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Warren Hutch


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Windfall takes place seven years after FiM's main timeline. The Elements of Harmony have gone their separate ways, but are still close, and all the girls come running to be there on the eve of Fluttershy bringing her first foal with Big Macintosh into the world.

If you enjoyed this story and this fanfiction future extrapolation, please consider reading the sequel Earth & Sky

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The Birthing - Baroness

Oh hey, you finally got around to posting here. I hate reading stuff on DeviantArt.

Gem

Ahh, it's good to see this fic here ^_^

You finally put this on fimfiction? Awesome!

Ah, the story that made Fluttershy/Big Mac my favorite pairing. Good to see that it has finally arrived here.

:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:
This fic is what got me into fanfiction period, not just ponies. It's great to finally see it here, and why won't it let me give it a thumbs up more than once?

Before any of them could answer, a fearsome shriek like a roaring manticore came from the cloistered back room, followed by a voice the group of mares had first heard when the chaos had reached its absolute height at that first Grand Galloping Gala they'd attended so many years ago. "YOU DID THIS TO ME YOU BIG... LUNK-HEADED... BRUTE! NO! YOU KEEP BREATHING! THAT'S RIGHT, TRY TO KEEP BREATHING WHILE I STRANGLE YOUR STUPID HEAD OFF OF YOUR BIG... FAT... RED NECK! LET GO OF ME YOU NAGS! I'M GOING TO STRANGLE HIM! LET ME UP SO I CAN STRANGLE MY HUSBAND!"


In the stunned silence that followed, only the sound of Granny Smith's low chuckle and the rhythmic clack of her rocking could be heard. The old mare smiled fondly as she knitted. "Such a sweet filly. I sure as shootin' weren't so gentle with my husband when I was a-birthin' my first."

Ahem...
THE MOST FUNNIEST THING EVER! Very unexpected of Fluttershy, and Granny Smith's reaction was priceless. amazing story. Everything flows wonderfully, the plot is cute and good, and there's enough details to really get me into the story without boring me to death:P :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::flutterrage::ajsmug::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile::duck:

Um... question. So how do they make it so tht pinkie pies figurine doesnt go bad?

I love the idea of creating a figurines of them all. its wonderful
amazing story, by the way.:rainbowkiss:

755422
Gonna have to say "magic" on the pinkie figurine question. :twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy:

I'm glad to see you on here now!:yay:

Sweet and precious. We need feelgood fics. Now I wanna hug Windy!:twilightsmile:

A wonderful story. Very heartwarming. :twilightsmile: i love the dolls. Magic indeed makes it complete, Twilight.

This:yay:+This:eeyup:= DawwwwwwSPLOSION!!!

OMG I....I...:raritycry::raritycry: SO AWESOME!!!!! WORDS CANT DESCRIBE THE CUTENESS AND D'AWWWWING THAT WENT OVER ME!!!!!

Oh noes, I appear to be compelled to read this amazing story AGAIN!

What a world, what a world! :pinkiehappy:

Glad to see this fic being put onto fimfiction. Excellent work!:pinkiehappy:

I just want to portal over there, sing a song, and set the house on fire

IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE


-DELTA-

tbh that pic confused me a bit haha dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
I thought Flutteryshy was sick, Twilight was crazy, and the others we're rushing to Fluttershy's aid.
Now that I've read the story though, the picture makes a lot more sense :twilightsheepish:

I am not ashamed in any way, shape, or form to say that this masterpiece of a story tugged at my heart-strings.:fluttercry:
when i finished reading this, i felt so full of happiness and joy; i wanted to go out into the world and find someone to fall in love with and be with forever. the only problem with this fact is that i seem to have a curse that forces me to fall head-over-heels in love with someone who will never feel the same way i do about them. All in all though, this is so far the single best fluttershy-romance fic i have ever read; even better than the one that i'm writting. You deserve an award.:moustache::twilightsmile::pinkiesmile::ajsmug::raritywink::yay::rainbowwild::eeyup::moustache:

The Master of Madness, signing off. *starts to tear up in public while writting this* <random guy> "ha! you're crying over a bunch of ponies? what a baby." <me> *stands up and kicks guy in his groin, then stomps on his nose; breaking it* "baby that, you son of a bitch...." *walks away slowly*

Rainbow looks like the only one having a good time. Everyone else looks like a FUHQKINK NOOB.

All I can think whenever I picture Fluttershy and Big Mac living together is the quietest household ever :fluttershyouch: :heart: :eeyup:

Hot damn, very glad to see this one here, as well as all of your others.

I love the futurama reference

755422 Actually, Marzipan is mostly sugar. It won't go bad per se, but it will harden in about a week if not consumed. In anycase, there's no need to worry about it spoiling and stinking up little Winfall's room. Pinkie really IS smart! No magic necessary. :pinkiehappy:

824454 well then, that's a pretty neat little tidbit of information. Thankz XD :heart::heart::pinkiehappy:

Not bad.

But I can't take that comic at the end there seriously at all. Big Mac looks like this guy: static2.dmcdn.net/static/video/501/361/26163105:jpeg_preview_medium.jpg?20110802053404
I guess it's kinda bad to laugh at that... but seriously... :rainbowlaugh:

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Another amusing thing to think about is how Big Macintosh will react to Windfall's first coltfirend...

I was wondering why this was so high on the Popular Stories list. Nifty comic.

:yay: Cutest. Story. Ever! Tears were definetly shed. :raritycry: And the idea of making all the little pony toys was just fantastic :twilightsmile:

Take all my thumbs and D'AWWWWWWWS:applejackunsure::pinkiesmile::raritystarry::rainbowkiss:

Could have sworn that I'd read this before.... I have to read now...:fluttershyouch:

Great to see this story here! I love the future lives you gave the mane six. The character interactions are brilliantly done.

*spaz attack*
most. adorable. pairing. EVER.
:yay::heart::eeyup:

Loved it but hated the ending.:unsuresweetie: Not that I hated HOW it ended, i just hate that it ended period. I wanted to hear more of future twi, AJ, RD, pinkie, Rarity, Spike, the CMC, etc.

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Psst! Hey! Hey buddy! Look over Here! :raritywink:

I HAVE ONE WORD FOR YOU MISTER, JUST ONE WORD!!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:D'AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I just wanted to say I love your characterization of Sweetie Belle here. She's so full of zest!

Heh heh, you know why Fluttershy's a close guess? Becuase she's the same voice as Pinkie. Heh heh :trollestia:

I am higly amused by the dialogue between Zecora and Redheart. :rainbowlaugh: Highly.

By the way, thank you for that last line. That song is now in my head. :derpytongue2:

I'm very impressed with your writing. :pinkiehappy: Keep it up!

I hate this shipping. I really do. But this story looks so interesting, I think I'll get over it. We'll see.

"shiny little surry with a fringe on top" :ajsmug: yeah, I caught that.. :raritywink: :rainbowlaugh:

Very good, by the way! :yay:

Well damn, I now have to make my way to the nearest hospital, as I think my heart has stopped!!!!:pinkiegasp:
Wish it was lasted longer, but I guess Windfall didn't want to wait to enter the world!!

Now on to the sequel!!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I loved this when I read it on deviantart. so glad to see it here.:yay::eeyup::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::raritystarry::twilightsmile::moustache:

it's impossible for me to see "And magic makes it all complete" without hearing Rebecca song it in my head. :twilightsheepish:

Mmm, that's some genuine Apple Family condescending anti-intellectualism there.:ajbemused:

870090
What exactly are you on about here? :trixieshiftright:

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Nothing really, just venting about a thing that bugs me. It's not meant as a slight on you or anything.

870256
Didn't really take it as a slight :pinkiesmile:, just kinda wondering what exactly you're responding to. :rainbowhuh:

870270
Just the whole "We don't need any of your dang 'proper medical care', dagnabbit" thing Granny Smith has got going on here. (I agree with Redheart.)

870368
That's kind of what I figured.

We're kind of getting into a grey area here where it becomes a question of whether an "expert" can compel someone to follow their advice. Doctors and nurses are experts (hopefully) but they are not infallible or omniscient, and frankly Granny Smith is within her rights to look out for her family the way she sees fit. I don't see that as condescending, frankly I find being compelled by someone claiming expertise "for your own good" is more condescending.

Zecora comes to the situation with generations of wisdom and experience from her traditions, Nurse Redheart brings all the advances and techniques modern medical science has to offer, and I see Cabbage Leaf as kind of a synthesis of the two. (Plus I have a cousin who is a licensed midwife.) The whole point is that there are multiple perspectives that all have some measure of validity, and its up to the individual or family unit to decide what way works best for them.

So I wouldn't call it anti-intellectual, so much as giving intellectualism equal weight with other viewpoints and not automatically crowning it the superior perspective. :pinkiesmile:

Luvly!
Great story all around.
Writing was fantastic, plot (that word was ruined for me by this fandom...) heartwarming, slapstick moments hilarious (not to mention :flutterrage:!)...
And I always love a good wovey-dovey ship.
Journcy Out
:twilightsmile:

I'm 100% sure that approaching supersonic craft should be completely silent (including sonic boom). Only once it passes by or departs it can be heard.

Honestly, from the picture, It looks like a sad story... But hey dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png
I dealt with it.

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