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Soaring


An amalgamation of nice and spice. Controversial in every sense of the word. Wonderbolts enjoyer.

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Anon and Coco have been friends for quite some time. They’ve hung out several times, too many to count on two hands alone. Yet, this time around, something was different. Something was really different. Anon couldn’t put his finger on it.

Coco Pommel knew. And she was not wanting to let him go without saying it to him. That's why she invited him to go for a walk to her favorite coffee shop.

Neither expected the outcome.


Inspired by SONS - Ghosts.

Pre-read by Rikkity.

Art by Styarema.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

She could smell the coffee as they approached the shop, the aromas powerful. The thought crossed her mind that she needed to save him from this place, because it was definitely too powerful even for her nostrils, but she knew he would be fine. He’ll live.

There were no mistakes made when pre-reading. Only happy accidents.

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Twenty questions, I mean COME ON.
You can do better than that, silly Hooman.

Fluffy warm feelings. Nice romantic story. My only critique is that the narrative is too focused on the characters which didn't set the mood up appropriately. Still, it was a nice story.

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Thank you! Appreciate getting feedback like this as it helps me improve as an author. Happy you still enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

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Twenty questions is Anon's favorite game wdym? :trollestia:

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All because you said 'save' instead of what was there. :rainbowlaugh:

Great story this one. Good work.

“Yeah, and man, I’m so glad that I could tell her that we’re together. She’s going to literally flip a lid, then her boutique, and then Spike. It’ll be hilarious. ” He laughed to himself. “You think I should record it?”

do it :pinkiehappy:

Doesn't happen often, that I stumbled upon a Coco Pommel fic! So adorable! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you as always, Wingman!

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Bet. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Thank you! Happy you enjoyed the fic. :twilightsmile:

“The cold never bothered me anyway,” Coco interrupted, craning her head up at Anon. She smiled. “I’d love to go out, but…”

A frozen refrence?:duck:

That was an adorable fanfic

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