This story is a sequel to Before the Night
A sequel to Before the Night. Bald Ostrich, consort and coltfriend to Princess Luna before her banishment, finds himself in modern day Equestria. Will the Royal Sisters remember him? Will adjusting to modern, Equestrian life be difficult for somepony who was once not a pony? This, is Dawn of a New Day
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poor guy. at least he still has his fox
Damn what a slap to the face
Luna you just dump your finance who was there through good times and bad and care about you like other did including your sister and you don't want at least try to get to know him to see if there is something still there despite the fact that you're not as alone anymore. He honestly loved you not because he was alone because he cared about you.
Well fuck.
This is just heartbreaking
luna you bitch
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But a best friend isn't the same as the girl you were going to marry.
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yup but she is a psycic fox who cares for him though so if anyone can help him she can
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Unless she had to deal with heartbreak and being just a placeholder for a lover I think cadence might be better for this.
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she might be better to help with heartbreak but the problem with her is she is luna's niece so if he was told that he might have a problem with it but without that info he might be ok with it. But best option is still blaze cause he knows her and needs a stable freind after being tossed into the future and this happening
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Together might be a even better option considering blaze knows orsi and cadence knows love.
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blaze can relay the things that he should say but wont and cadence can help him
Ah yes the flint and steel which haphazardly sat on the crafting table nearby
Maybe Ostri will connect with Chrysalis, he likely left a lasting impression on her.
Too fast.... meeting with mane6 and drama with luna should be longer and on different chapter from each other.
ahhhhhhhhhhh.............. fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck.....
Nugget what the fuck? Good Job because your good at writing but W h a t t h e F u c k ?
Got a notification that you shot me a reply Nugget, but i can't find it/see it.
Don't want you to think i was ignoring ya.
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i was just saying i was rewriting chapter 2 and 3. check this out for more information
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Cheers m8
Twilight you had access to the princesses who were there even more than this guy plus you were a really bad friend to him and you think you should harass him for history lessons. Luna because a relationship needs two trust and for the people in to care about each other. Luna just dump him in cruelest way possible and you were too busy thinking about Luna who was responsible for this mess in the first place to care about his feelings. Luna barely got a hoof back in the door and she got in by being honest with him about everything.
Gut
How did he go from nocturnal to diurnal so fast?
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magic
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fair
Not a fan of how this is going, Bitch twilight is bitch twilight and i hope this is brought up at some point
Ayo what the fuck? I just reread the chapter 2 rewrite and i gotta say...
- Mane 6 Doesn't give a shit and are just a bunch of hypocrites (Honestly that tracks...)
- Apparently Luna is not *just* a manipulator but a bad one
- Ostri still loves her despite this obvious manipulation (he even calls it out!)
Nani?
(Editing because i don't want to clog the comments with spam)
“No. I know what you’re gonna say, and I can probably guess why you’re here. Luna said she was sorry about what she said and wants to give me another shot?”
“Well… Yes. How did you know that?”
“You wouldn’t have sought me out, Celestia. I know you and I ended off on us being friends, but we were never exactly close. I wish we did get closer; I was genuinely enjoying your company up until I disappeared. But uh… yeah, you wouldn’t have sought to comfort me, especially when Luna was probably crying after what I said to her…”
I Genuinely hope this absolute shite (Though not in writing, if you wanted to make/write immoral characters then HOAH-ly shit ya did a gud job m8!) gets brought up at some point because i just... W h o S t o o p s T o S u c h D e p r a v i t y I n P o n y l a n d ? ?
I'm telling you Nugget, you are onto something here with this story, whether or not it's a good something is entirely up to you.
Don't get Cold Hooves now!
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Yeah and from what I've seen of the possible next chapter twilight doesn't even realize that she got so caught in Luna that she didn't even notice the one who needed a friend the most and pushed him away when she should have been pulling him close. Instead she tries to convince him to go to friendship school where he sees the darkness in cozy heart only because she plays the sweet innocent filly so well that they can't imagine her being bad. Twilight needs to build a friendship with him. He barely been in the future a week and she just decides he needs friendship school. Where does she get that idea. I thought he was pretty nice considering he tried to live by the Golden rule but he wasn't afraid to use the stick if it was called for.
I think he should wait a little longer before getting back into the dating game considering he just got dump and quite cruelly I might add. But friendship is a good thing. I hope he meets starswirl and gives him what for considering that guy deserves it. You in front of a princess and you want to have a holier-than-thou attitude because she got carried away with meeting her hero. I also want Luna to get a talking too for being so mean to her first friend. Telling him that she didn't realize how he felt and that she cared nothing about him. What he have to do write it in the sky before she got it. Though I wouldn't mind him dating twilight although I would keep him dating the elements away from Celestia and Luna until they find the ponies they used to be. And I get that time changes everything but they changed from the people who care to people who don't care and pretend to and no wonder the elements won't respond to them they have forgotten the values they stand for.
I like this chapter. Grate job:D
Poor Ostri, he gets teleported to the future only to find out his so called "girlfriend" was only interested in using him to make herself feel better and doesn't even love him anymore. Celestia doesn't give a damn about him, just tries to hide her true intentions behind a friendly smile while keeping him in a gilded cage within Equestria, Chrysalis went batshit crazy. Honestly the poor guy should travel for a bit and see the world. A nice change of scenery from Equestria would do him nicely
Going to give chysalis a full, whole chapter next?
This chapter feels way smoother.
In both versions of your last chapter it felt like you wanted to just somehow shoehorn chrysalis in there somehow
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Though if he does to date the elements then he should keep the knowledge away from Celestia and Luna.
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Well sometimes when you loved someone it's hard to get them out of your heart even when your head says forget them.
It's nice that he gets to keep some of his old friends. And Celestia really thought that lying just to keep the guy was a good idea, I hope that bites her in the butt.
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That implies it hasn't already
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Well she last we saw was trying to get him back with Luna and didn't even bother to care about his feelings. And if was just a matter of time than why didn't they say that in the first place instead I don't love you and I never loved you and you were just a replacement for everyone else's love. Neither of them said that in the first place and Luna says she didn't know that he loved what he have to do write in the sky for her to get it.
This is quite good. I’m really enjoying it. Keep it up.:D
The chapter title is missing an r.
Chrysalis not Chysalis
Eyyyyyy!
The Psychotic bitches are recognized for their psychotic bitchiness!
Les goooooooooooooooo-
Nice, glad to see someone from his past is actually happy for his company and isn't gonna try to use him
Well all caught up. Truly I can see Celestia becoming a manipulate bitch after a thousand years. It truly hurt to see what Luna did to Ostri and really wanted to put her on the shit list. It was interesting to see Chrysalis want to have something she only had a brief touch of kindness and compassion to be touched on. We'll see if she can stay on the path of semi goodness. What is gonna happen when Cosy Glow and Tirek come for their revenge tour in due time?
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I can see why queen didn't want to change they want something of after a 1000 yrs of hurting her people and Celestia and never attempted to right their wrongs.
Okay she went from public enemy number 1 to everyone friend in a chapter with no mention about any thing that happened between them. At least Celestia might be getting on the right track but if she wants to get her sister her husband than get cadence to help because I'm sure he could fall for her again but Luna doesn't even seem to care how much she hurt him or realize how she meant to him. I am betting that cadence could help her realize how valuable she had was and not to let go to waste.
I guran-damn-tee y'all that celestia and luna are trying to manipulate him So Hard.
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Luna unfortunately is doing a terrible job of trying to get his heart back. She is making no effort to make it right for her heartless words.
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I think the idea is she CAN'T. She caused him too much pain and rather than admit ANY of that LET ALONE any wrong doing she:
- Refuses to give him any space
- Tries to manipulate him any chance she gets
- Only even tries to "Get back together" because "Celly The Borg Queen" told her how much of a dumbass she was for breaking the heart of the ultimate warrior/combatant/tactician
I know for a fact that i've forgotten to list some stuff but i think this is good enough
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Yeah if she really wants his heart she should really get the expert to help because this isn't helping her case it just makes her look stupid and for someone who used to work so hard to take care of her people even while being hated for it she does have talent.
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Aight, lemme be blunt and ask you a "what if?":
What if you had a girlfriend, a girlfriend who you loved and cherished, yet she broke up with you in the most callous emotionless way possible, then after you somehow managed to get over the grief of your girlfriend dumping you like a candy wrapper she did everything in her power (except admitting wrong doing) to make you get back with her? (up to, including, and beyond:
- Gaslighting
- Sociopathic Tendencies
- Involving her "girl friend" who is also a goddamn Sociopath and just so happens to be a VERY important government official (who absolutely abuses her powers to try and make you two get back together)
And finally
- Both of them refusing to respect your privacy in anyway shape or form (we're talkin' breaking into your home and begging you to come back and breaking down your bedroom door when you try to barricade yourself away from them)
Would you want that in your life?
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No but I am saying if Luna is going try to get back with she should ask for help from an expert. Maybe that would get through her head how much she messed up.
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Ah my b. I thought you were going for a different angle.