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It's been 10 months since Anon stumbled out of the Everfree, and as far as Rainbow was concerned, he was the coolest creature in Ponyville, except herself of course.

So when Rainbow sees smoke rising from the Libary Anon and Twilight were currently living, of course, she'd rush to the rescue, to save Twilight of course.

Massive thanks to Maonyman for letting me use their awesome work as the cover - https://derpibooru.org/profiles/Maonyman

Note - The name is purely because Anon doesn't have hooves, making a story about shoes is a concept someone else can write.

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making a story about shoes is a concept someone else can write.

What do you mean by that?

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I liked the name, then considered, shouldn't Hearts and Shoes have more Shoe puns in it, maybe i'll spend the next year tieing up some show puns.

It good.

The two sat together, enjoying the closeness for a few while, when Anon broke the silence.

Shouldn't it have been Rainbow Dash who did it?

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And this is why you don't decide to add a little something, after you've proof read and edited a story XD

Thanks for that, it was origionaly going to be Anon, but I decided to make it Dash instead.

This was well done:twilightsmile:

I liked the story, of course it is not very different from other works on this site but that does not mean that in my opinion it is very well done.

Being something more objective, it doesn't really seem very remarkable to me, it is a fairly simple and simple idea but pleasant to read, so I put it between three and four stars... since I am not very sure how much to rate it, I will go for the safe option and I will give it three stars ⭐⭐⭐

A pretty decent fanfic about Anon and Raimbow Dash, I must say that if it had a longer sequel I would definitely be encouraged to read it, based on this one-shot I bet it would be a good slice of life

I hope to read more of your works!

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Thanks, and I'm fine with that, I'm no great writer so a pleasant read is what I aim for.

I have 2 sequeals in mind,

A direct sequel i've lovelingly decided is called electric-boot-aloo - I'm givine myself a year to find all the hoof and shoe puns and fit them into a 1 year anniversary fic.

And a Story based on Anons Coffee shop, but I want to finish my other projects first.

D'awww, this was sweet :heart:

There should be a group for "Not Going Home" stories, somepony should create that, totally.

Not much late-night business in Canterlot, but theirs a growing demand for it

there's a growing demand

As if Dash would not demand to move in with him.
Or simply tow her cloud house over or half way in between.

So, when Rarity inevitably discovers this, I wonder what her reaction might be.

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Puns, puns will happen :pinkiehappy:

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