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An amalgamation of nice and spice. Controversial in every sense of the word. Wonderbolts enjoyer.

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Spitfire was sick. She was sick and tired. But Equestrian's lone human was there, and she was peeved about it.

She was about to find out how easy she was to read.


Written in a hour and a half. Pure one shot galore. I hate everything.

Pre-read by Rikkity.

Art by LuneBat.

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Comments ( 36 )

First fic of 2024, written as a speedwrite.

I am incapable of writing sub 2k word stories now. :rainbowlaugh:

Hope everyone enjoys the fic!

11790584
Certainly an interesting treatment of Spitfire and Anon! I like that laid-back, casual style and low-level banter between those two, makes them adorable.

11790669
Thank you! First time I've written Anon actually. Must be all that reading of Anon fics recently that helped me get his character down. Also I haven't written Spitfire in ages, so knowing that I still have her character down is good. :twilightsmile:
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Thank you for reading the fic! Happy you enjoyed it.

You took only 90 min to write this? Wow!


Well done.

The back and forth banter was perfect for the level they are in their relationship. I don't know how to describe their back and forth any other way than "organic."
They obviously know each but are still learning about each other.

Great job.

Thank you for posting.

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Yep! I've been trying to improve my drafting speed that way when I do updates for my fics I have, I can actually come up with ideas quicker instead of having them on the back burner/struggling to get words on the page. Felt super easy getting this one done, so I hope to continue utilizing the writing methods I used for this fic on other ones. :twilightsmile:

Also for this fic, and I forgot to put it in my author's notes, but I also write while I listen to music. It definitely helps me with focusing on my writing so I can maintain a certain rhythm. The one for this fic was this Lil Nas X song:

I primarily listen to metal, but I've been branching out lately because different songs help for different story rhythms. This one is no exception. Thank you for reading the fic and you're welcome! Happy I could write this story.

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Real FamousLastWords once again leaves a comment on my fic. W. When are we collabing again?

Boo one-shots I need more serotonin from this

11791043
No promises, but I'd be down to write follow up one-shots of these two in the future.

11790997
Thank you! Happy you enjoyed the fic!

It's just not always what everyone expects, but it always delivers. I loved pre-reading this! The comedy is just so inherent and it works! Never stop writing this style of comedy, bro!

Also your writing in a nutshell :P

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We need more Spitfire stories.

11791190
That we do, that we do. Hoping to write some more myself but like I said, no gaurantees yet.

11791069
I am not going to stop writing this sort of comedy, because if I did, you'd be disappointed and I am not one for disappointment. Thank you once again for pre-reading this man, I appreciate it!

11791230
No probs! I couldn't stop laughing and giggling like a madman! xD


:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

this story is absolute diabetes and I love it

might do a reading if you'd be okay with it

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Thank you, Wuten! I'm happy you enjoyed the fic and I'm more than okay with you doing a reading for it.

Just reading the description I thought: Anon is going three feet under the earth lol 🤡XD

Dumbass Anon trying to read Spitfire

11792627
True. Very true.

11792552
That's crazy, although I can see what you mean. :rainbowlaugh:

*cracks knuckles* Kept you waiting, huh?

I think this is the first HiE fic I've read on this site. This ship is not my thing. HiE fics are not my thing. The fact you got me to enjoy both sides of the equation is a testament to your talent.

The banter before them was really cute and sold me on their dynamic. The 'moment' threatened to ride the line of cliche but never crossed it. surprisingly grounding and warm. I really appreciate this fic for being an easy, comical and warm read. I think because this kind of fic is outside my wheel house, it's harder for me to truly appreciate it the nuances and characters than normal, but you earned my attention, like and favorite, so I consider a victory. Keep at it!

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Thanks, Chaospaladin! Really appreciate the comment. Glad you took this recommendation fully, it's definitely not something you normally read (as you mentioned), and I'm happy you were still able to enjoy it.

Really cute and sweet story. Something about sick ponies needing a human to take care of them and make them feel loved just tugs at my heart like nothing else. Spitty needs all the love.

Hope to see a sequel where they give their new relationship a proper go and maybe even kiss a little. That might just be my wishful thinking though haha.

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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed the fic and, I agree, more Spitfire fics are needed, especially ones that give her lovin. :raritywink:

Hope to see a sequel where they give their new relationship a proper go and maybe even kiss a little. That might just be my wishful thinking though haha.

It might not be that far off... Description is really rough so pardon me.

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This was a good source of seroponin. Short, sweet, cute and made me smile. Well done! :twilightsmile:

That was a good fanfic and wish there were more spitfire x anon fanfics like this and longer but the ones I find are not complete

For the first FimFiction story I've read in two years, I'd say we're off to a great start.

Cute, and to the point.
Released a day after my birthday, thanks for that by the way, that's really cool.

11805655
I am honored that this is your first fic you've read after two years. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hope you enjoy the sequel!

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:

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Glad you enjoyed this fic, WildFire! And yeah a lot of Spitfire x Human/Anon fics are left without a real conclusion, but thankfully this one is completed and so will its sequel.

11794383
Thank you for reading the fic and I appreciate the feedback! Hope you'll give the sequel a shot!

11794042
Delivered on the sequel. :)

11805708
Yeah saw there a sequel coming can't wait to read it but will wait for it to be done

11805708
Oh, I'm sure I will.

I usually like the spicier 'M' rated stories, but this one was very good. Have a like.

Mmm, I like the story but something feels off. It could be interpretation of the character or it could be me reading your stories back to back that I’m seeing a lot of parallels between characters.

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Happy you enjoyed the fic! To be honest, I bet you there are some parallels since I've been writing so much AiE lately, however, this one was the starting point of the whole thing, so I guess if there are parallels, they would stem from this one? It could also be my writing style causing this though, as it's been pretty much the same throughout each. That might be a sign to switch to other projects. Thankfully, I just posted my last AiE for now, so I'll have to reassess each of them and go from there. Thanks for the comment!

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