• Member Since 9th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen 14 hours ago

Radiant Dawn


Write what you know; write what you feel. Give life to that which lacks it, and mend the heart of they who need it most. Love, laugh, and cry. Never be afraid to be yourself. This is me.

T

Wake up, go to work, be a human...but what if this all changed by the arrival of someone special? How much will change, and will it be a good change? Most of all, how important is your universe to you?

T rating for language, violence, use of alcohol, and some suggestive material.

A heads up to readers: This story has a very unique spin on it, so I recommend reading slowly and letting everything absorb so that you don't miss anything. You'll see what I mean as the story progresses.

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters directly associated with My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, nor the original story. Any and all original characters are owned by their respective creators.

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 567 )

While I usually abandon any fic with a Mane 6 death in it, you manage to pull it off well enough to keep me interested. I hope this turns out to be a great story.

Hmmmmmmmmm.
I shall keep an eye on this for now. Do not disappoint.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

1946237
This is probably his most complex story he has. Really good, but damn you gotta make sure not to skip over any text or you kinda get lost in the dust.

Fav'd, Thumbed Up, all that good stuff Drew.

1946237, 1947055, 1947104... You all will not be disappointed. For the new readers, there is a lot to keep track of, but also a lot that will keep you interested and keep your mind and heart hooked.

"I died."

oh... oh no... not a transcending Story... please not...

can't... resist...*fave+watch+thump up* ARRRG!!!:...

1947629 dear.. you wandering a "thin rim"(walking on a very thin line) between a brain-death Rainbow-is-now-out-of-nowhere-my-girlfriend Story and a difficult Welcome-to-earth-havenOrHell Story...
only if you take any step with precision and thing at least thrice about every decision you can create a great Story... even if i see here already that if you will keep this 'direction' of making decisions it will become a great work.

so: :raritywink::scootangel:
and for the lowlz: :rainbowdetermined2::rainbowderp::rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::rainbowwild:...:raritywink:

"I died."


and.... SHIT GOT REAL.:rainbowhuh::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy::rainbowwild:

1947852 You know, spacecowboy is probably laughing at you right now, because he knows what's to come in this story...and if you think this part was intense, you are going to shit yourself for what's to come.

1947969 I'm glad you like, as there's plenty more to come.

Spacecowboy
Moderator

1947920>>1948029
Since I was mentioned, figured I would chime in.
Trust me, this story walks a couple of lines, but none of them are truly cliche. More like mind fucking, relentless, love/hate relationship-type mind fucking. Things become much clearer further in (more convoluted), and the story is pretty good.

1948029>>1948375
1.) *sights in freaking relief*
2.) *reorganized his "I'm-looking-forward-for-this" Folder*
3.) *grapes a Rainbow colored flag and waits for the Q...*


P.S. 3+1.) *is glad that there is a function witch you can rate a single comment*

I don't usually read humanized ponies but this one is really good. I got my eye on this!

:derpyderp1: :pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh: YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Spacecowboy
Moderator

1948536
Lol, nice reactions. :)
Just a fair forewarning though, the romance does hit hard, but for reasons that are explained later. Radiant Dawn LOVES his foreshadowing. He'd probably marry it if he could. :rainbowlaugh: Things are almost never how they appear at first with him, always refreshing.

1948541 Well this isn't going to be your average humanized pony/anthro story. Prepare to be mindfucked.

1948612 Well there's much more to come, but I will warn you ahead of time that this story is going to walk the line on quite a few things, as well as completely redefine the MLP universe as a whole.

Don't say I didn't warn you...read at your own risk.

1948996 I never have read humanized ponies but when you write it ill give it a try (ya your that good of a writer)

Hi

N and a couple years later they all die bye stuff while they are doing what they love and appear in his home... or die naturally

I am not the least bit tempted to read this, but I have to say; that is the most pretentious description I have ever read on this site. :ajbemused:

1949277 I'll tell you outright that the entire story is not going to be humanized. Rainbow Dash will be a pony once again, though it will not come right away. With that being the case, you'll just have to wait and see what happens. I can say without ego that I believe you will be pleasantly surprised.

1949743 No...but good guess. You'll just have to wait and see what happens.

1949946 Well, I can't aim to please everyone, and that's why there are different genres. Too bad...you're missing out on a great story, but to each their own. May you find whatever it is you're looking for.

1950125 i know i will you always throw in a surprise that makes people look at the story differently every time that is why i like your work

1950174 Why thank you. If I can, I'm going to be posting another chapter tonight, so keep an eye out.

1950134 Fair enough. It is the genre, and the sex tag, that is the biggest obstacle to my wanting to read it. However, you could ratchet down the "This stuff is deep man, read it slow or you won't get it." and let your work speak for itself. I mean, it could very well be that deep. It could be more challenging than Ulysses for all I know. The problem is when you claim that in the description. It comes across as very Great and Powerful, if you get my drift. Genius, if you have it, is best highlighted by understatement.

1950198 Genius is also highlighted by following a road different from the norm, so what you may consider the right path, I might consider too cliche. Besides, I'm not in writing to be the best, I'm in it to enjoy myself and present my works to readers. If people like it, awesome. If not, it's their loss. Besides, I never referred to my story as anything "Great" or "Powerful". I simply wished to inform my readers that there will be quite a few things about this story that will be very different from the rest, though good or bad will be up to the reader to decide. Any decent captain of a vessel lets his passengers know as much as he can about the voyage they are all taking...and while I will not offer any spoilers, I am doing the same in essence. There will be no lemons involved in any of my stories, but there will be implied sex themes, as well as a few "line-walking" scenes. If you don't enjoy the story, oh well. If you do, then enjoy it to your fullest extent without being prejudice.

Thank you for your time.

i like it:pinkiehappy: keep up the good work!

1950292 Thank you, and will do. Expect another chapter either tonight or tomorrow.

1950298 ok soooo.... should i go to bed or should i spam f5 all night?

1950302 Go to bed. If I do get the chapter out, it isn't going to be until around 23:00 or later. No sense getting bags under your eyes simply on the chance that I might have another chapter coming. The chapter won't be going anywhere, so it'll be ready whenever you wake up.

1950315 ok so whats the time wherever you are because it´s 2 am in sweden :pinkiehappy:

1950320 Ah...well in that case I'm a ways behind you. It's only 21:26 here (9:26pm).

1950327 ohhhh, i see.

i have two hours of sleep:rainbowlaugh: nah just kidding, i´m going to read s´more and then i´m off to bed :pinkiehappy:

You really shouldnt take other peoples work as your own dude. Not cool. And if your going to you need to at least be caught up with all the chapters they have posted. Besides If he wanted to post his stories here he will post them when hes ready

1950345 Check out my other stories if you haven't already...you may enjoy them.

1950355 Umm...I'm not sure what you're talking about...this is my story, and I'd appreciate it if you didn't accuse me of stealing my own work...that's just stupid.

Or better yet, if you're going to do so, please have proof that I'm doing so. Where is this proof? Please, let me see it.

Sorry, theres been a lot of people stealing your work (and others) lately so i didnt really bother looking at profiles. Now that i bothered i see that this is probably you. I just jumped to a conclusion after reading you respond to someone and say you wouldnt post on here.sorry about that.

1950407 Well "The Demon's Angel" as well as all the stories I post are mine and mine alone, so if you are really a person that looks for justice on plagiarism, I would like to know who these people are please. I don't take kindly to my hours and hours of work being stolen by some knob-end and marketed as his/her own.

Haole!!HE USED HAOLE!!!!!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::ajsmug:

good thing i'm hapa

You're just shooting these chapters out like nothing here. Why couldn't you do that on FanFiction? :derpyderp2:

1950782 Because they're already written, dude. I'm just editing them before reuploading.

braddah man now you really making me think you're local:ajsmug:

Login or register to comment