Our protagonists awakens in Equestria as a with only a bare bone understanding of the world they are now in.
And after a bad encounter with Trixie our protagonist Amber Wood has decided to stick around Ponyville.
Will living in Equestria help heal the wounds her old life left behind.
This tale begins just before the start of the series.
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What's the dark tag for?
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I thought the story would be darker than it is currently going.
Not bad. An interesting start. Let's see where it goes.
Good start, could do with some polishing, but otherwise good
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Interesting story. Added to my read list.
Kirin MC fics are rare, so seeing one is a good thing.
The bad is that here not enough descriptions and dialogues.
I like this story so far, but I hope you get better at writing as story progresses.
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I will work more on both. Though the lack of dialogue at the moment is a consequence of where the Amber is at in the story.
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Love it
Sorry for not posting in a while I have been fixing storm damage on top of my other responsibilities and have usually been to tired at the end of each day to write anything but the next chapter is coming eventually.
Trixie as the evil generic slaver merchant. Pretty uniqe!
Pleae make this a revenge story. The last good isekai revenge story i read haven't update in like 2-3 years.
and now its off to the hospital.
"hey! who bit my tail!"
"you did."
"oh... i must not have tasted that good..."
the protagonist doesn't give a shit lol
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I prefer not, please.
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Is it supposed to be "in case."
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It is.
The phrase is so silly that people even 3D print it.
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Thanks
I love this story a little short but a great story more please and can u send it to human filly colt section i think outers would love it thanks
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What do you mean by, "human filly colt section"?
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If this is a lighthearted slice of life story, then why is it called My Little Ball of Fire & Vengeance?
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Nirik...
But in all seriousness though it will remain light hearted the title will make more sense as the story continues when I reach certain parts.
Racism yay!
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Okay that made me laugh.
hopefully it will get better 4 her 💖💖💖💖
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I'm waiting for fire. It's been a while since we had any. 🔥🔥🔥
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Don't worry it will come.
To be honest I had been wanting to write a story about a character with fire abilities for a while so when I realized I could use a kirin/nirik it all started to click together.
Awesome ch more please
From the sounds of it, shifing Nirik is a mental switch, which sounds way more handy than passive emotion emmulation
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hummer - humor
Gapping - gaping
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Was there another chapter with Pinkie clones?
Amber mentions feeling sorry for the Pinkie clones, which I thought was a reference to the Too Many Pinkie Pies episode but then the Too Many Pinkie Pies episode kicks off at the end of the chapter.
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No there was not.
timeskip?
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Yes but only a small one.
Awesome ch more please
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Welp this should be fun a confrontation with Trixie with an alicorn amulet
Maybe some revenge will come to trixie 😁😁😁😁
Decent story, but it's in heavy need of editing.
You have several line breaks mid dialogue in every chapter, several words that sound the same but aren't what you meant like rap and wrap or hotty and haughty. Some words are missing entirely.
All that aside, I could still understand what's going on, for the most part, but time seems to be skipping ahead really quickly and I have no idea what Amber has been doing with herself besides teaching the crusaders new tricks she learned from Trixie and keeping her Nirik form around. Is she learning magic with Dinky? Can she even use any? Inquiring readers want to know.
Still, even if you don't address those questions, I'll still look forward to another chapter, after all, Kirin MC stories are super rare, I'd hate to see this story die.
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Life got a little busy but the next chapter has been worked on little by little.