Spike has lived in Ponyville for 6 years, and Rarity has always been his crush, and love interest. But, once he finally musters the courage to tell her how he feels, she breaks his heart with her views on inter-species romance. Now, Spike must deal with the fact that the only one he's loved will never return his feelings. On top of that, Twilight starts to act strange around him, but she's not in heat like he thought she was. Will Spike's heart mend, or will he refuse to open his heart again?
PREPAIR THY HEART FOR THE TWISPIKE!!!
Chapters (13)
I like the premise of this fic. but I'll wait for more chapter before reading it
8179101 That's fine. I don't exactly know when I'll upload more chapters, but, I'll try for at least once a week, maybe once every two weeks
Ok now you're just keeping my hopes up for one of my favorite ships
8179551 The project title I made for this was literally TwiSpike Fic
This seems pretty cool. An interesting idea.
Has potential.
Need to change that "human" lie detector part to something else, and change, "new" to "knew" in this sentence:
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Good start. And do try to work in more of, Spike's, description before you go to far into the story. Wings, no wings, build, etc., that kind of thing.
Thanks and good luck with the story. Will be watching.
Looks like a good start. I'm actually surprised that this premise hasn't been done before.
Maybe it's me but Rarity always seemed like the type to be against inner-species marriage. Though I could also see Applejack being against it if you were to emphasize her salt of the earth roots.
8180984 Thanks for the heads up. I'm just hoping I don't fall off the wagon on this story
Rarity's a 'Speciesist'
8185057 lol. It mostly had to do with her practically idolizing Canterlot's high society
He’s screwed.
8217095
Who, Spike, or the Stallion?
8217245
Not Spike.
8217739
Ah. Well, till just have to find out in the next chapter
Well, this random pony doesn't seem like a bad guy, just an honest misunderstanding.
Then Twilight blasts him.
8218586
Lol. Maybe she does, maybe she doesn't. You'll have to wait till the next chapter to find out.
There's no law about interspecies loving.
8248352
Well, obviously. But, a lot of high society Ponies see it as unnatural at best
8248430
The hell with high society crap!!! Only one way to stick it to them.
Awww, I sound like such a helpful student. Yay!
8253817
You should read the ending of chapter 3. You're not so nice. Also, that's where I described a character version of you.
8253895
Ah, well...I could actually see myself making a mistake like that. NEver thought I was a dark grey earth pony, but that is actually pretty cool design.
That grey pony was a idiot! Lol.
8257695
Lol. Well not many ponies know about dragons in the first place, so, I think he's just misinformed
8254287
Thanks. I forgot to ask how your OC looked, and what gender you are, so I just went with something that made sense from a story standpoint
MOOARRRRRR
[i just really hate cliff hangers
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8281812
Don't worry. I'm planning out the next chapter now. And I know how you feel. Every story I've ever read has had a cliff hanger at the end of a chapter, it's like, "What? No, don't end it now!"
8282766
Speaking of that i really need to find a good ending for my story
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That's why I plan the beggining the middle and the end before I start writing
8283401
That is a very good idea sir
Heartbroken and more.
Maybe Flurry Heart can somewhat help Spike to cheer up.
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Maybe, but she's only, like, 3 in this fic
8300788
???
8300967
Nothing says a baby's smile will cheer someone up.
8301028
True enough
I'm going started tracking this story.
8308357
Cool. Thank you
a lovely new chapter to end my night. A good way to end my night.
Now bre-...... I mean kiss!!! ^w^
The Love is real.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading it
8310144
The Spilight/TwiSpike is slowly growing within this fic, and I bet you're just silently begging me to get to the point where they finally kiss
8310320
Yes, yes it is. Now hopefully Spike sees that love
A very nice chapter. Can't wait to see Spike and Twilight have the talk.
8310746
Thank you. And don't worry. That talk is coming in the next chapter
when the title say dragonheart I was think this
8312112
lol. I didn't know this existed until after I started writing this
8312300
There is a dragon movie that name dragon heart too!
8312311
lol. I had nothing else remotely creative to call this though.