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NightShadow-z


I am a fanfic reader/writer. Sometimes for YouTube.

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Nightlight And Twilight Velvet have always tried to do right by others. So, when they found an orphaned colt had been left at their door, they knew right away to take him in and out of the cold. How could they ever know what dangers that shadowy night would hold? After being adopted by them, Night Shadow is given all the love and care a colt of his age would need, even managing to get into Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, the same school that his elder sister Twilight Sparkle attended. Then one day, he's given the chance to live with his sister again in her new home in Ponyville, witnessing firsthand all the different adventures she and her friends go on. What is in store for this stallion, and how will he react to all the dangers that now await him?

This is a rewrite of The Mage's Brother, using my new writing style and story ideas for this new story.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

More good

Glad to see this back, let's see where it goes.

Comment posted by CorporateColonel deleted Oct 22nd, 2023

either way, ignoring the previous comment i made to the VCCL bot-looking message, i shall say i will be keeping track of this story. keep up the good work.

A very good first chapter we need more of the story

This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

11734347
Thank you. I'm working on Chapter 2 now. I'm gonna be taking a little extra time per chapter just to make sure I don't rush anything and that everything makes sense between chapters

11734364
You're welcome.

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11734364
Um, will he have an element when he along with the others defeat Nightmare Moon and have a part to play in the relevant events throughout the show?

Great story so far and I hope the progress with chapter 2 is going well and I wish you a good say

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No, he will not have an element of harmony. He's moving to ponyville after the events of nightmare moon, but, the events of the show will be changed a bit to fit his presense

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