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Art Inspired


8000 soldiers!

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WOW. That was impressive.

Nicely done, dude.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Yes to this story.

Hmmm... I'll have to give this a read... Damn you, Art. Damn you and your amazing words.

What... I don't even...

Bravo. Bravo, good sir.

The description of this story leaves me pondering. I'm not the biggest fan of HiE or really any story with a human in it, but because it is you Art, I'll give this a read.

*slow clap* simply magnificent

mmmm...quite the fetching story indeed

"I say this was purpostorus, the good night princess would never be apart of such... frivolous activities let alone want to be with some uncooth pony."
Or at least that is what I would say if I was one of those snobs from canterlot.

All I can say, is why did I read this. And why did I like it? :rainbowkiss:

zel

>WHOA NEW AWESOME CLOP, LOOK AT THAT COVER
>art inspired
nope

so far im loving this story ill like it for you and add it to my favorites:rainbowkiss:

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You forgot that I helped with this. A lot of it. 'Tis sad that you'll miss out.

zel

2869872 Damn man, I do not have enough ships to abandon

2869946 Yeah, that seems pretty accurate.:pinkiesad2:

I only clicked on this story because of the Vinyl. Now, when I return from my errands, I SHALL FEAST UPON THIS TOME!!

I enjoyed this story, but One part kind of threw me off and prevented me from actually liking this story. Vinyl hadn't agreed to do this. What that basically means is that they stole her body and used it as a sex tool.:twilightoops:

Some would even go as far to call that rape, and I would have myself if it weren't for the fact that they didn't really intend for it to be like that.

Luna’s breasts jiggled like bricks in a blender.

Geez, that makes it sound like Luna has some monstrous mammaries that would literally knock someone out.

OH MY~!
I need a George Takei picture here.... :rainbowlaugh:

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There was no possible way we could've covered that. The story isn't... Extensive enough to detail that bit. All we (Art) came up with was saying something about the real Vinyl being stowed away in the subconscious.

You stand with a grin and trot on over, still loosely awake but thoroughly enticed by her.

Prospect of sex, immediately learns how to walk as a horse.

Pretty good, though there were a couple oddly worded sentences that did not get the point across clearly. The grammar and spelling mistakes were small, though still present.

The premise and story telling perspective were interesting. I don't think I have seen a second person, mind flip fiction of this style before. :twilightsmile:

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You could have just said that Vinyl agreed to it, that maybe they were fuck bodies already but Luna was afraid to ask her out on an actual date.

Regardless, it is a good story, just a might darker than you porbably intended though.

2871446 It has its imperfect moments, but what can I say?:twilightsheepish: I'm not flawless all of the time, and I looked around the site or a few days before finally putting this up. I didn't find any with the same basic plot line, but with so many stories out there, I'm almost positive there's one very similar to this.:eeyup:

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There is probably something, but I have not seen it. I think I have read the synopsis of just about every story that went into the Second Person group over the years (wow, has it really been that long).

Hmm... refreshed idea, I'll say that.

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Why the hell are you everywhere? I can never escape your presence, it seems...

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Fourpony; everywhere you want to be.

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You're freaking omnipresent D:

Every single comment has a downvote... I honestly don't see why...

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Popularity = downvotes.

Bricks in a blender.... do not jiggle.......

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Orly? Orlllllllllllllllllllly?

Haven't you seen a cinder block in a washing machine before?

2876211 Bricks in a blender are not cinderblocks in a washing machine.

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It's essentially the same concept. A brick in a blender will cause it to go haywire and probably break, but it still jiggles beyond belief.

You're welcome to try it.

Sweet Jesus that was some awesome clop :rainbowderp:

I DARE you to make a continuation of this :pinkiecrazy: :trollestia::ajsmug:

not as much tf/tg material i was hopping for.....

Puting small Lincoln logs in a blender will really make it shake

this is a very original idea, I enjoy every moment of reading, is inspiring and artistic from character development to sexual parts ... that idea so innovative ... back to reading all your stories clop.
:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::raritystarry::rainbowwild:

This gives new meaning to the phrase "I want to cum inside Vinyl Scratch".

very nice :yay::twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

This was a pleasant surprise. I didn't really expect this to be so good, but damn, that was very good. Now I see that I left a comment on this earlier. I'm glad that I did read it. I know there are at least a few stories where a human is in a pony's body, but this is the first I've read. Can't wait to read more by you in the future Art!

~SolidFire

I loved it all so much:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::heart::yay::yay:I hope there will be a sequel

you should write a sequel to this story where he and luna do this again and even include an awake vinyl scratch in mind not body and they do this again:twilightsmile:

5580318 irk , it's the best....

Commenting from the title page here... In addition to the tg aspect, I'm going to guess that it's time-travel related selfcest too. Now, to read the thing...

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