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TheNewYorkBrony


The name's Dash. (Previously Ronnie) And I write humanized pony stories. Welcome to my humble page.

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It's Christmas in Ponyville and it's one holiday Scootaloo could live without. What was so great about it anyway? It's not like she had family to share it with. But this Christmas, after wishing on a star, it seems she'll finally get what she's always wanted.
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Featured on 12/20/14! Best Christmas present ever!

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Spacecowboy
Story Approver

Scootadoption isn't anything new, but... I like this.

Just going to put two little nitpicks, then tell you the story was adorable and to have a nice day :derpytongue2:

The redhead shouted, dragging Sweetie Belle in the direction f the sweets shop.

You mean the direction "of" the sweets shop.

And my second nitpick is the car insurance bit. Why not cloud insurance, like for her cloud-house thing? Say she had to buy more or something. :rainbowlaugh:

Told you they were little nitpicks. Anywho, nice story overall, pretty adorable. :twilightsmile:

It's just so... so sweet! :scootangel::rainbowkiss:

Holding... Must ..not ..let.. Oh for petes sake this story was adorable!

Rainbow shrugged. "It's aiight."

Aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight

I love these stories. Always heart warming.

Have some adorable Scootalove for christmas.
What more can a man require ? :rainbowkiss:

(Outside maybe wishing for more Scootalove in season 5 )

Celestia-damn you, ye hit me soft spot in me heart! So much D'awwwwwww!

Yea it's been done before, but then again so has everything on here, this was a heartwarming bundle of fluff, and I enjoyed it a little...ok a lot. Nicely done

Very sweet, got me to cry :pinkiesmile:

Daww... the feels are strong with this one :D

Right in the parenthood, indeed, my dear author.

A very familiar premise, but there's good reason why we keep seeing it pop up.

Thanks for writing! :scootangel:

Oh Celestia, what are these things coming from my eyes? Tears? No, I will not accept it! Get back in there tears!

jeez you have two stories on the fetured thing.,,,
how do you do dis?

5406677 i don't even know. I only posted this story a few hours ago. I guess people really like my stuff. :twilightblush:

Sure its not anything new, but dang it it was cute.
My only complaint is the thing with the car. They don't have cars, they have no real reason to have a car(especially the pegasi). I'm sure something else could have been found to use in that situation that would fit the world. Like house insurance?
Ohhhhh it has a human tag. Ok, nevermind guess that works then, I just never really noticed that fact while reading. Carry on then.

Argh! Right in mah feels!

I would have liked it a little better if Rainbow had shown her the adoption papers at the party and offered to sign them, basically making it Scotaloo's choice, but this is still well done and adorable.

Twilight nodded. "Fluttershy's right. We all have flaws that could make us seem unfit. We can't just make fun of Dash like we don't have our own. Though I have to correct you on the fact that I am not a workaholic!"

"Oh yeah? What about the time Spike had ta come and get us because you passed out from not eatin'?" Applejack asked with her hands on her hips.

"That was one time!" Twilight protested, crossing her arms.

"It happened twice!" Applejack corrected her. "In the same month!"

"I-I was reading! It was a book binge! And the second time I was just running some experiments on how the chromatism and density spectra of magical fields influence quantum tunneling in regards magically fabricated (but not inherently magical) barriers. That's entertainment, not work!"

a scootadopt for christmas that is so adorable:rainbowkiss:

5407145 neeeeeeeeerd! :rainbowlaugh: that is totally something Twilight would say!

Notgonnacry. Notgonnacry. Notgonna--... oh buck it. *Starts sobbing tears of joy.*

This was beautiful!! :heart::raritycry::heart:

I feel like a Heartwarming tag NEEDS to exist for stories like this.

Too beautiful... *Sheds tear*

5407857 To the last word. :rainbowlaugh:

I think Scootaloo is adorable, and the idea of her being adopted by Rainbow Dash is cute too. Very heartwarming.

The D'aww,it burns!

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
I'm going to have a heart attack from all this cuteness. :heart:

Damn what a good story. It deserved to be put into the feature box. I thought you did a good job overall with the characterisations of everyone and I'm just a massive sucker for a Scootadopt fic. Why cant they make it canon that Scoots is R/D daughter or at least make the whole adopt thing legit in an episode.

Anyway, have a like, a favourite and a follow!

-Frost :scootangel:

This was a beautiful story. Fast paced enough for a quick read but slow enough to where it was truly well though out and meaningful. As a sucker for Scootaloo and Scootadopt, this was a perfect little Christmas story to read for the holidays. It was truly special for Scootaloo like that and I'm glad that everyone seems to be like me and shedding a few tears. (It's hard for me to cry but this did so A+)

Very enjoyable, always love a really cute story like this.

This was fucking epic. I almost cried at the end. Such a happy story. I am glad I got to read it. Thank you to the author and the editor(s) (If there were any.) This will remain one of my top christmas stories.

NOPE! NOPE! I CANT! I JUST CANNOT WITH THIS STORY! FEELINGS...STRONGER...NOOOOO

*le cries tears of joy*


ITS JUST TOO BEAUTIFUL!! OMG :raritycry:

SCOOTALOO IS BEST PHILLY/HUMAN!:scootangel:

AWWWWWWWWWWW, Great story

Cute. The only issue I have with it is that RD isn't really doing this at all for herself, only for Scoots. That's a recipe for a ton of hurt feelings down the road.

Somehow Scootaloo and the whole idea of Scootadoption doesn't seem really tedious to me when they're all humans, but it still does when they're ponies... I normally don't like Scootaloo and don't care for RD, but I decided to read this anyway and it worked for me. Nice sweet little story. :twilightsmile:

What a cute story. I liked it very much :pinkiehappy:

You know how people say they choked on the feels? Well I'm not joking this time. Dang that was sweet. Faving

This is so adorable I love it

Powerful. Simply marvelous.

10 out of 10.

The feels...they're over 9000!

By Luna, I think my tear sacks are broken, the liquid pride won't stop flowing!

5404735 Yes... Give in to the feels...

I hope you don't mind, but for the holiday season, I'll be doing a reading of this on my channel. If you want to see it it'll be on youtube (same as my username) or if you wish for me to take it down, just leave a message. Very well done story.

I curse I can't cry :applecry:

Beautiful!!!!!!!

I lost all my man cards.

Scootalove conquers all. :scootangel::rainbowwild:

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