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A human and Princess Celestia wake up in bed together with head-splitting hangovers. They have no idea what happened the previous night, and they're not sure they want to know.
This is a stupid fic, but I had a ton of fun writing it. 'Fraid it'll only be two chapters long though.
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Oh and uh...first? =p
3383368 Liked comment because there was no reason to dislike.
Broc flower and Xander root?....Celestia had tribal healing powder?.....That shit ruins your perception man
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Good to see someone got the Fallout reference.
3383396 I was playing fallout 2 not ten minutes ago
3383396 And fallout 2 is where healing powder is your only source of HP for the first half hour or so
3383388 Everything's good when you add ponies, silly.
3383380 Eh, every story and every forum has trolls, no matter how hard you try to please everyone.
Thanks for the moral support though.
Seriously, this does look like it could be a fun read. I'm strongly encouraging the author to push this story. xD 
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Yeah, that got kind of annoying.
Hmmm... I like it. It was an all around fun read, and I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters! Good luck!
3383405 i just said fuck it and rested after every firefight,And got goris,K-9,robodog,and dogmeat to be squidgy for me
3383401 i know,But healing powder fucks your perception up the ass...
I wonder why this thing got three downvotes? Maybe it was the "Human" tag.
3383414 It does not matter what they say. It's your story, run with it. If I gave a flying
about what a couple of down votes said, I wouldn't be continuing on my fic. Trolls will be trolls. Carry on and tell the world your tale, there's people who would love to hear it! Screw the ones who don't. Rise above it and keep going.
Looks good to me. Never quite been in that kind of a fix but have friends who have awakened in similar circumstances. Definitely no princesses involved however.
"Like saying Dresden had been slightly inconvenienced by WWII". I lost my sides- thank you for that :']
I love your sense of humour, it's similar to my own. Very much following! :D
I lost it at "faded away like an old meme." I'm going to be watching this.
While I'm usually against humans waking up next to a pony (with the exception of the Cuddle Bandit, he's cool), I'll be seeing where this goes.
Mmmmm, i dont know why, but i just remember; The Hangover, Equestrian Edition.
Celestia had drunken sex. Yep looks good to me.
3383380 Liked comment cause your profile picture...nice pic btw
3391302 Thank you! I happen to like it as well!
Liked comment... because I can.
I lol'd REALLY hard.
Nice update!
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Best part?
very well done XD you should do more of these with other ponies
3402102 Drunk sex, it opens up a lot of possibilities in terms of awkward moments in the next chapters.
Also, the ending was good.
Only thing I disliked about it was the way he arrived in Equestria.
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Why? What was wrong with it?
3402258 Well, I am a geek and I know that the energy required to theoretically tare a hole in the universe can not be achieved by an exploding particle accelerator.
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You know this fic isn't meant to be taken seriously.
3402350 I am well aware. I still dislike that little detail.
The rest of the story is good non the less
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Did you notice the two video games references I stuck into this fic?
3402374 Eeenope.
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The characters name? The powder he and Celestia mixed into their drinks?
3402389 I must've missed the powder part.
You know,Healing powder isnt a great hangover cure,Some jet mixed with a smidge of psycho tends to work,or fixer too
Ah yes the
that like everybody being drunk and saying they're a good driver until they drive through there living room and say i meant to do that.
Wait Celestia aura not blue its gold or pink? Shit I don't remember.
So, I read it. This was odd and definitely not my thing, but I still want to give an honest review. So what did I think?
It was actually pretty good. The descriptions for the most part were pretty well done. I liked the comparisons to other things like Celestia giving Jack a look like he had asked her what the color blue tasted like, God I love that. I need to use that more. I don't do that enough. God, I love that. And I didn't feel that it was overwhelming either. You kept a nice balance of that. Most writers I know get into a groove and then can't get themselves out of that, and they constantly repeat their 'signature move'(I'm calling it that) so much that is gets boring. But I felt it was a good balance and it helped the description flow.
At the beginning however, I felt the description for Jack being sick was a little on the weak side. I felt there could have been more with exactly what ached in his body. I'm not a drinker, so I don't know what it feels to have a hangover. I have friends who do, but I personally don't.
While I did say this was not my thing, I would be lying if I said that this fic didn't make me laugh. Celestia crying about how her people don't treat her like a pony. I cracked up there. That was funny.
The way he got to Equestria was a bit odd and I would have liked to know more about what happened when Twilight transformed Jack into a dragon, but those don't hurt the story bad enough to make a difference.
Overall, I thought it was pretty good, just not my taste.
Hope that helps.
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It does. Thank you very much!
3482963 You're welcome.
You really need to write a story about Jack as a dragon.
Did you know: Jack Ryan is also the main protagonist of bioshock. Was that intended?
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Yes. I've beaten the game at least three times on all difficulty settings.
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Glad to hear that. But I still don't get why you took him as protagonist in this story. I mean, he just doesn't quite fit in the role of a drunk guy having fun with Celestia. Even though he got drunk quite a lots of times when I played...
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I just felt like using it.
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ok, not the kind of answer I had expected but, oh well. You're the author after all and you did a great job on that fic so why bother. I especially like your comparisons, for example the how does the color blue taste like one.
I love the two "to say that _______ would be like saying __________" similies.
3648632 LOLLACP
(Laugh out loud like a crazy person)
The way you set everything up.....EXCELLENT!!
5/5 Moustaches to you dear Author.