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Flint-Lock


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Jim Brody is not what you would call a "ladies man". He's short, balding, kinda chubby, and overall unappealing to women. Yet despite this, he's managed to earn the friendship of the lovely Coco Pommel. A mare who he feels is far too good for him.


Special thanks to TehSporkBandit for proofreading and editing!

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Comments ( 30 )

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

He swore, that mare could drive a monster truck through a horde of zombies and it’d be adorable.

SOMRBODY NEEDS TO DRAW THAT! With Coco being adorable.

Damn it I was hoping for a cockblock from Equestria's least assertive mare, which would have been funny. Kind of like reading that one story Redgerdarp did where you dream about Rarity and then hang yourself in the closet.

Not quite sure where the sex is here.

Yes I would LOVE to see this continued.

4958601 *adds that to my list of things to draw* :pinkiesmile:

Okay, I read this story at least twice.........I don't see how the "sex" tag fits in. Nothing that would REALLY require that tag is here. Nothing explicit, nothing graphic. Sooooooo (this is just my opinion) I don't think you really need the tag on there. It might set off the wrong ideas in people's minds before they even read it. :rainbowhuh:

*squeeee~* the love is strong with these two, and oh so delicious! please make a sequel so that i may enjoy a continued buffet.:scootangel:

4966297

Just took it out. Thanks for the advice!

just realized this is foreshadowing, nice
It was?
well, isn't the trip to the park technically now their first date?

This AN hasn't been isolated as such. Better fix that.

THE ADORABLE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS! HNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGG.
feels.exe has crashed

Immigrate to Equestria? Sounds like a plan!

That was honestly very heartwarming and adorable.

This was beautiful and heartwarming. 10/10 would read again.

This was a cute read! You done good, partner. And for some reason, I pictured Paul Giamatti as Brody... I don't know why.

THIS IS ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:yay:
-cough cough- um, yeah, so.... I'm kinda surprised that a fic about a random OC and Coco Pomel confessing their respective love would be a fic that I actually like. You must teach me how to make the kawaiis, Flint-Lock Senpai!

Coco tittered. “It was the least I could do.” With that, the little pony picked up a cucumber sandwich and daintily bit off a corner, then dabbed her mouth with a napkin. Needless to say, Jim’s heart melted like a crayon on a radiator. He swore, that mare could drive a monster truck through a horde of zombies and it’d be adorable.

That does sound affordable

Jim’s jaw dropped. The little stone all but danced across the water, leaving a trail of splashes like ring-shaped hoofprints. Its journey only ended when it tried to skip off a unicorn’s head… on the other side of the pond.

Headshot!!!

“I’m sorry, but this… it just sounds so chaotic. All those different voices trying to shout over each other, nopony agreeing to anything unless somepony else approves of it. How does your government get anything done?”

When everything is done correctly it doesn't.

Jim held up a finger. “Firstly, my country has a president , not a Princess. And yes, they can only hold office for a maximum of eight years.”

A maximum of 10yrs a minimum of 3.

VP gets in 2yrs into first term can run for 2 terms. Just a bit of perspective.

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