Celestia awakens in a strange new place, her back aching with throbbing pain. The diagrams on the wall look like spines, but not pony ones. Was that a place to find help, or was something far more worrying afoot?
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Omg! This story was awesome.
And from David Silver no less.
Bizarre, but delightful. I have to admire Celestia's attitude here.
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Thank you both for joining me on this silly little trip.
This was kind of weird but in a good way. I enjoyed it.
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I've experienced this care before. It was fun bringing it to Celestia.
Snap! Crackle! Fark you! Pop! You know the rest. ;)
The spoiler is the George Carlin ending. :D
a supper fun one shot.
I'd ask what's crackin, but I think we all know.
While the setting is a bit mundane, this is still one of the most unique, and fun, human stories.
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Indeed, it is a fun dinner.
...What were we talking about?
Congrats Samson, you're now Celestia's private osteopath
Half expected the Chiropractor to turn out to be Doug Willen (on Youtube). Nice work.
Very charming. I like it.
I am surpirse that there are chiropractos for horses XD.
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She never got that sugar cube, did she?
This is a very good one-shot.
Threw her back out carrying the realm for a thousand years?
I am more surprised he hasn't picked up that his patient had wings and a horn first. There are some repetitive lines, but generally entertaining. Good story, Wordsmith.
Lmao, it remind me of parody video of chiropractor.
"Alright Mr.Skeleton, take a deep breath and.."
*Twist neck about 360°*
"All good !"
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Oh no! She didn't! ...well, I suppose it's as good an excuse to visit him again as any, right?
I genuinely can't tell if this is meant to be creepy or not. It has comedy as a tag so I don't think it's meant to be creepy, but I can't tell. All I know is that her acting like a feral animal at first, his seeming inability to see her horn, wings, or tell that something was off, and just their behavior was really weird lol.
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I'm not. Horses have a lot of money riding on them for how easily they break.
Man, it takes a lot of talent to create a "Celestia ends up on Earth" story that sticks out.
This one is a simple yet heartwarming take that strikes you in the feels.
Good job and happy holidays!
Aaaw. This was surprisingly sweet... though part of me does wonder why it took the doctor so long to realize that Celestia isn't a normal horse.
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I saw that man pulling on the tail and was incredibly worried for his safety there. That's bucking danger zone.
As someone with a bad back (and looking forward to synthetic replacements in hopefully the near future, with good medical advancements), I *felt* every bit of Celestia's ache there. Damn~
That's how you know it's a chiropractor, they don't take kindly to sceptics.
This was really nice. I am hopeful because an opening for a sequel is there.
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If a patron backs it, it'll happen.
Where's Derpy and foal? They had sent the initial letter after all.
Well can't argue with that we are going toward complete slavery, A.I uprising, too many humans on earth, or World War 3 more popularly known as atomic bomb hell, even more popularly known as the extinction of everything (Except cockroaches)
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Samson's only had part of a day settling in. He just got his price sheet up!
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And thus Pinkie was on her way the moment his office shifted to Equestria. Kinda surprised it's taking her this long to show up at the door with a cap and uniform on for the singing telegram scenario.
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Then maybe Applejack and/or Big Mac
Well, this is unexpected, but more ponies visiting the chiropractor would be awesome! Go for it!
Maybe have AJ visit next? Or Tempest? Maybe even Rainbow?
Well then. I did not expect this to turn into an episodic series with different ponies` back problems, but I am not complaining.
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I only realized way later that this was your suggestion. I am slow.
Maybe you should have the good doctor take on a student or two. I feel he will quickly become overwhelmed by all the ponies and other creatures soon as his fame grows.
I can only imagine Dash would actually take to the practice herself, and have a weird knack for it that helps the Wonderbolts in turn.
As for who shows... given how frazzled Shining Armor can be, he gets my vote.
Whoah, whoah, wait! I thought this was a oneshot? You mean we are going to get more of this? Can't wait.
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The patron demands more, so there will be more. 2/month is the schedule(and this one is an extra one they went for)
I'd say Pinkie most likely for the welcome party thing then immediately Derpy and her daughter if the problem is severely urgent or can't wait. Letter didn't make it clear enough how bad the issue actually was. Otherwise Applejack or Big Mac.
Lol. I suggest Big Mac. And as far as non-ponies, I bet Ember could be pretty entertaining.
I request Shining Armor and/or Applejack.
But I also bet Pinkie needs some help with her back.
Huh, so many options. Non ponies need some love too : ) Gabby maybe? Or even our fav deerbug Thorax? Wondering how that'll go : )
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Do Changelings even have internal skeletons?
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Well, I don't know, and it'll be fun to : )
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I can imagine Twilight going first, and then Shining not being particularly happy about the news of an alien "feeling up" his little sister.