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Kevinltk


Hello, I am a graphic designer who enjoys MLP. Drawing, writing, and proofreading are the main things I like to share with others.


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After the invasion of Canterlot, ponies became aware of the frightening changeling race. As a result, they had adopted methods of exposing and countering the love-feeding parasites.

Glamour, like other changelings, have found it more challenging to find a stable supply of love. Seeing the flaws in posing as a pony's loved one, she tries a new way of getting love.

By becoming a fashion model.

All she had to do was become famous and bask in the adoration of her fans. However, the world of fashion is not as easy as it looks, and Glamour finds her life become much more complicated when she gets paired up with Manehattan's newest fashion designer, Coco Pommel.


First featured on 8/29/15


This story takes place a bit after the events of "Rarity Takes Manehattan".

Chapters (35)
Comments ( 1121 )

Sad Glamour is sad. I like it! (The story, not the sad changeling. Changelings need love too)

“When’s our anniversary?”

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Really great job on the first chapter, it had me laughing all the way through. I really look forward to reading the rest of this story.

Its a good story so far! I will track and like the fic for now but I do hope you keep this up! :pinkiehappy:

Oh and I added it to Queen Chrysalis's Changeling Swarm, hopefully that will help you get some more views

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Thanks for adding it. I'll be sure to finish it, it's just going to take quite some time to write it all.

However, not every pony were suited for that kind of life.

'everypony was' Since everypony is a variant of everybody or everyone, it should also be one word.

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Fixed. Thank you very much for pointing that out.

This is a promising start! I'll be tracking this! :pinkiehappy:

aCB

This was pretty entertaining. I hope you continue!

This is an excellent start, I'll be putting this in Favourites, I think. Keep up the good work!

Having written a Female Pony x OC Female Changeling myself, I have to say that I'm really interested in this story.

Ri2

Who should we pity more here? Glamour or Oak Tree?

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Definitely Oak Tree. I don't think he'll survive the talk without being delegated to the couch for the next... oh, century. :pinkiecrazy:

Awesome start! I look forward to seeing what you do with this, Kev. :twilightsmile:

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Just the couch? I find your lack of sadism disturbing.

Maybe Manehattan was not going to be so bad.

Obvious cue line is obvious. I love it.

It was not like there was some sort of ancient spell that could turn a pony into an alicorn.
Sure... that would be ridiculous...
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
:trollestia:

Break into a show and say 'hi' to a shy pony.

Now I know how to romance ^^

But this is really wonderful.
~Twi

Really enjoyed this chapter. Nice characterization for Coco there. And I think Glimmer is going to come to like Manehatten very much. :twilightsmile:

Ooh, I like this. Very well written so far, and has the potential to become really interesting! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

Alondro peers in and eye-narrows. "Chernglerngs..." he mutters gutturally before slipping into the shadows to scheme.

Her first thought was to go use the bathroom, but she realized taking magazines of beautiful mares to the bathroom was probably going to look very suspicious.

:rainbowlaugh: Yes, Glamour, you don't want that sort of reputation...

Hmm, now Glamour will have to make friends with Coco all over again. This should be interesting.

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You either laugh at her misery or feel sorry for her misery. Bottom line, her misery is entertaining.

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Think of how dirty and smelly the reading material will get in the bathroom.

aCB

Even though the story didn't go into detail (because of the POV, obviously), I could just imagine Glamour's walk being awkward and painful to watch. She would stock out like a sore thumb from the rest of the models, as they have to exude confidence.

I'm looking forward to how this story evolves. There's so many different directions it could go, and I'm looking forward to more awkwardness (potentially) when it comes to the Nutmeg/Glamour disparity.

Glamour figured that she had plenty of time to prepare herself for her walk. Or panic. She decided to do both.

Best and most rational option.

Glamour is smart.
~Twi

Incoming changeling revelation in 3... 2...

I really like this premise and it's well written.

I don't think Coco will mind when she finds out the truth. She's super nice like that.

Huh, this is really interesting!

Good story so far. Can't wait to see how things work out for them. :heart:

Coco really has learned from Rarity, I see. Generosity, whether the other pony wants it or not!

Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next! :twilightsmile:

Love the story so far!

One typo: We meet at the studio her and : Her to Here

flair for the dramatics. -- Missing end quotation marks

Also, since Glamour has her bag here, there needs to be a note that she took it from Coco's apartment in the previous chapter before leaving.

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Thanks for the corrections.

As for the bag thing, this is the first chapter that Glamour is in Coco's apartment, but in case you were talking about this visit, she did get the bag back.

“Yeah, I’m sure,” Glamour replied as Coco retrieved her saddlebag and walked with her to the entrance. “If I don’t do this now, it’s just going to bug me until I do.”

Wonderful, as usual. A couple of corrections:

I still have you and Grace as friend, after all.” -- as a friend

tonight was just a onetime thing, -- change to one-time (had to look it up)

There was a dark, wet spot in the siding above her that was visibly sagging and dripping water.

Hawt.
~Twi

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Thanks again for the corrections.

I changed the first one to, "I still have you and Grace as friends, after all."

The one-time thing was a really good catch.

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You just love those wet, moist stuff, do you?

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And dripping.

Don't forget dripping xD
~Twi

Careful, Glamour, or you'll fall in love with Coco.

Interesting premise. Gonna follow!

Fresh take on an old story. I look forward to new chapters.

*Alondro still does not trust the cherngelerng, no matter how clumsy and awkward she is* It could all be an act to fool the readers! THEY KNOW WE'RE WATCHING THEM!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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