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Hidden_Night


Fledgling My Little Pony Fan

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Anon has been put through the wringer. He has seen everything on the other end. He could call himself a multiversal traveller, but only on a one way road.

If only he had a certain magic to his life. Something to spark in his mind, heart, and to finally live forever.

If only he wasn’t a horse, but he could change his mind!


Slightly (it’s possible) humorous take on Isekai/HiE stories. All with your favorite tropes. You know the ones.

This is a remake! Original Story

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 56 )

What could possibly go wrong?

Many things my dear anon, Many things

Here we go again then

I'm curious. Why did you decide to make this story? Isn't this the third story that you've written that has this same premise?

LEEEETTTTSSSS GGGOOOOOOOOI!!!!

Does it have to be a remake? I mean, given the premise the previous storylines could just have our guy killed, right? Although, I was rooting for a happy ending on the first one. Second one is still up in the air about the direction it’s going, and I like that, too.

He went from Season 4 to G5 to Season 1. There’s a lot that can happen. I’m excited to see. Oh, maybe he didn’t die in those other storylines? Maybe something new happened to bump him into the rebirth cycle for these three instances? I wonder what got him started on this path, too.

Ah yes, misunderstanding lmao !

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This Is a remake of the story that originally had this premise.

If I recall correctly the author said that they were feeling a little burnt out which led them to creating the second story.

Pretty Interesting. Please Continue

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Yeah, pretty much. A general feeling of not liking the original story lead to this.

Still,‘I don’t deny I’ve been beating this horse to the ground. Still won’t stop me from swinging.


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It’s more of a reset than an actual rebirth of his death. Though it does give me some ideas upon to expand on the future. I’m happy to just keep going.

I don't understand this anon so far, most of the time a man without a face or with a mask with a question mark, what's the point, this isn't even a criticism it's a question, can anyone tell me how this came about and why it has even a tege just for him?

mmmmh i can already taste the next chapter!

“Oh cool.” Anonymous didn’t mind, sure he’s taking orders but who didn’t want to follow after some evil power that just appeared and immediately recruited him. He wonders if he could pass off as a free agent working with whoever for cash. Though he would need to see what he’s getting out of this, other than the usual evil ‘The right to live’ and ‘to serve our glorious compony.’ He can ask after the job is done. “It shall be done my Queen.”

Why not? If he can reset after death I would like to explore every possibility! Although maybe he had and it never ended well?

> his once blank pupils became green

the pupils became green, or the irises became green?

Woah, Celestia’s not playing around. Didn’t even ask about the circumstances of his recent employment. I suppose official evidence gathering, discovery, and interrogation are to follow? Won’t look good when he escapes, but it could be really fun.

Did Anonymous even commit any actual crimes? One can argue he became Nightmare's servant in duress. The only thing he actually did was get beat up by the mane six.

Also, can a foreigner really be charged with treason?

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Don't argue with Moon Logic.
Wait... Horse Logic.

Hey it's me, Goku mindset!

Interesting premise, and good so far

lol going right back to where the heroes live after his prison break. Bad luck there. Might as well help Trixie do a show for the princess. :rainbowwild: but maybe he’ll get Trixie to do something different?

Needs some spice, let my man show his power a little he's a world jumper right? He should be pretty strong.

“There is a price, a great price. I would like to sleep on your couch.”
“Trixie does not agree to these terms.”

It's because Trixie sleeps on that couch.

Being evil is awesome!

Comment posted by LoserkidUwU deleted January 21st

LETS GOOOO
I THO THIS IS GONE BUT JUST REWRITE IT YIPPEEEE

“Do those girls know how to safely remove a cursed spirit?"

JUJUTSU KAISEN REFERENCE?!?!

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I wouldn't call him evil he's more Megamind. Wouldn't kill or even deliberately harm anyone but Presentation abounds.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dy2zB8bLSpk

Your chapters are short, and I suffer because of this!:raritydespair:

"May I see it,Lord Frieza?"

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“VEGETA, DRAGON BALLS. NOW!”

#JusticeForAnon #AnonDidNothingWrong

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You know.

You’re right. If you see this chapter unpublished later than I’m working on it.

Hmm, is Anon intercepting all messages around Ponyville? Just wait till he gets hit with bulk mail. XD

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Just dragon mail, not all mail. Very important distinction.

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Yay! I'm both sad and happy

Nah, it’s not a nothing chapter. This sets up some really interesting hijinks.

I like the chaotic neutrality of Trixie here and the reference to DBZA. I can only imagine what kind of restart Twilight’s mind is going through after that letter -especially if it resembled a butt she might be familiar with… :trollestia: I think there’s a possibility of Anon pulling a Squidward with his mail disrupting powers.

I'll be honest, I didn't realize you were the author of Live, Die, Repeat too and thought someone was running with the same premise. I like what you've done with the remake so far! Really looking forward to see where you take us

I couldn't stop giggling at the message Twilight got.

I'm quite positive there was a 4th chapter. Is it depublished for rewrite?

Buh!!!

Story good. Hope anon manages to screw up in an awesome way for no discernible reason and somehow manages to spin it in such a way that he turns out to look more evil then he was

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The bad ending where Diavolo calms down and just accepts the cycle of death and rebirth. He is at peace and will accept his new life where his soul is destroyed, reborn and destroyed again.

Also horses.

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I would expect Diavolo to be used to it after his 28378473838292928375747939282727th death

i.postimg.cc/RCQk362T/i-think-diavolo-died-so-much-but-so-much-he-just-got-over-v0-5mmruh7va9691.png

Also this story is technically Canon in JJBA lore

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You’re forcing my hand to make at least one JoJotm reference

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Dewit

Make one JoJo reference where anon sees something that reminds him of Giorno and the others

Or make anon slip and say something about king crimson or how he used to be an evil mob boss

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I see he inst versed in the art of curses, dissapointing

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You see, he’s already doing one.

[Domain Expansion: Human In Equestria]

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Someone make a woman narrate how this domain expansion works

Ah, but whose pony butt was depicted? :rainbowwild: I hope he gets a lot more mileage out of his postal interceptions. :rainbowlaugh:

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