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Please I'm looking for help making my stories. I have ideas but I'm a poor writer and struggle with making story. I really would appreciate any help, co-author or anything. Please message me.

I have an idea that the mane 6 ring an abandoned filly in the everfree forest but I can't get a name and can't figure out how to publish anything. Plz Hall meh

First I would like to say I am posting this, only because a few suggested to me that I do so. So, I am.

Introductions.

What can I say, I am one of many that joined this site to read stories about ponies.
Well, I could have done that without joining. I mostly joined to post comments to others on stories they made that I liked, and give my general opinions of said stories. During my time here, I did a lot of that.
In time, like others, I came up with some of my own ideas for a few stories. To say the least, they have not been well taken.
Not that I have had any expectations on how my stories would be perceived by the masses, the overall lack of comments I did not expect. Even by those that did not like my stories.
I could say within a twisted way of thinking, that my stories have proven to make the readers of my stories speechless, as being an achievement of sorts. Though this doesn't help with the knowing by me as to why so many do not like or those very few who did like it what I created.
For any who ask, yes, I did like my own stories, in that they are some of the type of stories I like to read.
I think that will do it for Introductions. I don’t wish to get more carried away with it then I already did. :derpytongue2:

About the stories if any are interested.

The first was created over a discussion I had with another author. It had to do with the lack of details as to how a pony got the name that they did. It is of course a bit of an oddity that the name of many ponies fit who they turn out to be so well. Question being, how and why. So, my story Baby Naming was made as an idea on how one might have gotten their name.
To date, it has 153 views, 5 likes and 11 dislikes. And two helpful comments by another on some spelling issues I fixed. Some comments was by one who liked the story. All of that was a while ago. That story is mostly dead now.

Onto my other two.

These two are part of a trilogy I have been working on. First thing to know about them is that they are both a sad fic with some gore. There were many facets behind the creating of them both. I think I will start with the first. A Kezzerdrix in Equestria. Can’t say what was the first thing that was an inspiration to me in making this story. Be it the Kezzerdrix killer rabbit from the card game Magic The Gathering, or the development of a few OC’s I was thinking of making.

The story plays out as a simple day in the park with some ponies at play. One get’s separated while off looking for an errant ball that got away from her. A little exploration ensues till she finds herself in the the presents of one not so friendly large rabbit. Something she or any within Equestria has never seen before. This is a spoiler. It does not go well for her. Hence, the sad, dark, and gore tags.

The story has an alternate ending. A possible source for why some did not like the story.
If it was do to the reader not liking the gore in it, well one should not read stories marked gore, if they have a problem with that.

To date, it has only 45 views, 6 likes and 39 dislikes, and a lack of helpful comments. Some of the few where simply stating that the story was confusing, and bad. Another was a question of, “What is Kezzerdrix?” Even if the Kezzerdrix did not come from any given source, the story dose described it as one mean, and bad tempered big bunny. Looking like a twisted nightmarish hair.
I also think some forget, Google is your friend. Aside from that, the ponies don’t know what it is so it was supposed to be a bit of a mystery as to what it is in the first place.
I do have a link to a video showing just what a Kezzerdrix is. Yes, it was shown once in a commercial on TV. So, I did not just pull this rabbit out of a hat, it has an origin of sorts.

Commercial link:

The alternate ending was important to the story. One, it helps tell a little of what one of my OC’s can do, and it is a catalyst to the beginning of the next story. Return of the Kezzerdrix.

Onto the next and last one.

Return of the Kezzerdrix.
This is a long one, but I will try to keep it short. It was created for me to have a chance to expand some on my OC’s. Again, it is a sad, dark, and gory story. So it should be of no surprise that some ponies get hurt or even dies in it, and in a horrible fashion. Would not have been much of a horror without such moments. It also has some parts where many are having to not only deal with some unknown threat killing ponies, but having to deal with their sense of loss.

The story also takes from parts of the show directly. Some readers like this, some don’t.
Overall the story is mostly a sad fic, and some odd comedy in it, that I happen to like. This sort of makes it pay homage to a lot of the “B” horror movies out there. Slither, Nightmare on Elm Street, Feast, just to name a few. The story is a horror, though many parts of it is less serious than the previous one. Another possible reason some did not like this story. I would not know.

To date, it has only 49 views, 2 likes and 17 dislikes, and a lack of helpful comments as well.
Again, Some of the few where simply stating that the story was confusing, and bad. Another was another question of, “What is Kezzerdrix?” This one may not have looked at the story before this one, or they not have asked that.

I post this not in asking for good reviews or anything like that. As it stands by those that have looked at my stories is, they are not well liked and are bad stories. I am really only interested to know why they are seen as so bad. Mostly my last one. I put a lot of work into that one. I am also currently creating the third story to this trilogy. It will have in it the explanation as to why that Kezzerdrix was in Equestria in the first place, and what next is to follow. Bigger plans I have for this last story. Though I have little to no interest in posting it when it is done. If an interest in it dose one day grow, I might be tempted to share what I created. Though for the moment there is little interest in it by others.

Again, I am just curious as to why my story bombed so badly. None is saying. One did post many comments that I did delete. But those comments where an attack on me personally, and had nothing to do with my story. He even told me he did not read it. That it would just be a piece of shit not worth reading. Oh, well.

For those that do have an interest in any of these stories and do wish to give me comments, even if they are unfavorable to the story. I would appreciate some insight as to what is wrong with them. I will also look over and give my comments to some stories for those that do comment, and wish to have a few comments on their stories as well. It is why I joined this site. To read some stories, and comment on them.

For those that got this far-
Thank you for your time. :twilightsmile:

hi im a newer author, I have posted one story but I didn't do a good job at it so can some one please help me by editing/reading my new one. just reply to this comment or send me some mail. thank you for the help.

Hello I'm an not a new writer per say, I haven't written anything in almost 10 years until now though. I have story in my head and I need to get it out but my spelling and grammar have been bad my whole life so I avoided writing because of it. I just can't seem to learn how to do it very well. Part of my Fic has been published and apparently has a lot of problems with it that are still unknown to me. If somepony would please review it for me and give me feedback it would make me a really happy pony.

It's always hard to write not in the native language... Grammar and puntuation are never perfect, and sometimes you just don't even know where you made a mistake... I need some help with my story "Expolring Equestria" (notice: sci-fi base), pre-reader is very necessary.
Please.

Hello im a new author and my story is oddly enough getting disliked a great deal. http://www.fimfiction.net/story/194698/apprentice-of-the-moon-tales-of-a-teen-drake is my story, please help. And acc added me story to new author section, plz remove when possible due to myself still needing assistance. I apologize for doing that.

Before you start 'helping', why don't you fix the apostrophe in your title?
Oh, and the illegible description too, while you're at it.

I'm a fairly new writer and even though my story is small I have barely any views or comments. As soon as you read it you'll see a problem that I can't really fix. I just want to know if there are any other problems that cripple the story. The story is A Tad Crazy With A Hint Of Magic

SHL

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Thanks, but when I write something longer, I make mistakes XD

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Sure. Why not? Also, I don't really think that your grammar would need that much work. Your comment has perfect grammar. :twilightsmile:

Hi there guys, I'm a fairly new writer I really need some constructive criticism for my fanfic but unfortunately I don't really have many comments suggesting how I could improve it. It would really help if you guys could take the time to look at it and tell me where i've gone wrong,
Thanks for reading this!

Hi, would anyone mind pointing me towards a FAQ or offer some advice? My spacing in the editor doesn't carry over properly when I publish.

I have an adventure that is a crossover between MLP and Skyrim. The story is 10 chapters long and done except for polishing. Need some help to make this a decent story.

Thanks in advance.

I'm a new writer, and I have more likes than comments. I need help on how to improve the quality of my fic. Here you go.

Hay i have been on the sight for a little over two years and have written my share of shity stories, and two that i am actually proud of. and for a dyslexic college student with no time to write. i hope at least some one will tell me what they think.

I'm a new writer, I need help- response from readers specifically, any help you can give me would be nice

Hey all!
Im a new author and have just posted the third chapter of my very first fic! I would be extremely grateful to anyone who could spend the time to give it a read and throw some comments my way, let me know how I'm doing :pinkiehappy:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/158940/top-speed

Thanks for your time guys!

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