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Radiant Dawn


Write what you know; write what you feel. Give life to that which lacks it, and mend the heart of they who need it most. Love, laugh, and cry. Never be afraid to be yourself. This is me.

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This story is a sequel to Rise of the Elements Part I: The Lost Element


Ancient beings of long since past are returning, but for good or ill? Where once the world made sense and peace flourished, will it all fall apart? Against the very tide of existence itself, who can stand against it? Perhaps when the powers that be assemble, peace will prevail...or it will fall forever.


A/N: A note to my readers: this is technically a harem fic, but there will be NO lemons in it. The story will instead focus on the connections the characters share, as well as some other things later that I will leave to you to discover.

Rated T for violence, language, use of alcohol, and some mild suggestive references.

Featured 04/26/2015!

Chapters (36)
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Comments ( 536 )

MOAR!!!! :flutterrage:

(Btw Loved the first story, lets hope that this next one is just as great or even greater. 5/5 Mustaches for you! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:)

Holy shit It's hard to keep up with you! I'll be finishing the other one first though...
Edit: I feel heartless >.<

Whooo! new story yes.

Have I ever told you the definition of insanity celestia? :pinkiecrazy:

I'll be watching this

1983612 Too many mustauches...I just shaved, man...

1983737 Well done.

1984223 More like continuation of the story...

1984487 You have not.

1984616 That's good.

I kinda couldnt wait..i read the storry on fanfic.:twilightblush:

1985195 Well that sucks. Don't ruin it for everyone else or I'll end you.

Must know moar!
man i love this story!

1985310 Well good, because there's a lot more to come.

Holy crap is writing all you do? :twilightoops:
or is this pre-written?

1987734 I've got another ninteen chapters already written for this particular story.

Spacecowboy
Story Approver

1987899
:rainbowlaugh:
I've been enjoying reading all the comments left by folks. So much fun.
By the way Drew, got a chance to check out my main story yet? (Shameless plus is shameeeeless). :rainbowlaugh:

1988198 Horry shirt ur dat guy dat writes der Twiluna story becerming wern wirth der nert!
Translation: Holy shit you're that guy that writes that TwiLuna story 'Becoming One with the Night'!

That moment when you're so surprised that that you went Asian accent typing...

Spacecowboy
Story Approver

1988285
:rainbowhuh:
That moment when someone recognizes you in a friend's story comments and says something about it. That's kinda cool I suppose.

1988198 Sure thing. I'll check it out when I've got the chance.

1988285 That's Asian?

1988556 I'm a wizard.

1989822 It's like being a celebrity...except not.

Spacecowboy
Story Approver

1990692
First time I've had someone notice one of my posts outside of my own stories (which have been increasing in frequency a lot lately) and flag me down and mention my writings. Kinda cool in a way. And uugh, my next chapter, I'm in the home stretch, but it just doesn't want to come out. It's hard writing mushy romance, yet being super serious at the same time. Gah!

And let me know what you think when you find the time to read it.

1990819 I'll leave a comment for you when I read it.

Wow talk about a plot twist Frosts father is Death. 5/5 twilight smilies::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

I submitted the prologue and the first chapter they both equal about 2000 words together
For those who don't know I am making a story called Life,Death,and Rebirth be warned the story may not be the best because it is my first

1990977 The comments portion of my story isn't the place to post that specific piece of information. Join a group and post that there...posting it here isn't going to do any good.

Spacecowboy
Story Approver

1991049
I just laughed.
forgot bout the 'Jesus' conception.

1991821 Unsure what that means, but cool...you laughed!:pinkiehappy:

Spacecowboy
Story Approver

1991896
Virgin conception. : )

And yeah, although was laughing at the guy trying to plug his story in your comments. Some folks are downright clueless.

1991995 Oh, I get it. Nice. Yeah, that guy was a bit off as far as what should have been done, but that's why we learn...to know what not to do.

Thats one hell of a plot twist.

1993677 There's a few more to come. I like twists.

my response to this chapter:

UNDEAD ARMY??!!!!
:pinkiehappy:
I'll get my Zeus cannon and wunderwaffe DG 3

PLEASE let Frost come up with some sort of frost virus spell. Massive horde + ice spreading from contact = massive horde of zombzicles

2003284 Frost: I'd rather not dabble in biological weaponry, thank you.

Undead army?!?
Fallout new vegas console commands/TGM(god mod)/on

What undead army?

where's Tank Dempsey when you need him? lol

All of my happy!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile: Can't wait for the next chapter!

I get way to excited than I need to be.

2004991

Tank Dempsey is from Call of Duty, more specifically....ZOMBIES (until Black Ops 2). He's voiced by Steve Blum; who we know as TOM from Toonami, Spike Spiegal from Cowboy Bebop...and many many more. In Call of Duty (Zombie Mode), he's the American badass basically, he is joined by 3 others: Takeo Masaki (Japanese), Edward Richtofen (German), and Nikolai Belinski (The Russian who will do anything for Vodka). The Story itself is spread out through 2 games (ALL by Treyarch): COD: World at War (where it all started) and COD: Black Ops (the 1st Black Ops).

Here's the link the COD: Zombies story (BEFORE Black Ops 2): THE STORY (wiki)

Below is a picture of Tank Dempsey

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