Those horsewords don't write themselves!
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Rainbow Dash finds... something on her early morning flight over the Everfree Forest. She's not exactly sure what this something is, but she sure will make sure to not only keep him safe, but also away from anypony! She doesn't need the whole town freaking out about him!
After all, who would believe her story that a deformed ghost was wanting to burn down the whole Everfree Forest as retribution?
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Hes back!
WE are HIM
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H i m
It's H I M !
They must have amnesia, they forget I'm H I M.
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Back and ready to slam out horsewords.
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Yes. Yes we are HIM.
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π ·π Έπ Ό
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True. I forgor you were the main character!
Goated title π
I really like how Dashβs mind is depicted. Very hyperactive, suits her
Bro was infact, H I M
Fantastic start, keep up the good work.
as Joel Vinesauce would say - *gasp* It's H I M!!
he
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Was cooking in the studio with this one. π₯
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Thank you! This was one of the choices I made when I wanted to approach a fic like this. Super estatic to really push the envelope with this narration style!
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Will do. Next chapter very soonβ’.
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He is HIM.
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Excellent.
Generally towards the southerly side of the other Dakota.
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He's H I M. He's been H I M. He will continue to be H I M.
Dear Celestia Rainbow has some serious ADHD.
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No cap π₯
Love this. Tappies, speedy pups, so good. Do more words please
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You ask, and I shall provide. Hope you enjoy this chapter too!
Different species, different culture, different legal system. Could be like a passport.
You donβt know, Brick.
Looks like Rainbow has a new secret pet. Donβt tell Tank.
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Jokes on you, Tank will be knowing about this soon.
Okay, there'll probably be no german suplexing of bears in this story, but that's reasonable, and I still like this.
I have never in my life been more certain that two people are going to kiss. Keep up the good work wordpone ;p
Should have specified a survival knife
Very cute fic thus far! Nice work, Soaring!
Lets see, 10-15 minutes to reach the end of this, and i'm F
CKING HOOKED!
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Don't worry, you got more to read in the near future. :)
Happy you're enjoying the fic!
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Yeh, don't know why But i'm too Intrigued.
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Hope this next one sated your curiosity (for now) π
There, I invaded the country of Bohemia.
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If anyone from the Czech Republic reads your comment, they will be so (un)happy!
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I refute the existence of the Czech Republic. Czechoslovakia all the way.
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Every time I Czech this comment section, my braincells lower
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jmenuji se Patrik, chci ti ublΓΕΎit, jsem tady, abych ukonΔil Δeskou republiku
Took a long time for an update but it was worth it.
Cane here as fast as i could! already done with it!
That is a very Pinkie thing to do. I love that joke!
What was on the butter knife? And that item in the trunk that Rainbow didnβt want to think about? Did she feed Tank anything? Will she picnic with her human and the cake?
I like the looming menace thatβs building in the background!!
Happy to see that made it in there.
More like the CIA but whatever
Iβm loving this story so far! Itβs very cute!
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You're about to get an update.
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You're not wrong, but I thought of the police as a whole first with the FBI as the "first thing that came to mind". Hindsight is 20/20.
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Hope you're happy the fic is about to be updated.
Awesome
I want to discover him.
Eventually, somepony will notice that Rainbow Dash βadoptedβ someone when her time keeps going back to the Everfree.
Maybe Scootaloo? Or some weather ponies like Thunderlane? Maybe spotted by the mailmare?
I think I might be detecting some affliction brewing, too.
Maybe Rainbow is intrigued by the mystery and novelty? Like a Daring Do book.
Surely Pinkie has some lingering questions about the cake?
And Rarity will take some convincing to make discrete human clothes. 
And what if Rainbow asks Twilight?
: βHey, Twilight? How might one care for a human?β
: βHuman? 
Why would you want to know something like that?β
: βUh~ you know, uhβ¦ intellectual curiosity.β
: βWhat? Since when do you do that?β
: βHey, I can have hobbies.β
: β Yeah, but you never seemed like an acolyte of Lyra Heartstringsβ¦β 
I don't know if my mind has gone or what but I feel like Gumball and Darwin when they're trying to understand that pepperoni kid's words.