to watch you.
4656997
I hope don't disappoint.
Nice story, although there are a few errors when correctly spelled words are placed in the wrong part of a sentence. For example:
the 'want' should be 'went.' Also, you have gym spelled once as gmy (how that slipped by baffles me).
Not that there's anything wrong with that, but I think the two of them need mates to be able to keep them grounded (pun partially intended 
)
Side note: Pinkie x Rainbow. Really?
4657045
Thank you for pointing that 'gmy'. I don't know how that one slip past me as well. Sorry for it being rough.
Making babies!
4657064
Babies have been made. The fun will be double.
I knew what was going to happen as soon as I read the description. However, the emotion in the story and the way the characters were presented still made it enjoyable to read. However, there were quite a few spelling/grammar errors, especially in the second half of the story once they hit the gym. Best take a good look at that.
4657092 Twins oh my god they're in trouble!
4657011
I like it.
4657095
Thank you and I'm going to look through it again later on tonight. I'm hoping to find an editor to help.
4657109
Don't let Rarity find out, she might hurt me.
4657129
Thank you.
I think this is missing the Romance tag.
4657629
I was going off the main tags I thought it needed. I wasn't for sure if it need that tag.
4657634 Pinkie x Rainbow and Spike x Rarity. Yep, Romance tag.
4657636
I will add it. Thank you.
Cute story.
Nice for Spike to reassure Rarity on what will happen now that they are expectant parents. I have to say the ending was sweet---Rarity's not bloating like a beach ball. Spike said it best: Now he has his hot, sexy, pregnant wife. And that is even sexier to me than normal. Probably a bit of the pride that I partially helped create that bundle of joy. A little bit quick though: they just have found out that they are expecting and right after that, the two start working on another one? I guess it's cool that it's very early in the pregnancy....after a certain point, I have to assume that sex may be a no-no because of the development of the unborn child as well as going into labor too early because the poking was too rough.
Nice shadow of the RainbowPie.
I wonder how the others will react to this. I bet Pinkie has a feeling already because of the Pinkie sense.
See, this right here is why I'll never understand women. Just figured out she's having a fucking child, and all she says is "I'm going to get so faaaaaaat!"
Great story though.
4657749
I couldn't help myself in having Rainbow pull Pinkie into a kiss. And that might be another story for another time.
4657774
That is just Rarity for you.
Cute story! I love a good Rarity and Spike story from time to time.
Ah rainbow dash, you always know you've had a good workout when your shorts are drenched in good ol' butt sweat.
It was cute, but there are a lot of errors that make it a bit jarring at times. You should find a proofreader, it'll help your writing immensely.
4658234
I will go on a hunt for a proofreader. I'm sorry that the story is still rough. I will work on getting it fix.
My reaction to the cuteness.
4658647
ouch, death by cuteness. What a way to go.
Very well done in my opinion! Though now I cannot help but feel we need another chapter, with Sweetie Bell and Rarity chit-chattin'.
> I been
I've been*
I have been*
An enjoyable read. Not so sure about the part with Iron Will and just having a test for that at a gym. Could be wrong never asked for one myself. I did really enjoy the little taste of PinkieDash in the story too.
Called it.
4659060
Thank you, it should be fixed now.
4659126 There's several errors; give it a few looks over. They aren't grammar errors or anything; just things one would miss when typing.
Overall, enjoyable~
The good-
It was a cute, short read and I enjoyed it. Though I did guess what was going to happen before I even read it, but eh.
The not so good-
For having taken a week to write, you'd think at that at least some point you'd have proof read it before posting. Even if you don't have a proofreadr you can easily do it yourself(the best way I find is to put it aside for a bit, then come back to it later with fresh eyes. Found a
fewlot of grammar errors, mostly involving the wrong tense of words.passed
burst
happened
crying
'the slim tone' would work better here.
meant
hid
its (it's=it is, its=possessive)
A doesn't need to be there.
I have no idea what you were trying to say there. I think what you were aiming for was 'After what happened with Fluttershy...'
*seminar
motioned with
and
should be a comma between the word it and the quotation marks.
you are
saw
went
carry
and then spike turns into one of those overly anxious expectant fathers.
4659241
Thank you, I fixed the few errors you informed me about.