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Her brilliant plan was ready to put into motion. All she had to do was get to the right place, then wait. How hard could that be? It wasn't like Twilight had any security measures of any kind.

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I got a chuckle out of this one. :pinkiecrazy: A good, solid chuckle at that. :pinkiehappy:

So this Twilight is experimenting on humans I see. I get the feeling that the Princesses would not approve if they knew.

Comment posted by badninja deleted May 29th, 2018

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It's only Megan...

Meanwhile, on the Astral Plane...

"Junior..."
"What? I didn't hurt her."
The Tree of Harmony just gave her offspring a Look. Similar to a Stare, but usable only by mothers. (As for how a tree looked at anything, harmony avatars are just as weird as those of chaos. They're just less aggressive about it.) "Junior."
"Okay, fine, there was the magic blast, but that was technically her own fault. And so was breaking into me in the first place!"
"You know why I'm upset."
"It's not like you just sat there and took it when the plundervines were choking you. Not when you actually could do something about it."
"We exist to spread harmony and understanding, not havoc and confusion. Sending Starlight Glimmer into an infinite maze of countless dimensions falls strictly in the latter camp."
"So would letting her wreck time."
The Tree sighed. "What am I going to do with you?"
"Build a friendship school next to me?"
"Now you're just being ridiculous."

Oh Celestia! This is wicked, but gorgeous.

Ri2

Oh yeah, I forgot Twilight had an owl. I think the writers did as well. Whatever happened to him?

Ri2

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Does the school count as a little sibling? Distant cousin?

"Who?"

"Yeah, not playing that game." With her magic, she bid the doors close.

Haha, smartest reaction to that I've seen yet.

she has expected

had

angrily angrilly yanked

Double word score :3

Twilight Sporkle

Not sure if typo, or GlimGlam being flippant

The mare, and earth pony

an(-d)

Oh, thanks Celestia!

thank(-s)

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Given the materials involved in its construction, it's clearly a pet rock. :raritywink:

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Typos abandoned in random rooms for intruders to happen upon.

Ri2

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...Does this mean Boulder's going to start cheating on its paramour?

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this reminds me of the DOORS animation

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Like seriously. When was the last time he even appeared on the show?

Ri2

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A pet grooming session in season 5. Other than that, just a photograph in a couple episodes.

I'm wondering if Megan even really was there, or if it was another false iteration like the window becoming a tapestry or the demon that just happens to be behind one of the doors.

Is anyone else remindend of Hotel Cabal from Gargoyles?

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That was no demon. That was a red and black OC! ... Alright, maybe it was a demon.

Twilight's Castle, the meme that will never die.

Today on HISHE.


"BECAUSE I'M BATMANE!"

"Luna, you're drunk. Go home."


*FAST FORWARDS TO NEXT SCENE*

Sorry but just checking that "Starlight slapped the door shut, ending the conversation. "What manner of strange things do you do in here, Twilight Sporkle?" is not a typo.

good story though.

Perhaps Starlight has certain websites on her mind.

Further down the hallway, you come across another door. To open it, turn to 347. To continue down the hallway, turn to 152.

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It’s all a setup for a heartbreaking episode about how Twilight has forgotten she even has a pet owl, and how hurtful she’s been. It’ll end with Twilight giving Owlicious to Moondancer, because Moondancer is just Twilight’s emotional dumping ground for stuff she no longer cares about.

Yes, quite worthy of the feature box, indeed.

Ri2

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So how long until it’s Spike’s turn?

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Never. If there's one constant in this show, it's that Twilight loves Spike more than anything (except maybe Starlight Glimmer, and that's a whole separate issue).

Ri2

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She loved her pet owl too. And her friends back in Canterlot. (Possibly.) And her family. Look how easily she discarded/forgot them.

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I'm pretty sure she never even noticed she had friends in Canterlot. If anything, she just accepted them as the kids who hung around her and never even cared to give it much thought beyond that. As for her family, she's a grownup and has her own life. You tend to come home and visit only rarely when you're busy with your career. And Twilight leads a very busy life.

As for Owlicious, she never really seemed to spend much time with him in the first place. The writers just seemed to forget he existed for the most part.

Ri2

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Like Peewee.

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Well, with Peewee, they at least addressed where he went in an episode. You're shown photos of Spike not being able to handle having a baby phoenix that end with one showing him returning Peewee to his family. Owlicious just seemed to fly away after Tirek blew up Golden Oak library and was pretty much never seen again.

Ri2

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They only threw those photos in because at the last minute they realized they'd forgotten about Peewee.

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Yeah, but they at least addressed his absence. In theory, that owl's still living with Twilight somewhere in the castle.

Ri2

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In theory.

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I'm thinking in Megan breaking free and escaping...just to discover she is stranded in a world of ponies while her underaged siblings are alone and pm their own.
Eventually, she would grow to hate ponies and their world, and plot her revenge...

That Tree Castle has some of the best defenses imaginable! At least I hope that was all the castle's own doing.

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In this scenario, I like to imagine the Castle as having some sort of intelligence, and being able to rearrange its layout at will in a manner similar to Doctor Who's TARDIS.

I was thinking that only ponies who follow Twilight's teaching of friendship can freely navigate the castle. Once Starlight had broken down and no longer desired to inflict harm, the castle let her go to the one pony who could help.

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Now that is an excellent idea for a sequel!

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YOU ARE IN A MAZE OF TWISTY LITTLE PASSAGES, ALL ALIKE.

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It is harmonious. You are likely to be befriended by a grue.

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Megan Williams the human heroine of My Little Pony back in the 80s

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Oh, sad she's tied up in twilight's castle.

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And that day, no great losses occurred.
Hey, think we could sacrifice the Pauls or would that give her the wrong idea about humans?

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Bonus chapters showing her many attempts to escape resulting in getting lost in the castle and getting re-captured.

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What's the difference?

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Megan clearly thought she was in dream valley and tried to boss ponies around. Her siblings are likely be kept by fluttershy as exotic animals.

The difference between a demon and black and red OC is the OC is only usually a demon.

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That doesn't tell me if we can get rid of the Paul brothers.

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